SKR OS : Pain of Separation !!

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma
Sumi dear... It's a very beautiful os... The way u portrayed the trio's relationship is marvellous...
Sumi dear I am amazed after reading this os

Thank u anokhi dear !!! 😳

I am glad that u liked it !!! 😃

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Shivam...
Beautiful OS
Its great to read a piece of work which displays how strong the trio's bond were

Good work Sumi

Thanks for appreciation Shivam bhaiya !!!! 😃

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: radianteyes.
This is a beautiful piece of work sumi
Well done
U sometimes make me doubt about your age

Thank u charvi dear !!!! 😃😳

Yes, I am 16 years old but it doesn't bother creativity and maturity mind. 😳

Very happy that u liked it !!!! 😃

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shabari14
Sumi di... Awesome! You have created such a beautiful OS! 👏

This OS made me smile like crazy, Sumi di. Please keep on writing more stories, so I can comment on them, like them, and cherish them. Thanks again!

Gowri

Thank u gowri !!! 😃

If I will get more ideas then I will write more and more !!😃

If u have any ideas in your mind , plzzz feel free to pm me. I will surely write it for u dear !!! 😃😳

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Sumi, I am so sorry for taking so long to read your sweet OS, honey, but my life the past week has been so busy and stressful. I promised you I would eventually read it, and I have.

It's absolutely amazing! Divinely amazing! 👏👏

I just adore your characterization of Ram, Sita and Lakshman.

You have detailed the beautiful relationship between the three so well! Lakshman truly seemed like their son in your OS, how I wish I can see this come alive onscreen!

And awww, Hanumanji is adorable. 😳

Loveee this, Sumi, it has really cheered me up!

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Amit

@GunDaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

wow u write so well Sumi 👍🏼👏 so ur love for Lakshman is uncondtional 😆😆 and yes that flashback scene was also cute with Sita 😳

and yes i like the Ram-Lakshman bonding after flashback ..so all in all it was really nice keep it up . 👍🏼

Edited by -KadaKLonda- - 9 years ago

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hi! Sumi!

This is my opinion. I loved your fic. The pain in Lakshman was very evident and so was the bonding between Ram Sita and Lakshman.

😊

You wanted my advice...lemme tell you that the only way to improve is to keep on writing and reading...read lots of good stuff and you'll improve no doubt.

Keep it up👍🏼

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