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"SIYA KE RAM OS"
"PAIN OF SEPARATION "
Written by Sumi
Hello everyone !!! This is my OS which I wanted to write it from long and finally I have written it today !!!! 😃
Hope u will love it !!!! 😳
And plzzz Forgive my grammatical mistakes !!! 😳
All tamatars and chappals r also welcome heartily !!! 😆
It was night and there was a full moon . Stars were twinkling bright and everyone were sleeping peacefully as usual.
Ram and all monkey army were sleeping peacefully inside their respective tents .
But there was one who was not able to sleep that night, he was lakshman .
He has moved out silently without disturbing his Ram bhaiya .
Lakshman was roaming all around and seeing the mother bird caring her young ones .
Tears roll down from his face seeing such a beautiful sight as he was missing her Sita bhabhi who was just like her mother terribly .
He sit down on ground under a big tree . A big smile comes on his face when he remembers the day when her bhabhi becomes happy and says that u r not just my devar , u r my dearest son too .
FLASHBACK : DURING THE STAY AT PANCHVATI -
Lakshman ... Lakshman , Sita call him again and again but she found him missing in their hut .
She moves out of her hut and see all around and worries that where is lakshman.
She then moves to Ram who was meditating and says : Swami , From morning I have not seen lakshman . I am worried that where is he ?
Food is also prepared and Lakshman is no where Swami .
Where he has gone ?
Ram stands with a gentle smile on his face and he calm down her : Sitae , don't worry !!
He has told me that he is going out for some work and he will come back .. He has told me to tell this to u and ask me to not wait for me and have the food.
Sita feels a bit relieved hearing this : Thank god !!
I was very worried about him . And what he said that have the food , how come I can have the food without serving the food to u and lakshman . I will not eat the food till he doesn't returns .
Ram smiles: But Sitae ...
Sita : No but , I will only have food ehen my lakshman will come.
Ram agrees because he understand that Sita loves lakshman as a mother who doesn't have food until his son has eaten the food.
Just then lakshman arrives sweating but still he have a big smile on his face .
Sita showing fake anger : Lakshman where were u since morning? Did u have any idea that how much I was worried for u .
Lakshman : Bhabhi , forgive your this devar but I have a special surprise for u .
Ram & Sita : Surprise ..
Lakshman : Yes , I want to show u bhabhi . Plzz come with me .
Sita smiles : OK !!
Lakshman takes a piece of cloth and ties it around Sita's eyes ,
Sita smiling : What is this lakshman ???
Lakshman :This cloth will only open once u reach there , come with me bhabhi .
Ram [ smiling ] : Why r u behaving like a child today lakshman , what so special u r going to show us .
Lakshman :U can say me child today , no offence there . But this is a surprise that u will only know once u reach there.
Come with me bhaiya bhabhi .
He takes them towards a river and Ram gets amazed seeing the surprise . Ram was about to speak but lakshman asks him to not speak anything through sign language .
Ram agrees .
Lakshman then untie the cloth which was tied around Sita 's eyes .
A big smile comes on Sita face that Ram and lakshman both has never seen on her beautiful face and she gets so amazed to see the surprise .
It was a beautiful swing decorated with all sort of flowers, stem and leaves.The swing seat was covered with flowers and it was attached with the big peepal tree.
Sita looked above at the point of attachment and she found that lakshman has beautifully carved the name of her husband and her .
It was beautifully written over there-
Siya- Ram .
Lakshman asks hesistantly that how is the surprise ?
Sita : Lakshman , why r u asking such a silly question ? This is not just a swing , it is the swing of heaven for me because you have made it with such hard work and love for us ,
Lakshman you r not just my devar , you r like my dearest son too. I am very thankful to god that he has given me such a caring son . I am very proud of you lakshman .
Tears roll down from lakshman eyes hearing such a appreciation from his mother Sita.
Lakshman touches her feet ,thanks her and she blesses him a long life.
Sita showing fake sadness : Still lakshman the swing is not complete !
Lakshman worries : What is not complete bhabhi ? Just order me , your son will surely do it for u.
Sita : Where is your name on the swing ?
Lakshman : I have not carved my name because this is only for u and bhaiya.
Sita : No u have made this , your name should be written first .
Lakshman : Never bhabhi , I will not write my name before u and bhaiya.
Sita says a bit sternly : Lakshman... Its my order that you have to write your name.
Ram also agrees : Yes lakshman ... Its not just your bhabhi order , its my too.
Lakshman : But bhaiya
Ram-Sita : We will not hear your but today , just do it .
Hearing this lakshman goes on top of tree and carves his name. He comes down,
Ram and Sita : Now how u have written your name ?
Lakshman : Now what happen ?
Ram :Look there !
It was written there -
Siya-Ram
Lakshman
Lakshman : What wrong in that bhaiya ?
Sita : Why have u written your name such down ?
Lakshman smiling : Bhaiya , bhabhi , I have written my name down because I had taken a decision that my duty is to serve u both unconditionally and as I am your servant , I can never think of linking my name with u both .
Tears roll down from Ram and Sita face to see a such a love from lakshman.
Ram hugs him tight and Sita looks smiling.
Ram says proudly : We r truly blessed to have u lakshman . There is no brother like u in the whole world and never will .
Lakshman says: Thanks a lot bhaiya and bhabhi !
Sita sit on swing and Ram goes to swing her but she stops her saying : Wait Swami... Lakshman had made this swing so he has the first right to swing me .
Lakshman look shocked : But bhabhi !
Ram : I agree with Sita. Lakshman u have the first right to swing her. No more questions , swing her .
Lakshman smiles : Ok , I am doing this because u and bhabhi have forced me to do so .
Ram and Siya burst into giggles.
Lakshman swing Sita and Ram looks at them with admiring eyes.
FLASHBACK ENDS.
Lakshman happiness suddenly turns into sadness when he thinks about Sita now in Lanka .
Lakshman was missing his mother Sita terribly and each moment was becoming sadder and sadder and says :
God , when this darkness will over in our lives and happiness will enter in our lives . Now please give us light . This separation is becoming harder for me now. Please God remove this darkness from our lives.
He then began crying and lets his pain out in form of tears.
Ram who was sleeping inside wakes up and see that lakshman is no here . He goes out and sees him crying badly.
He moves to his dearest Lakshman and says : Lakshman , my brother !
Lakshman hearing this quickly wipes his tears thinking that he can't become weak in front of his brother , he has to be strong so that his brother doesn't become weak.
Ram : Lakshman , what happen?
Lakshman : Nothing bhaiya.
Ram : Why r u lying Lakshman ?
Lakshman [ hardly able to control himself]: No bhaiya , I am not lying .
Ram : Till now u have console me by standing beside me as a strong pillar because u think that if u will become weak then who will control me. But I know u r the one who is the more sadder than us . I have been separated from my dear wife but u have been separated from your dear mother and your bhabhi.Today I feel sad if u doesn't let your emotions out of your heart .
Hearing this Lakshman hugs his brother and cries his heart out : Bhaiya , I am missing my bhabhi and mother Sita.
Lakshman : I wish that I have not agree to the order of Bhabhi that day then this day would have not come ,
I wish that I have not drawn lakshman rekha and leave bhabhi in hut.
I wish that I have agreed your order instead of bhabhi .
I wish that bhabhi would not forced me to come to u.
This all just happen because of me , I am feeling guilty to the hell. Why have I done this? Because of me u and bhabhi has to suffer so much , Forgive me bhaiya .
Ram : No lakshman , all this had not happened because of you. Its fate .
Whatever is written in our fate cannot be change. Anything that is going to happen , it is going to happen , no one can change or stop the happenings.
Good and Bad times r just like the wheel . If the good time is there , then bad time will also come and if bad time is there then good time will also come.
Remember Lakshman Everything happens for good . If this is happening then there is also something good in it.
Lakshman : What good is there in it bhaiya ?
Ram : Lakshman , May be, God has chosen me to defeat Ravan .The only thing is that for fulfilling this task , we have to go through so many difficulties in our lives
Lakshman agrees.
On the other side Sita was sitting under a tree in Ashoka vatika and remembering the sweet moments spent with her husband Ram and her dearest son Lakshman . She is missing that how Ram and Lakshman used to make her happy by doing silly things.
She smiled plus also tears roll down from her face.
Sita : Lord and Lakshman plz come and get me rid from Ravan . Each day is gradually taking my life. I am not able to bear the pain of separation from my dearest ones. How my Lord and Lakshman r spending the days without me.
Plz come fast and give severe punishment to Ravan for his cruel deeds. Ravan u will get such punishment that u have never thought in your dreams. Tomorrow my lord and my dear lakshman will enter lanka and I am sure they will defeat u because evil can never win by good.
Saying this she sleeps hoping that the light will soon come in her life.
Ram [ calmly] : Lakshman u will get your mother and bhabhi Sita and I will get my dearest wife soon . Tomorrow we will start our journey to free Sita from Ravan in Lanka .
See this ocean waves is also making noise and becoming bigger saying to us that go and defeat Ravan.
Lakshman : Yes bhaiya , our good time will come soon .
Ram [angrily] : Ravan , your end is coming near to u.
But tears rolls down from both Ram and Lakshman faces .
Ram and Lakshman both wipe their tears and says : Now its your turn Ravan , now u going to cry for the rest of your life.
Lakshman : Yes bhaiya , Ravan has to pay a big amount for his cruel deeds.
Saying this they both left to sleep in their tent.
Hanuman sees all this from behind a tree and tears roll down from his face too .
Hanuman : Lord , Brother Lakshman you will surely win . U will get reunited to mother Sita very soon .
Happiness and light is going to make way in your lives.
Ravan get ready , your end is approaching u in form of Ram and Lakshman !!!!
THE END
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