SKR OS : Pain of Separation !!

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This was so beautiful Sumi!❤️

You have a great power of imagination.Amazing!

Keep writing!

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hai sumi😊

Good one dear. 👏👏👏Do write more. 👏👏

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

It was beautifully written Sumi! I so wish they could have shown something like this but our mahaan CV's! Keep writing more!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 14

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

This was such a sweet OS! I guess very few people have captured Lakshman's pain after Seeta-haran!

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Sanjana

@SanjanaKhan_2

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Its very beautiful di. I loved it very much. Really sorry for commenting late had exam. Please keep writing more. And when will u update ur vanvaas news os?? Cant wait anymore. Please update soon.

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Pooja

@moviefan-pooja

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

good work, sumi!!👏👏👏

the relationship of mother-son between lakshman and sita has been established very well!! and I love how hanuman too feels their pain when seeing ram and lakshman like that. overall an awesome os.

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saranya

@saranya.saran

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Very well depicted emotions...😭

Pleasure reading such a fantastic OS...

U rocked👏👏

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

Sparkler

+ 11

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Sumi its beautiful! The bonding is brought out so well! Loved it so much dear. Keep writing more and more.

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Arijit

@Arijit007

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

this is absolutly awesome. your writing so much better than the cv's.

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Rati

@rati_pandya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Awesome post sumi. I have always loved this bhabhi devar jodi. This bonding was shown very little in the show. Siya is always cold towards lakshman in the show.

U showed the correct emotions. Do right more.

😊

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