ISHRA FF 'JAZBA' a strong desire, Part 45,pg-108,22nd nov

Hai friends.I want to write a story on ishra please support me .❤️
so friends my story name is JAZBA.This is my first story so please koyi mistake hojaye tho please forgive me...
Character sketch and prologue coming soonnn ❤️ ]CHARECTER SCETCH:









Raman Kumar Bhalla

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Hi dear
Congratulations on your first story dear
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Welcome to writers world .

Character sketch and prologue added... 😊

I will try to update 1st part soon ❤️

Part 1.

Bhalla mantion
A handsome boy sleeping in a king sized bed.Hearing a loving voice he opened his eyes rubbing his eyes he ask
Raman:Sone do na maa itni jaldi kya hai

Thoshi:Raman mera bacha utja.

Raman:kya hai maa.ab time kaha hua hai mujhe aur sona hai,good night.

Thoshi:oh khothe good night nahi good morning tujhe patha hai time kya hua hai subhah ki 10 bajchuke hai.

Raman:kya?aap pahale kyu nahi uttaya mujhe?

Thoshi:Alo ab yeh bhi meri problem hai.Tujhe pata hai mein tujhe kabse uttane ki koshish kar rehi hu.Mihir ki dus bar phone aachuke hai.

Raman:oh ho meri sherni maa guzza mat karo na.mein jaldi jake fresh hoke atha hu.aaj frshers jo arehe hai.

Thoshi:Teek hai jaldi ja.

Raman:ok meri sweetu maa.saying he kissess thoshijis cheek.

Thoshi:chal makkhan mat lega jake nahale mein nashta lagathi hu.

Raman:ha jaldi ata hu.

Mumbai university girls hostel
A beautiful girl running here and there cursing her best friend mihika.

Ishita:Arey miku yeh kya hai abhi tak tera beauty bath khatam nahi hua jaldi karo na baba.hume late ho reha hai.

Mihika:o ho ishu aa rehi hu,tu chilla mat na.

Ishita:mein kaha chilla rehi hu tujhe pata haina aaj college me humara pehala din hai.

Mihika:ha ha pata hai bas arehi hu.

After some time both girls are ready to go college.ishu was praying to god.

Mihika:arey ab tujhe late nahi ho rehi hai.

Ishita:bas kar pagal aake murugan se pray kar ki aaj ka din ache se beet jaye.thuje patha haina kithni mushkil se ayi hu mein yehan.

Mihika:ab tu senti mat hoja chal scooty nikal hum chalthe hai.

Ishita:ha jaldi chalthe hai

At the same time in college

Romi:mihir meine bata diya thoshi aunty ko ki woh raman bhai ko jaldi college bheje.

Mihir:ha teek hai.arey romi humara abhi kaha geya?

Romi:geye honge naye ledikiyon pe line marne keliye.chal hum bhi chalte hai kya patha hume bhi koyi new wali mil jaye.

Mihir:ha chal yar thap tak raman bhi aajeyenga.

At the corridoor

Romi:kaha geya yeh abhi?

Mihir:wahi honge jahan ledikiyon ki entry ho rehe honge.

Romi:ohoo gate ke pass.

They both went to college gate,

Romi:kya bhai abhi ab tak tujhe ek bhi ledki pasand nahi ayi?

Abhi:nhi yar mein tho bas dekh reha tha ki kahi bhai tho nahi aa rehe.

Mihir:ha ha jaise ki hume patha nahi thu yeha kya dekh rehe the.

Romi:dude dekho raman bhai aa rehe hai.

Three oh them smiled seeing raman entering the college campus.they were about to aproach raman suddenly they hear a loud sound "Thud"

Mihir/romi/abhi:Raman bhai...

So friends here is the first part of my story.please koyi galti huyi tho please maff kar dena.pehli bar story likh rehi hu na isliye please like my story.and also leve your comments.love u all...

Such a cute update ishita nad ramn will study together please update nexy part soon waiting

Congrats for your first story