ISHRA FF 'JAZBA' a strong desire, Part 45,pg-108,22nd nov - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Ishita was teasing raman at the time os stiching😆
Raman asked her to say yes so they will have their own baby😉 raman is so cute
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update dear... Raman is soo naughty yaar... Plzzz update next part asap... Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow so beautiful n cute updt love it he ask her to say yes for thier own baby
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART-14



Its about 11 am,raman reached his house,when he entered inside the house thoshiji was standing on the dooor way.

Thoshiji:puthar tu ageya.kaha tha tu raath bhar tujhe patha hai mujhe teri kithni chintha ho rehi thi.agar kal khar nahi aarehe hai tho mujhe ek baar batha tho dethe.

Raman:maa..maa..relax.mein teek hun.kal college me kuch problems hogeya tha isliye nahi aa paya mein aur kuch nahi,aap chintha nath kijiye.

Thoshiji:accha teek hai tu jake fresh hoke aa mein tere liye nashtha legathi hun.

Raman:nahi maa meine nashtha karliya hai ab bas mujhe dhode der sona hai.

Thoshiji:teek hai tu ja(saying they shared a hug and raman went to his room.)

After freshening up raman comes to his bed to rest.he was thinking about the happenings which happened between him and ishita.he closed his eyes to feel her near him.he wanted to make her understand that how much he loves her.

"Ab iss madrasan ko kaise samjau ki uske bina ab ek pal bhi nahi reha jatha mujhse"mujhe legtha hai kahi na kahi woh bhi mere liye kuch feel karthi hai.lekin kuch kuch tho baath hai jiski wajeh se woh express nahi kar parehi hai mujhse.mihir ne bathaya tha ki woh mihika se mere baare me sab kuch batha diya hai tho ab woh bhi mere help karegi.lekin madrasan ki man me kya hai yeh kisse puchu.woh khud tho kabhi nahi bathayegi mujhse, ithna ziddhi jo hai,ab jald se jald kuch aur sochna hoga mujhe."idea"mihir se kehake mihika se madrasan ki number le letha hun(saying taking hia phone he called mihir)

Mihir:hello bhai kya hua kuch kaam tha kya?

Raman:han mujhe teri ek help chahiye tha.

Mihir:kaisa halp bhai?

Raman:tu na mihika se meri madrasan ki number lake de.

Mihir:bhai mein kaise?

Raman:please na mihir, tujhe humari yaari ki kasam.

Mihir:teek hai mein koshish kartha hun.

Raman:jaldi han,(saying he disconnected the call)

"Ab ayega maza.Tum dekhna madrasan i am not going to fail,but will win you somehow,it's not completely tough'tujhe mein apna banakar hi rehunga'"saying he began to wait for mihirs message.

After so much pleadings mihir got ishitas number from mihika and he send it to raman.the buzzing noise frome the phone made him turn his attention to it,he quickly called on har number and it was ringing.

Same time girls hostel.,

Mihika:ishu teri phone baj rehi hai.

Ishita:meri nahi hogi teri hogi.mera phone mere pass nahi hai.

Mihika:arey buddhu dekh yeh tere hi phone hai.mein leke ayi thi college se.(saying mihika gives ishitas phone to her)

Ishita:yeh kiska number hai?nahi utathi mein bajne do isse.waise bhi kisi se baath karne ki mood me nahi hun mein ab.(saying she ignored his calls)

Raman:yeh madrasan phone kyun nahi utha rehi hai(saying he began to call her again and again)

After so much buzzing noise from her phone she attend the phone call.

Raman:kya hai madrasan phone uthane mein ithne der kyun legadi?so rehi thi kya?

Ishita:Excuse me kaun?

Raman:accha ithni jaldi mera awaaz bhi bhool geyi madrasan?

Ishira:raman aap?

Raman:haan mein,kyun kisi aur ka call expect kar rehi thi kya?

Ishita:bakwas band karo aur phone rekho.(saying she was about to cut the call but raman was quick enogh to stop her)

Raman:phone kaatne ki bare mein soch na bhi math madrasan.naho tho phone ki baje mein khud tere hostel aajaunga.

Ishita:(taking a breath)kya chahiye aapko?

Raman:"tum"sirf tum chahiye mujhe.aur tujhse kuch baathein bhi karni hai mujhe.

Ishita:kya bathein?

Raman:arey teri boyfriend hun mein.pyaar kartha hun tumse tho kuch pyaar bhari bathein hi karege na.

Ishita:nahi karni mujhe aapse koyi bhi bathein.

Raman:kyun darthi ho mujhse?kahi mere pyaar me na padh jaye.

Ishita:mein kyun daroongi aapse?bas mujhe aapse baath nahi karni hai isliye.

Raman:haye meri jhansi ki rani jab tum guzza hothi hona tab teri naakh laal ho jathi hai.dekh ke man kartha hai ki mein tujhe kha jaun.

Ishita:chee ravan kumar,aisi baathe math karo mujhse.

Raman:kyun?kuch kuch hotha hai kya dil me?

Ishita:shut up,aisa kuch bho nahi hothi uai mujhe.aap na phone rekho.

Raman:naahi mein rekhunga aur naahi tujhe rekhne dunga.

Ishita:(getting fedup by him) raman aap aisa kyun karthe ho mere saath.mujhe preshan math karo,meine kahana mein aapse pyaar nahi karthi.

Raman:lekin mein tho kartha hu na aur tum bhi mujhse jald se jald pyar karne legegi.

Ishita:accha,bada confidence hai aapko.

Raman:saccha wala pyaar hai madrasan mera,kuch aisa waisa nahi.aur ab jo tumne mujhe "aap"karke bulane legi huna ussi ee mujhe patha chal chuka hai ki tere dil mein kuch tho hai mere liye.

Hearing his words she realised actually she addressed him as"aap"with respect,she was nothing to say anything to him.

"Soch lo madrasan tujhe ithna pyaar karne wala ashiq kahi nahi milega"keha raha hun mein,

Ishita:(stammering) mein...mein phone rekh rehi hun.

Raman:arey madrasan i love you tho bolke rekh.(without listening to him she disconnected the call and run back to her room)

He sat on the bed crossing his legs and hugging a pillow in his arms.he was thinking about their phone call and smiling continuously at himself for troubling his jhansi ki rani.raman threw himself on the bed spreading his hands closed his eyes dreamily.

"Kya hai meri madrasan,mere har baath pe naa bolthi hai,pagal madrasan.phir bhi uss naa ko mein haan me badal dunga,jald se jald..

On the other side ishita sat on the bed placing a pillow on her lap and began to think about raman.

"Ab tho haddh ho geyi,usko mera phone number bhi mil geya yai ab hamesha mujhe phone karke pareshan karenge.kya karu mein uska?" "Waise ishu kahina kahi tujhe raman se baath karna bohoth acche legne legi hai(he said with a dreamy smile),lekin tujhe woh tere chehare pe nahi lani hai,specially uss ravan ke samne..saying she smiled at her own thoughts.

Next morning at girls hostel.

Ithu enna ishu unge facelu.,(mihika asked coming near to ishita)

Ishita:ennathu?(what?)

Mihika:kuch nahi.,aaj tera chehara kuch zyada tho nahi chamak rehi hai?kahi yeh raman bhai ke wajhse tho nahi.

Ishita closed her mouth with her palm and widened her eyes,after a few minutes she freed her mouth.

"Ishu tune meti muh kyun band kiya sach tho keha rehi thi mein dekho mirror pe kithni chamak rehi hai tu"

Ishita:chup kar tu.aaj kal tu kuch zyada hi bolne legi hai.ab bas kar teri bakwas aur chalo college

Mihika:haye haye raman bhai se milne keliye ithni jaldi.

Ishu:miku meine kaha na chup kar tu aur chalo.nahi tho thappad khayegi(saying she smiled unknow to mihika)

At bhalla house,

Raman was pacing excitedly in his room,he was feeling very happy to meet his mdrasan.whenever he closed his eyes he could only saw his madrasan.

"Oh god day by day i am getting mad about my madrasan,ab usse dekhe bina ek pal bhi reha nahi jatha mujhse"(he said to himself ruffling his hair)"
"Meri pagal madrasan"




So frieds here is the 14th part of jazba.thank you for all my readers to loving my story..and please give more lokes amd comments to mu story pleaseee...so enjoyyy...




Edited by ANJUMUSKAN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update dear
raman is so sweet
he gt her no through mihika
n called her to tease her
ishita also started liking him
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update dear... Update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
read both parts together
injection scene was nice...
liked it when raman asked ishita to say yes to
him so dat dey also can have their own baby...
raman got ishita's number through mimi...
liked ishra phn convo...
mihika-ishita talk was good...
ishita is also falling for raman...
update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
part 13 is superb and too good loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
So raman got her number
He called her ishita is also liking him
Raman is desprate to meet ishita
Mihika was teasing ishita
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely story .
Read up to part 3 .
Will read one by one and comment accordingly.
Curious yo know how Raman will find the strange girl who is pulling him to herself .
Nice attempt

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