ArHi SS#2: A Fool. Th#3. Link Pg 1. Completed

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Sonali Tripathi

@Chem_ystery

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#821

Take your time dear, we will wait, yous stories are worth it

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Rami

@Rami92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#822

Lovd this ff😳

Its gud to c yu back wd an awedomatic one again😃

The name intrigued me to read thx one not tht if it wasnt unique i wud hv skippd thz😉

I always hv thought tht arnv was a person who cud take more love as tht was wat he was devoid f in the shw

I wondrred why there wasnt tht great f a bond wth nani n arnv and arnv n garimaas the one wth anji n arnv

but yu fulfilld tht here😃

I simply luvd d cute teen ful akash n payal😉n the convo arnv n payal had was wonderful evrytym😆

Shyam😃lovd his charcterisation here😳he s a gud don lovable bro n dutiful damad n carin hubby😃

Arnv n garima 👏the way garima had expressed herself wd arnv n a hope tht he wud undrrstand was really super😆

N thru all odds khushi still luvd him thruout fr the arnv n asr😆but denial was her mantra😉

The way she felt upset evrytym tht arnv s nt luving hr r xpressing the same was👏

Ram n gautami😳cute couple😳ppl who hb best intrset fr othrs r hard to find n thy r one among the few odds😆

Throughly njyd thz ff😳

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#823

Chapter Eight:

I can understand Nani's and Anjali's love for Arnav, but I think that Anjali crossed some limits, and Nani just asked for a chance, which was reasonable enough.

I almost melted reading the end of the chapter... Arnav begging for a chance and for Khushi to let him rectify his mistakes, his repentance, his comfort for Khushi.

Thank you for writing a redemption story. Thanks a lot.

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Nancy Rodrigues

@nashnini

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#824

😊

Chapter 10 was super... Right or wrong... Society does bog us down .

Often fear takes over good sense n faith..

Could understand Garima s fears for her family n specially her girls

And as always... I luv Arnav ...

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Tomatoes are rotten 😋

@rotten.tomato

Explorer

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#825

R!
So,I stayed up late last night. around 3 and finished upto 9b..and trust me it was all worth it. I really love the pace you have set while delivering these updates. Glad you haven't rushed anything. Glad khushi didn't gave up so easily and ran to his arms at his first sign of weakness. Glad Raizada for once used his sane thoughts and not his temper to drive him forward to force khushi into marriage. This story has a simplistic charm to it that intrigue a reader deeper into it.

However, had a hard time imagining a 13 year old Akash-payal-Sheetal pairing. 😆 and I have same sets of questions after every update but your notes helped with it. This is a beautifully penned story and i am looking forward to finish it in next sitting👍🏼

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#826

It was a gr8 journey of being in fool...the character was explored to certain level which we truly wanted from the actual piece that z theshow...anyways ram gautami was like fresh breathe to the story...it was awesome