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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 9 years ago

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

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Posted: 9 years ago

For a moment, I was so scared Khushi was going to give in to the emotional blackmail of the two Raizada ladies but I loved the way she reacted and did not give in to their pleas. Khushi was right in her feeling of betrayal when both Anjali and Nani talked to her about Arnav. They loved her no doubt but when it came to Arnav, he obviously comes first. Even though only a few days before Nani told him that he shouldn't expect everyone to forgive him and that even she hasn't forgiven him for what he did, at the end of the day he is her grand son and she does want his happiness. While Nani only requested Khushi to consider giving him a second chance (both for him and herself), Anjali outright went and asked her to marry him! Selfish though it was, you perfectly justified Anjali's behavior with her own admission that nothing matters to her more than her brother...not even her husband.

I so so loved Khushi in this update! What she said about not having an issue with his misunderstanding but just his way of dealing with it. Everything...every single thing she said was just bang on! 👏

And that she did not give in even after the immense respect for the two Raizada ladies was awesome. I loved that she held her respect and her family's intact! But it truly was wrenching to see Khushi take comfort from the same person she wished to avoid - the cause of all her miseries. She told him he doesn't deserve anyone and after all her struggles and pushing him away, he was still there trying to provide her the comfort she so needed. I do feel slightly bad for Arnav even if he does deserve all that is happening to him 😕

Arnav has finally convinced everybody else that his happiness lies with Khushi and that he was a fool to let her go before but he needs to understand that the most important person he needs to convince is Khushi and he still is nowhere near convincing her of his true intent this time around...he has to earn her respect, trust, forgiveness and love. Neither his grandmother's reasoning or his reasons now are good enough and what Khushi wants he doesn't have...yet.

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 9 years ago

Me me me wow second to comment

Super super

And Khushi totally justified in her thinking and surprised for once that Arnav has a calm mind and so sweet to take her wishes into consideration

Absolutely wonderful way of writing such a joy

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update dear.. Anjali n naniji acting so selfish as they love arnav uncondtionally but what about the pain khushi recived from arnav..!! how can they ask for a chance as they witnessed everything that happened at engagement.. :/ they are not trying to understand or feel to which extent khushi's heart broken!!

I totally agree with khushi that his past maybe cruel but that does not give him the right to insult others like they have no respect or value!! please please make arnav's redemption a bit harder.. i was so disappointed that in ipk, arnav got her forgiveness very easily !! No hard feeling towards arnav but he should punished for his every wrong words that he hurled on khushi!!

loved the update.. thanks for pm!!

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

its beautiful :)

i wonder how does one gather enuf courage to mk amends to sthg as disastrous.. n hw does one forgive n forget...
bt then.. i guess tht is wht love is :) :)

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Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Saiyyu, you have done an awesome job with this chapter... 👏👏

Nani's plight. Anjali's Helplessness, Arnav's self-doubt, Khushi's own battle... Full on emotions chapter 👍🏼 You made me shed tears. I swear, I did.

Arnav's love for his family is the best thing about him. The devotion he gives for them to the point of hurting someone is too much yet endearing 😳😳 He is a lovable man but this earnest passion to save his family from any deception makes him do things blindly. But Khushi is right, no rationalizing would be enough for the hurt he'd caused her.

A woman's heart is delicate to the level of breaking just by a small scratch. It's a thing to be dealt with carefully. It is equally lenient. If she thinks the person deserves forgiveness he would be forgiven easily but for that he has to toil. Arnav Raizada has to toil!

Coming to Anjali's selfless love. She stumped me with her love towards her brother. How can a sister literally beg on behalf of her brother? 😲😲 She knows her brother has done erroneous deeds to Khushi. Just being sorry wouldn't justify his actions and heal Khushi's wounds nor would it make her forgive him. He has to earn it. That was tendentious, damn it!

I would NEVER do that for my brother 😡😡😡

The whole Khushi-Nani scene made me cry. Yes, that is where I cried so badly. It was touching, Saiyyu. So so touching and the emotions were beautifully highlighted. Hats off! ⭐️

Khushi Kumari Gupta, the strong woman never let the women's plight take her adrift. I appreciate that. She kept her self-respect intact. This woman is made of something 😆 Well, it is also clear that she wants a particular emotion from Arnav to be the reason behind his sudden interest in marrying her. Yes, Khushi, go for it. She shouldn't settle for anything less. 😃😃

Arnav Singh Raizada, buckle up man! You are in for a long fight! 😆😆

And that closure scene. That, made me emotional. He's already in love, so deep. 😳 It's about time he realized Saiyyu 😉

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

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Posted: 9 years ago

Feeling terribly bad fr khushi.. n I hate arnav wen he use his trump card wen she is vulnerable. He feels sorry n guilt towards her..wat abt love.. I think dat wer khushi is gonna take d lead...also anjali n nani pleading to her. Thanks for the pm..

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mklam

@mklam

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Posted: 9 years ago

A girl after my own heart...I did wonder how Arnav forgave himself so easily in the show - I wanted him to repent, grovel at her feet (ok, maybe that's asking too much:)) but at the very least earn his forgiveness but the CVs botched it up.

I read chapter 7 again to understand this one better. No girl can ever forget the hurt that easily - when her engagement gets broken with the groom to be hurling the worst insults at her) How easy is it for Anjali to forget Khushi's pain and only focus on her brother's wants? Nani did try to make an attempt albeit half-heartedly to understand Khushi's pain.

You've highlighted Anjali's and Nani's selfishness very well in this chapter. In the show, Khushi was too soft, too forgiving and could easily be influenced. Your Khushi is made of sterner stuff. You've also shown Khushi's family backing her soundly (still waiting for buaji's belan to show up - Arnav bitwa had a lucky escape)

Loving this AU story😆