SS: The SuKor Story: Mrs Suraj Rajvanshi(08/07/2016

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SS: The SuKor Story: Mrs Suraj Rajvanshi Chapter 1(08/07/2016)


Hi iam going to watch sukor story :Mrs Suraj Rajvanshi hopefully younguys will.enjoy it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was planning to write a fan fiction for Sukor.
so here I am.

chapter 1
The story will begin from where Suraj puts all blame on Chakor for the bridal swap and goes away from the mandap.
Chakor too follows him devastated and Tejaswini requests all guests to leave including Imli & Chakor's parents. Ranjana faints and everyone goes away from the mandap except Imli and Suraj where Suraj instigates Imli against Chakor.

Chakor runs after Vivaan who comes back to his room.
His eyes roamed and he adores the room which he has himself decorated for his and Chakor's wedding night but everything ruined.
Chakor runs to his room and hugs him.

"Vivaan, I am innocent Vivaan. I can never break your trust. I haven't done this." Chakor said sobbing but Vivaan pays no heed to her.
He pulls her away and goes towards the bed. On the white sheet, there were rose petals kept in form of heart. Vivaan's heart ached to see that. He then throws all the rose petals from the bed.

Chakor holds Vivaan's hands and says," Vivaan, don't do this. Don't hurt yourself and me. Please trust me Vivaan. "

"Trust, your talking about trust. There is nothing left now Chakor.
The sindoor, the mangalsutra what you are wearing shows that you are now Suraj's wife. If you wanted this only, then you should have tol the me earlier Chakor. Why, why did you do this why?" Vivaan said with all anger in his voice.

Chakor is about to say but Imli comes inside the room. Chakor rushes towards Imli and holds her hand, " imli, you believe me Imli. How can I do this? I haven't done anything. I haven't done this. You've got to believe me Imli . Please", Chakor said in her pleading voice but Imli's face was as hard as stone.

"You are a cheater , you cheated me. You knew, you knew that I am pregnant with Suraj's child still you played your cards. You have snatched everything from me, my love my child's father, everything ", Imli said crying and ran away from there.

"Imli, imli listen to me", Chakor shouted but in vain.

Vivaan took all the paintings of Chakor which he made and went out of the room which made chakor follow him. He reached towards the mandap and burnt all the paintings.
Chakor pleaded him not to do so but he burnt all the paintings.
Vivaan went away from there and Chakor sat on floor with a thud.
Tejaswini came & saw Chakor sitting on the floor.

"Chakor enough of your drama, now continue all these things in your room but not here. You do not care for your reputation but unfortunately, you are know the elder daughter in law of the Rajwanshi's so just get up. " Tejaswini said and Chakor got up without realising what she is upto.
Tejaswini brings her to Suraj's room and gives her a glass of milk and tells her to go inside.
Chakor follows her order and goes inside the room.


Suraj sees Chakor lost in her own world so he whistles and says,"here you come by bandhua billi(bonded cat) oh sorry sorry , hamari bandhua biwi (bonded/collateral wife."

Due to his voice, Chakor comes into reality and she realises where is she. She puts the glass of milk on the table and walks towards Suraj.
"Neither I am your wife nor your labour. So just shut up. " she says shouting.

"Keep your voice low biwi, here people are there. And by the way, now we are in my room so why just you accept that you all this swapping game in order to get married to me, Suraj Rajvanshi. " Suraj says smirking.

Chakor looks at him in disgust and shouts on him, " I don't want a man like you in my life , and I haven't done any swapping game, you, you have done all this".

Suraj looks at him and says, "but why I will do so, when I have Tina with me ,her dad's money. By the way, hats off to you. You gave all the Azadganj people's their freedom but what have you done to yourself, you have become my collateral. Now what you will do MRS. CHAKOR SURAJ
RAJVANSHI? "
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I want to ask something. how will I write my next chapter further? and how did you made a thread coz all time I can't depend on you na...
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Originally posted by: Jeenisha

I want to ask something. how will I write my next chapter further? and how did you made a thread coz all time I can't depend on you na...


I don't kow how to explain u You continue this page ..otherwise ss one girl written ippk u look and do her format ..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello there! It is a great story, my only request to you (the writer) would be to change the title, as that's the title I am currently using to post my SS! Its all to avoid any confusion! Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's very simple. There are two methods, you can use any one you want.
1. Just post your new update in the reply section everytime. And edit the title by editing the very first post to inform about the latest updates.

2. You can edit your posts. There's a edit option under every post, after you post it. So you can simply go to Part 1>Edit> write/paste the new update>Update Post.
And edit the title too.

It's much better to use the first option. As the second option will make the first page too lengthy. But whatever suits you, it's upto you!
Hope you understood :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Your story is sooo good! Update soon, can't wait!
Ps. I'm on Wattpad! What's your username? I've also written there😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jeenisha

It's Vicious_angel. :)


Got you😆 added the story in my library😉

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