MaNan SS||Darbadar Dil|| chapter 5 (5/4) - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
hi very nice update full of thriller and you narrated so beautifully can't wait for next update take care keep smiling and god bless you sweetheart šŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update n jus wow n superb... Aisa kya hogaya ki nandu itninstubborn hai ki she s not ready to do anything wid manik mujhe laga atleast this way they Vl come close but aisa hua nahi kya Kare aab.. Shit yaar she s literally on roads n phir b she s not ready to give in... The song in btwn those lines n manik trying to find his answers in nandu eyes n the kiss jus blissful... Nandu s not ready to say anything aisa kya hua... I can't take dis curiosity anymore yaar pls update evr part soon can't wait now... Aryamaan n nandu talks are so nice n so pure bond of Friendship... Thank god atleast arya want nandu to face it rather than running away glad tat s... But wat blood samples n wat has hpnd ki she can't get back shit yaar have no patience now pls update soon... Dis update s jus wow n waiting

Thanks for pm
Lots of love
Pravallika
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh wow!
the update was amazing!
The way you have described the emotions is awesome!
Nandani and aryaman's bond was very pure!
i really liked reading it!
the song was just perfect for the sitaution!
It expresses the emotion perfectly!
waiting for the past to unfold!
hope it will be done quickly!
thanks for this chappie an dpm!
continue soon!
keep writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
She is ready to give up on everything possible ... Everything she has just to stay away from Manik... Blood samples kis cheez k... Pta ni yaar.. May there was some misunderstanding or anything... But they both are so hurt.. So broken... Both long for each other but can't be together...
Amazing update ... Loving the story...

Thanxx for this awesome update n the pm

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update loved why nandini left manik what blood samples is nandini talking about what will manik to get his ladylove love back because I know he not going to let go of nandini this time he will get her back in his at any cost
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update chahiye Mishhaaa
Mishhuuu update update update update!!
Hehehehe
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: divtan

Update chahiye Mishhaaa

Mishhuuu update update update update!!
Hehehehe


Yea div I will be giving by tonight!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aishhh!! Pray for me bae!
I m still freaking out! Can't catch sleep! Anxiety levels super high!!!😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Aishhh!! Pray for me bae!
I m still freaking out! Can't catch sleep! Anxiety levels super high!!!😭



you will be alright mish
calm down and catch some sleep
stop freaking out ...m sure you will do good
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Alishakhna1998



you will be alright mish
calm down and catch some sleep
stop freaking out ...m sure you will do good

Donno Aish!!! I m gonna pass out soon!šŸ˜•

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