The Heart Tells No Lies- A SwaSan Mini Shot

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: manasie23
One word to describe this- BEAUTIFUL

Thank you so much Manu 🤗

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Shruti...my friend.
In one word it is beautiful.
The thoughts of Swara was beautifully portrayed.she was in a mess.her heart was saying something and her brain was not accepting it.she was thinking about Sanskar.she was trying to neglect the thoughts.but it was impossible for her.but why?the answer was unknown to her.
At last the kissan's entry...it was awesome.
She identified him.but her brain was not ready to accept it.
What will happen next?
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
With lots of love
Shamina

Hey Shamina dear 🤗

So glad you liked this, it's only a lighthearted alternative take from me but I just wanted some relief 😃. Exactly it was only to try and pen out Swara's turmoil and also to show that real soul connect between them that would still make her heart know Sanskaar in any guise 😳. But this is just a one shot dear, it isn't a series I am writing . There is no update planned as such . I might write more pieces of course if I feel so inspired but for now, this was a one off 😃.

Love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: swathiinduru
Indeed a much needed update dear a nice one.u really portrayed swara feeling her turmoil very well.feeling bad for sanskar😭 but I know this track s going to be 'very memorable.waiting for kissan leela😉

Thank you so much Swathi, glad you enjoyed it! I too feel terrible for Sanskaar so this was my mini escape from it and to show a more palatable version where I try to explain Swara's confusion and why she's lashing but also show her heart knowing who her Sanskaar really is 😳😊. Yes, let's bring Kissan on now! 😃

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

The os z total jhakas!dhina dhin dha.
Hayee!humar kissan wa ntry hui gawa.hum bohot hi khush hui gawa ha.
Swara's turmoil beautifuly writen.
Hw i wish cvs gv swara monologue & shw her turmoil.
Lv it shru.

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bones123

@bones123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

My heart is going dhina dhin dhaaa while reading thisss ! !! Honestly i'm still so skeptical about Kissan and exactly what you've described about his appearance *why would they do that tooo him...whyyy*

But how lovely would it be if she'd recognize him and she'd know it's him but play along to see exactly where it goes !! To Begin Again, to pause the questions for a while and then go on this journey where he woos her...but she knows its him...

Lovely mini shot Shruuu...I totally wish something of this sort plays out...even if not a an outright recognition some part of her heart which is conflicted between Sanskaar *please no shorebusiness* and Kissan feels that it's him...

dreams can always come true :)

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res 😊🤗

Shall un res after I return home, am out of station for my cousin's wedding, Shru.

Love

Viji

Take your time Viji, hope you'll have a wonderful time at the wedding x

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Shamina dear🤗

So glad you liked this, it'sonly a lightheartedalternative take from me but I justwanted some relief😃. Exactly it was only to try and pen out Swara'sturmoil and also to show that real soul connect betweenthem that would still make her heart know Sanskaar in any guise😳. But this is just a one shot dear, itisn't a series I am writing. There is no update planned as such. Imight write morepieces ofcourse if I feel soinspired but for now, this was a one off😃.

Love,
Shruti x

The story ended in kissan's entry.but it is the beginning of story.
It is request from me.please continue it...
Waiting for your next work

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Helee
its beautiful...! 😳

Thank you Helee 😃

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Only one question why is this MO when you know I dn't read?!😭 and Nautanki started 🤪😆

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
The os z total jhakas!dhina dhin dha.
Hayee!humar kissan wa ntry hui gawa.hum bohot hi khush hui gawa ha.
Swara's turmoil beautifuly writen.
Hw i wish cvs gv swara monologue & shw her turmoil.
Lv it shru.

😆😆 Jhakaas made me lmao. Glad you enjoyed this Sonu and thank you so much for the kind words 😳. I don't have much hope from the CVs but this was in my control so did what I could 😊

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