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If you were the writer, how would you end the story?

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-Nimmy-

@-Nimmy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

re-read it!!!

and as much as i love the first ending, the third one completely blew me away!!!

so the third ending still remains my favorite!

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Fuggy Mehra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

OMG this is heaven 😲
reserved 😎

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Whoa Mina chechi!

Just happened to read this because i was too bored! And i must say, i love all the three versions.. If i had to pick, i might go with the third.. I really liked how Pragya wanted it.. Craved for it.. Yet, didn't let it happen without an assurance from Abhi that he was committed to her henceforth..

And Abhi, though i really didn't like the way he wanted the proof, I'd just turn it this way.. He wanted her too and just made use of the opportunity to get intimate with her.. This to keep my brain from thinking about kicking him on his ass!

Nevertheless, love all the takes.. Intimacy conveyed subtly.. Nowhere does it sound vulgar or makes you repel!

I guess I've read this long back.. i might have... Not really sure..

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Kanishka

@-Sunkissed

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

I like the 2C better..amazing work mina!

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Mysterious7

@Mysterious7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Star of the epi is Mina ⭐️...

I remember when I read this ages ago for the first time, you made me feel better for the actual scene and even for the dark track to be honest...

Rest I will res soon :)...

Edited by Mystery1 - 9 years ago

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Mina

@-mina-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Mysterious7
Star of the epi is Mina ⭐️...

I remember when I read this ages ago for the first time, you made me feel better for the actual scene and even for the dark track to be honest...

Rest I will res soon :)...

Thank you Nadz!!!! 🤗 😉

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