Proof | a Choose Your Own Ending AbhiGya MMS track OS by mina - Page 4

Originally posted by: simsim25

MINA!!!!
Thanks for posting such a fantastic story!! I read all of the endings and personally loved the last one!! I loved all of them!! You are a great writer!! Thanks for sharing !!

Thank you Simi! Last one was my fave 😊 Hugs and thanks for reading and commenting!!

Originally posted by: sara7iris

I hesitate because the three version are very good and amazing WRITING ... but I chose the first Version because when he started to touch and kiss he realized that she was her first time and she is only his wife ...the two other version was full of passion..mutual feeling between pragya and abhi and also proves that she will always be his wife

Thanks for your thoughtful comment! Appreciate you reading all of them. Good to know the reason for your vote. Thanks again! 😊

Originally posted by: Anbhigya

First f all although dis OS doesn't hav a title... Still 'choose ur own ending' sounds like a title to me!!!!:p:p:p lovely lovely n lovely... Sumhow m guessin u already knew wat m gonna vote for.. So i don't need to tell!! Bwahahaha... Prags also favors d fact k suresh just ain't d 'carry u in my arms' guy... Luved it.. Kaash KKB me bhi prags wud hav spoken sum sense instead f cryin!! Gud job my whitey owliee didu!! U became Shark too.. Ha ha ha... Well everythin is okk for me as long as its not u alredy knw what!!!! One f a kind OS by one f a kind writer!!:) i likes i likes... Ha ha

Uff shonamoni you missed the title! 😲 The title of the OS is Proof! And yeah ab tak I think no one has explained to Abhi what happened! Well Ii guess only Prags and Suresh could but honestly one of them should have by now naa?! Blaah.

Thank you for reading and commenting babu, always makes me warm and happy to hear from you. Big hugs to my kalijar tukra 😉

Originally posted by: Anbhigya

First f all although dis OS doesn't hav a title... Still
'choose ur own ending' sounds like a title to me!!!!:p:p:p lovely
lovely n lovely... Sumhow m guessin u already knew wat m gonna vote
for.. So i don't need to tell!! Bwahahaha... Prags also favors d fact k
suresh just ain't d 'carry u in my arms' guy... Luved it.. Kaash KKB me
bhi prags wud hav spoken sum sense instead f cryin!! Gud job my whitey
owliee didu!! U became Shark too.. Ha ha ha... Well everythin is okk for
me as long as its not u alredy knw what!!!! One f a kind OS by one f a
kind writer!!:) i likes i likes... Ha ha

Uff shonamoni you missed the title! 😲 The title of the OS is Proof! And yeah ab tak I think no one has explained to Abhi what happened! Well Ii guess only Prags and Suresh could but honestly one of them should have by now naa?! Blaah.

Thank you for reading and commenting babu, always makes me warm and happy to hear from you. Big hugs to my kalijar tukra 😉

hailaaa... Ye th MU ho gya.. Still i will go for- choose ur own ending!!! He he he...

Thanks for your comment and for reading all of them! For reference my fic index is here: Mina's KKB Index.

Originally posted by: kdsubs

If you force me to pick one of these three, i would have to go with Belief. The other two are too... unrealistic. (Though still in character. So, well done).

But if you really want to know what i think - then ending 4. The one you had set out to write but could not quite pen down. Pragya would agree, and in my view (different from the way you saw it), she would mean it too. But her heart wouldn't be in it. She would not respond, would not, could not engage in the act. And initially Abhi would be too angry to care, and later he would be too far gone to stop. Anger and desire are a very potent mix - and i am not at all sure, or perhaps i do not have the confidence you do in Abhi, that he is mature enough to handle the combination. So - the act would happen. And while technically it would not be rape, since Pragya agreed, she would still feel ... violated. Her trust eroded, her body abused.

Dark? Yes. Realistic? Way more so than even the first scenario here. And i really wish you would write it down...

(And no, i am not back on IF. Stole time from work to read these since you wrote them).

Kat Kat Kat! I get unseemly excited by your comments, hehe. If you're not back on IF how did you know this was here?! 😉 But seriously, thank you for taking time from work to read and further time to comment, it means a lot to have your thoughts!

So for this darker scenario, I think we have a similar view. Only for me, though Pragya would say yes and mean yes, her heart not being into it really makes it the same as her meaning no. I found it impossible to get into a scene where she really wasn't participating in the act, which is why I didn't end up writing the darker version. You're so right that Abhi wouldn't be able to handle both anger and desire - I think that's an apt summation of my original inspiration here. So yes, the act would happen, and it would leave them both miserable.

And it's s powerful of you to say that it'd be more realistic...it does motivate me a little. I shan't promise but the idea seems likely to not leave me alone so...we'll see if maybe I can access that darker side after all...?

Ahh, so many ideas on my plate! Do you recall your interest in that Neil/Aaliya fic? I was looking at that today too and want to continue but the longer I get delayed, the more it differs from Aaliya on the show and the harder it is to show any kind of recuperation of her relationship with Pragya, which was going to run parallel to the development of her relationship with Neil 😕

Err sorry tangent. Anyway. Thank you again for sharing your thoughts! Much love to you 😊

Mina Di! Firstly thank you for the special mention!😳

Originally posted by: Mkgp88

Mina Di! Firstly thank you for the special mention!😳

i just finished reading all three... All beautiful but I heart the 3rd one...it was the most fun..

Res rest of the comment...I'm going to go read it again and again and again and then finish my comment over the weekend and I don't want to vote because all three were amazing and I want all three!😆

❤️❤️Mina Di! You're the bestest!

oh mini me thaaank you!! i thought you were saving til the weekend?! 😲 but yay for me i get your comment now. and more later would be lovely too but of course 😆

i heart the third one too, once again we prove to be so alike, i love it!

thanks again and big hugs!

Originally posted by: -mina-

oh mini me thaaank you!! i thought you were saving til the weekend?! 😲 but yay for me i get your comment now. and more later would be lovely too but of course 😆

i heart the third one too, once again we prove to be so alike, i love it!

thanks again and big hugs!

Hey Mina, I'm still in a daze 🤔!!!! Can't vote as yet... still pondering 🤪... they were all fantastic... superb!!! You are fantastic!!!! Love the way you started ... and the inevitable glorious endings .. !!!! Even in these stories we can see the chemistry of Abhigya!!!!

You are a truly wonderful writer👍🏼 ... I have seen work by professionals who are not even half as good as you!!! Keep writing ... I enjoy every one of your stories 😛!!!

So I'll go vote now!!!

Oh ... forgot to say thank you .. Thank you!!!

You are a fantabulous writer one of the best in fact the best I have seen in recent times your ability to string meaningful words that cast a deeper sensibility to characters is awe inspiring

Originally posted by: -mina-

Kat Kat Kat! I get unseemly excited by your comments, hehe. If you're not back on IF how did you know this was here?! 😉 But seriously, thank you for taking time from work to read and further time to comment, it means a lot to have your thoughts!

So for this darker scenario, I think we have a similar view. Only for me, though Pragya would say yes and mean yes, her heart not being into it really makes it the same as her meaning no. I found it impossible to get into a scene where she really wasn't participating in the act, which is why I didn't end up writing the darker version. You're so right that Abhi wouldn't be able to handle both anger and desire - I think that's an apt summation of my original inspiration here. So yes, the act would happen, and it would leave them both miserable.

And it's s powerful of you to say that it'd be more realistic...it does motivate me a little. I shan't promise but the idea seems likely to not leave me alone so...we'll see if maybe I can access that darker side after all...?

Ahh, so many ideas on my plate! Do you recall your interest in that Neil/Aaliya fic? I was looking at that today too and want to continue but the longer I get delayed, the more it differs from Aaliya on the show and the harder it is to show any kind of recuperation of her relationship with Pragya, which was going to run parallel to the development of her relationship with Neil 😕

Err sorry tangent. Anyway. Thank you again for sharing your thoughts! Much love to you 😊

😆 lets just say, i have a Mina-alert!! 😉

Hmm, i know what you mean about Pragya's heart not being in it. And i agree that in a sense that really does mean a no. The way i was / am still seeing it - she really does believe she means it. She intends it as if she means it. And then reality strikes as the act progresses. And Pragya, being who she is, wants to say no. But can't. And a huge part of not being able to stop Abhi is her sense of fairness. Because she had said yes... and stopping now is not fair... Am i making sense?? (I make perfect sense in my head, i'll let you know 😆).

And yes, they both would be so utterly miserable... And i really think you should write it. Aside from the fact that angst gets to me (i am an utterly selfish reader), i notice that you gravitate to ... fluff. Well, not fluff precisely, but the lighter side. And writing a darker version would be a challenge. And i would love to read the results.

(And talking of challenges, i am getting to that point in my story. Sometime - provided you are interested of course - i would love to have you read and give me your feedback).

And i am still waiting on the Aliya-Neil story. That one grabbed me 'coz Aliya was such a complex character there. I get your lack of inspiration, but hey - that's where fan fictions come in, right? And you are a good enough writer to overcome the character lapses in the show. So - go for it. <imagine a cheerleading emoticon here>.

Loads of love and luck,
Kat