Proof | a Choose Your Own Ending AbhiGya MMS track OS by mina - Page 5

Originally posted by: kdsubs

😆 lets just say, i have a Mina-alert!! 😉

Hmm, i know what you mean about Pragya's heart not being in it. And i agree that in a sense that really does mean a no. The way i was / am still seeing it - she really does believe she means it. She intends it as if she means it. And then reality strikes as the act progresses. And Pragya, being who she is, wants to say no. But can't. And a huge part of not being able to stop Abhi is her sense of fairness. Because she had said yes... and stopping now is not fair... Am i making sense?? (I make perfect sense in my head, i'll let you know 😆).

And yes, they both would be so utterly miserable... And i really think you should write it. Aside from the fact that angst gets to me (i am an utterly selfish reader), i notice that you gravitate to ... fluff. Well, not fluff precisely, but the lighter side. And writing a darker version would be a challenge. And i would love to read the results.

(And talking of challenges, i am getting to that point in my story. Sometime - provided you are interested of course - i would love to have you read and give me your feedback).

And i am still waiting on the Aliya-Neil story. That one grabbed me 'coz Aliya was such a complex character there. I get your lack of inspiration, but hey - that's where fan fictions come in, right? And you are a good enough writer to overcome the character lapses in the show. So - go for it. <imagine a cheerleading emoticon here>.

Loads of love and luck,
Kat

Yay you saw the reply! I know I should just PM you but...but I don't even have a defense 😆

I totally get what you're saying about Pragya's mindset in that scenario. Absolutely she would be thinking that she can't back out after she's already said yes because it would be unfair. Oh god. That is a moment I kind of do want to explore 😲

Yes fluff is my thing! So you're right it would be a good challenge. Ahhh I don't knowww! I've been thinking about it as you're not the only one encouraging me in this direction, but I haven't actually worked on it at all. So umm...I need to make that leap.

And yayyy you're still up for some Aaliya/Neil! And mostly it would be Aaliya, so goodie, I will "inflict" it on you at some point down the road, if the universe so wills it 😉

Ok thanks, and good luck, and I'll just go reply to that PM I've been meaning to answer for weeks now. And I'm totally up for giving feedback!! 😃

Originally posted by: indi

Hey Mina, I'm still in a daze 🤔!!!! Can't vote as yet... still pondering 🤪... they were all fantastic... superb!!! You are fantastic!!!! Love the way you started ... and the inevitable glorious endings .. !!!! Even in these stories we can see the chemistry of Abhigya!!!!

You are a truly wonderful writer👍🏼 ... I have seen work by professionals who are not even half as good as you!!! Keep writing ... I enjoy every one of your stories 😛!!!

So I'll go vote now!!!

Oh ... forgot to say thank you .. Thank you!!!

oh indi thank you sooo much!! you've been reading my KKB work from basically the beginning and it's always so lovely to have your comments. so glad you enjoyed all! thank you for saying you were dazed, it's really gratifying, i was kind of hoping to have that effect 😆 😉

i hope i can be a professional one day, but for now i'm too obsessed with abhigya 😳

thanks again, big hugs!!

Originally posted by: columbia

You are a fantabulous writer one of the best in fact the best I have seen in recent times your ability to string meaningful words that cast a deeper sensibility to characters is awe inspiring

I chose all three becos they were all well written and superbly fitted the story

Of course I was also looking for an option that said completing the hook up but then could not find it...yeah baby!!!

aapka comment ki intezaar tha, i thought pakka columbia will enjoy these stories, but phir bhi you circled back to hookup!! i am impressed and amused! and still working on it! i know you're getting tired of hearing that 😛

but thank you for your amazingly supportive comment, and i'm so glad you liked all three!!

I will never get tired of it as long as you don't get tired of me hounding!!! That's the kind of love we share I say!! ☺️

Originally posted by: columbia

I will never get tired of it as long as you don't get tired of me hounding!!! That's the kind of love we share I say!! ☺️

What will happen to our love when you finally post it??? 😳

On a more serious note

I would love to see an alternate ending one where they do the deed but silently - an angst and hurt filled slow love! Completely quiet with not a sound and even when they want to say or state they stop themselves almost like until the end they want to hold on to some part of themselves

Only to break down in the end - both of them holding onto each other but completely broken - it's a little dark but would love yo read it from you

well i expect it will take madam bandar a few days to recover, but then she will come back with another idea, so our love will go on 😉

wow, thanks for this powerful description. i will think on it..!

Superb.I simply loved to its bits.Each parts were awesome.

Mina,
Two quotes came to mind as I read your stories...

A short story is a different thing all together - a short story is like a kiss in the dark from a stranger- Stephen King

I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions.- James A. Michener

You have this amazing gift of bringing words, emotions and characters to life. A true writer and a very prolific one at that! As I've said before, I can imagine Abhigya in your stories, their said and unsaid emotions. Congratulations on creating such beautiful pearls of beauty..

My favorite was 2b, Intention 😊

Awesome story mina. It was treat to read your stories. This story was wonderful endings, i could not choose which is better, because each ending had great part in them. last two ending were beautifully written. But if had to choose than it would be number three.
Thank you for another amazing story. 🤗 🤗 🤗

Now! Is this Bloody Brilliant!!!!

awesome...
all were nice...
but the belief part was good...

Nice end mina
Abhi starting feeling different from ending feeling
You make him love in single scene