TASYAM thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Guyz first time i am writing something mihar and its just my imagination so do read and tomatoes, shoes, and criticism all are aloud to throw on me...😛

MIHAR- OS
I AM SORRY

At 9:00pm
Baby was getting restless after the incident happen. She pushed mikhail whom she want to dance with her. This was a golden opportunity for her to dance with mikhail but her masi spoiled everything. Baby was feeling very very guiltyso she decided to ask  sonam and amar for help as she want to say sorry to mikhail for her such behavior...
Sonam and amar reached in her room. They were breathing heavily as they come running from their room...
"what happen baby why you call us" sonam asked in mid of herheavy breaths "nothing just i am feelingrestless after that incident" baby said marching in her room "and why are you feeling restless" amar asked and sit on couch "I want to say sorry to mikhail" baby said in her one breath "What??" amar and sonam shouted and acted like they are fainted...
"help me guyz don't react like this" baby said sitting on couch near amar "baby whatever you have done after that he don't even want to look you ever in life" sonam said and she also comfort herself on couch "I know but any how I want to say him sorry I have done a great mistake so at least I can say him sorry" baby said
"ok let me think" sonam said and start to think for an idea...
"IDEA!!!" amar shouted so loudly making baby and sonam to keep their hands on their ears...
"amar lil slowlyme and baby are not in other room" sonam said "so what you also shout like this" amar said "I use to do that sometimes butyou always shout like this" sonam said lil loud "from next time i will record your voice whenever you shout" amar said "ya a..." sonam was about to reply but baby keep her both hands on her ear "see baby is closing her ears because whenever you talk it feels like you shout" sonam said with a winning smile...
Amar was about to say something but baby interrupt in "shut up you guyz you both are here to help me not to fight amar tell me your idea" baby said...
" so my is that we will buy a flower basket for mikhail and will keep a sorry note in that after that baby will keep that basket on the door of mikhail's house, will ring the bell and will hide in any corner and after that mikhail will took that basket in and baby will come back home" amar explained his plan and start looking towards baby and sonam...
"so how was it" he asked "its awesome by this baby will also not come in front of mikhail and she will also say sorry to him" sonam said happily "ya its quite nice so now lets go" baby said getting up from couch "where" amar and sonam asked her in unison "to buy flower basket and to say sorry" baby said "not now yaar its too late we will execute this plan tomorrow" sonam said and yawned "no today means today if you don't wanna go sonam then you can rest but i know my brother amar will not refuse to come with me" baby said blackmailing amar...
"yes i will go with my sis if you wanna join us than you can" amar said getting up from couch "then what will i do all alone here i am also coming with both you brother sis" sonam said and she also get up from couch "aww i love you sonam" baby said and hugged her tightly...
"ok ok now no more melo-drama lets go" sonam said breaking the hug and trio marched towards mikhail's house...

At Mikhail's House:::
 

Baby follow the plan as decided and hide behind the
pillars. After few seconds mikhail open the door and look towards flower basket with confused look "at 10pm which kind of people send flower basket to anyone" he thought and pick up the basket. In the mid of the flowers there was a note. He pick up the note and read it...

NOTE

 I am sorry mikhail for pushing you in mid of dance i know now you don't even want to whatch my face but i thought that at least i can say sorry to you.I am sending you this flower basket I don't know your favorite flower so sending my one...

Your Dance lover
Baby

Now after reading the note his anger vanished in air he smiled lil at that time some sounds of whispering come from the pillar were baby is standing. He understood that baby is standing there...
"baby i know you are standing behind pillars" he said loudly and tried to hide his smile. Baby come out behind the pillars and stand in front of him looking down. "i..i..a..am..s..sorry..mi..mikahil" she said fumbling looking down playing with her fingers...
"i will accept your sorry but you have to complete our incomplete dance" mikhail said smiling "ok i am ready" she said happily with a bright smile "ok so come in" he said and move towards practice hall while baby followed him...


Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke juda sun zara
Bin tere mujhse naraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha

Mikhail forward his hand in front of her and music started to flow in air she keep her hand on his and they start to flow their body with music...


Main toh tere rang mein rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera


he started to twirl and spin her...

Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri bann chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, Sab tera..
Sab tera, Sab tera.
.

she started to dance separately and he started to follow her. He was amazed by her such steps but was happy too...


Phir dil ke raasto pe
Teri aahat jo hui
Har dhadkan jashn mein hai
Yeh inayat jo hui (x2)
 


They again started to dance together and he again started to twirl and spin her...

 
Main toh tujhe mil ke jee utthi hoon
Teri dhadkan mein chupi hun
Mera mujh mein kuch nahin
Sab tera, Sab tera..
Sab tera, Sab tera..

He hold her one hand and keep his one hand on her waist while she her one hand on his shoulder and one on his waist and they start to flow with music looking into each other eye orbs...


Jis pal tu saath mere
Uss pal mein zindagi hai
Tujhe paake paaya sab kuch
Koi khwaahish ab nahi hai (x2)

He spin her and leave her hand and start performing individual while she stand there admiring him...


Main toh bas tujh se hi bana hoon
Tere dil mein bewaja hoon
Mera mujhmein kuch bhi nahi
Sab tera, Sab tera..
Sab tera, Sab tera.
.


Now he hold her waist and took her up and start twirling while she open her arms...

The song ends and place her down "so you accept my sorry" she asked smiling while he nodded positively...

END

-------------------------------------------

Thank you guyz for reading...😊😊😊
love
Tasyam /Anshika
  😳

 
Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

9

Views

1.3k

Users

4

Likes

2

Frequent Posters

SaraTasneem thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Awww. ... I wish this really happend.
Good job.
It ws really greart, enjoyed n blushed a lot😳😃😆
I thnk u shuld continue writing more ...
Looking forward
Edited by SaraTasneem - 9 years ago
SaraTasneem thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
N u don't deserve tomatoes or whtevr u wrote in the beginning
As it ws ur 1st time ,
It is really great, wht u wrote, I encourage u to write more 😃
Anusha_ thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Nice Story, Perfect choice of song.. Liked It.. 😊 I wish aisa kuch hua hota.. 😉
Good Attempt. 👍🏼 You should write more Tasyam. 😊
Lol. You don't deserve Tomatoes. You deserve Appreciation. 👏
Waiting for more... 😉
TASYAM thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: SaraTasneem

Awww. ... I wish this really happend.

Good job.
It ws really greart, enjoyed n blushed a lot😳😃😆
I thnk u shuld continue writing more ...
Looking forward


Thank you so much dear...😳
will think of writing more 😳


TASYAM thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: SaraTasneem

N u don't deserve tomatoes or whtevr u wrote in the beginning

As it ws ur 1st time ,
It is really great, wht u wrote, I encourage u to write more 😃


Thanks dear...😳
I want to correct that this is my first time on mihar 😛
TASYAM thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Anusha_

Nice Story, Perfect choice of song.. Liked It.. 😊 I wish aisa kuch hua hota.. 😉

Good Attempt. 👍🏼 You should write more Tasyam. 😊
Lol. You don't deserve Tomatoes. You deserve Appreciation. 👏
Waiting for more... 😉



Thank you so much dear...😳

IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Hey dear ...
Nice OS ...
Beautifully written ...
Right from the restlessness of baby after pushing Mikhail to trio's flower basket plan ... from baby's apology note to Mikhail's reaction after receiving it ...from choice of song to the end of OS ...
Everything was described so nicely ..

And yeah you didn't need to mention that this is not your very first work ... That clearly reflects in your writing ...


Stay blessed and keep writing ...
- HARSHADA
Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago
TASYAM thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Hey dear ...
Nice OS ...
Beautifully written ...
Right from the restlessness of baby after pushing Mikhail to trio's flower basket plan ... from baby's apology note to Mikhail's reaction after receiving it ...from choice of song to the end of OS ...
Everything was described so nicely ..

And yeah you didn't need to mention that this is not your very first work ... That clearly reflects in your writing ...


Stay blessed and keep writing ...
- HARSHADA

Thanks a lot dear... 😳
TASYAM thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Thanks dear... 😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".