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bhargavi

@Cutiepie318

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Posted: 9 years ago

HEY GUYS!! I LIKE KUMKUMBHAGYA SO MUCH AND HAVE READ MANY FICTIONS ON IT!! HERE IS MY ONE TRY !! HOPE YOU ALL WILL LIKE IT!! LT ME KNOW KNOW YOUR VIEWS ON IT!!

DHADKAN-DO DILOKE AWASS!!

PROLOUGE

ABHI AND PRAGYA WERE CHILHOOD FRIENDS!! TEENAGE LOVERS ANDNOW HUSBAND AND WIFE!! THEY HAVE SEEN MANY UPS AND DOWNS IN THEIR LIFE BUT NEVER LEFT EACHOTHERS SIDE!! THE STORY IS ABOUT PRAGYA AND HER ABHI REMEMBERING THEIR CHILDHOOD DAYS AND THEIR JOURNEY TOGEATHER!!!

LNOW LETS GO THROUGH THE CHARECTOR SKETCH OF THIS STORY!!

CHARECTOR SKETCH

ABHI MEHRA : A CARE FREE GUY WHO IS A ROCK STAR WHO LOVES TWO THINGS IN THESE WHOLE WORLD!! THEY ARE HIS FAMILY AND SECOND HIS MUSIC!!! HIS ONE LOOK IS ENOUGH TO MAKE ANYONE FALL FOR HIM!! BUT HE HAS FALLEN FOR ONE AND ONLY GIRL IN HIS LFE HIS PRAGYA!! THE SECOND GIRL HE LOVES AFTER PRAGYA IS HIS DAUGHTER ADITI!!

"MUSIC IS MY LIFE; MY FAMILY IS MY WORLD" -ABHI

PRAGYA MEHRA : PRAGYA ABHI MEHRA IS A LOVING AND CARING WOMAN WHO CAN DO ANYTHING FOR HER HUSBAND AND KIDS!! MOST LOVABLE WIFE AND MOTHER!! THE MOST SUCCESSFUL DOCTOR A CARDIOLOGIST!! SHE IS CUTE AND MAKE ANYONE FALL FOR HER WITH UST A DAZZILING SMILE!! SHE LOVES HER CHILDREN THE MOST!!

"MY KIDS AND HUSBAND ARE MY WORLD" - PRAGYA

ADITI MEHRA : PRAGYA AND ABHI YOUNGER TWIN DAUGHTER WHO IS A CUTIE DAUGHTER WHO HAS PRAGYA'S EYES AND ABHI'S NAUGHTINESS! SHE IS A FUN LOVING DAUGTER AND A CARING SISTER !! AND SHE IS DADDY CUTIE AND MUMMA KA DIL KA THUKADA!! SHE LOVES TO PLAY GUITAR AND AFTER MUSIC SHE LOVES TO READ STORY BOOKS!!

AARAV MEHRA: AARAV IS ELDER TWIN SON OF ABHI AND PRAGYA AND HE RESEMBLES ABHI FROM HEAD TO TOE!! BUT HE HAS HIS MOTHERS SMILE!! AND CARING BROTHER AND A LOVELY SON!! HE IS PAAPA KA CHAMP AND MUMMA KA JAAN!! HE READS BOOKS A LOT LIKE PRAGYA NAD APART BOOKS HE LOVES SINGING!!

ALIYA MEHRA/MEHTA: SHE IS THE LITTLE SIS OF ABHI NOW IN US WITH HER HUSBAND SURYA AND HAVE A SON NAMED ADHI!

SURYA MEHTA : HUSBAND OF ALIA!! IS A BUSSINESS MAN AND LIVES IN US WITH HIS SISTER TANU, WIFE AND CHILD!!

TANU SHRI MEHTA/MALHOTRA : TANU IS SIS OF SURYA AND IS A FAMOUS MODEL/ACTRESS ACTED IN MORE THAN 30 FILMS!! HER CARRER STARTED AS ABHI GF BUT NOW CONTINUING AS RISHI MALHOTRA'S WIFE!! THE COUPLE AS A NEW BORN BABY BOY!!

RISHI MALHOTRA : TRENDING STAR IN BOLLYWOOD MARRIED TO ACTREES TANU AND HAVE A BABY BOY!! LOVES HIS WIFE AND SON A LOT!!

PURAB KHANNA : PURAB IS COUSIN BROTHER OF ABHI AND OWNS A COMPANY NAMES RABUL! HE LOVIES HIS WIFE AND HIS BABY GIRL A LOT!! CAN DO ANYTHING FOR HIS FAMILY, HIS PRAGYA DI AND ABHI BHAI!!

BULBUL KHANA : WIFE OF PURAB AND SIS OF PRAGYA!! LOVES HER FAMILY AND CAN DO ANYTHING FOR HER DI AND JIJU!!

ALL OTHER CHARECTORS ARE SAME AS IN THE SHOW!!! AND ANYOTHER NEW CHARECTORS WILL INTRODUCED AS THE STORY CONTINUES!!

HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND DO COMMENT BOTH POSSITIVE AND NEGATIVE ARE WELCOMED!!

INDEX;)

CHAPTER 1 : SCROLL DOWN FOR CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2 : PAGE 2

Edited by bhargavikrishna - 9 years ago

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kartikaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice prologue and
characters sketch
waiting for your update
update soon

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bhargavi

@Cutiepie318

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kartikaJA
nice prologue and
characters sketch
waiting for your update
update soon

thank u somuch... will update chappy 1 tomorrow

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhargavikrishna

thank u somuch... will update chappy 1 tomorrow

thanks
waiting for your update

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow love it intro plzz continued soon

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Ganga Venkatesh

@ganganavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice intro of each character continue soon

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bhargavi

@Cutiepie318

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Posted: 9 years ago

HEY FRIENDS!! AS I PROMISED, HERE IS THE CHAPTER ONE OF THE STORY!! ENJOY!

CHAPTER-1

"CHASHMISH KAHA HO TUM? MUGHE MERA DOGTAGS NAHI MILREHE HAIN,AUR MERA WALLET KAHA HEIN? AND AND MERE CAR KEYS AUR MERE LUCKY T-SHIRT KUCH BHI NAHI MILRAHE HAIN!! CHASMISH FUGGY KAHA HO TUM?? MERE HELP KARO NA! MEIN LATE HO RAHA HOON CHASHMISH MEIN NE BATAYA THAT NA KI MUJHE AJJ K PRODUCER KE SAATH MEETING HAIN!! KAHAN HO TUM??" SHOUTED AN IMPATIENT ABHI NOT ABLE TO FETCH HIS THINGS!!

THERE OUR PRAGYA WAS STANDING NEAR THE DOOR FOLDING HER HANDS AND SMILING!!

"YAHAN MEIN APNE THINGS KO DUNDRAHOON HUIN AUR TUMHE MAJAK SOOCHRAHA HAIN!! AARE KAISI PATNI HO TUM JO APNE PATI KA HELP NA KARSAKE" AND WINKED AT PRAGYA

"MEIN IISLIYE HASRAHI HOUN KYUNKI MUGHE PATA HAIN KI AAPKE THINGS KAHA HAIN" AND PRAGYA GAVE ABHI HIS THINGS IN FEW SECONDS AND WAS ABOUT LEAVE WHEN ABHI CAUGHT THE PALLU OF HER SAREE SIGNALING NOT TO LEAVE!! HE LOVED THIS MOGAMBO AVATAR OF HIS FUGGY BUT MADE HER WEAR HER GLASSES WHICH SHE FORGOT EVERYDAY SAYING THEY INCREASE HER BEAUTY!! DUO WERE IN ROMANCE MOOD WHEN THY HEARD THE SCREAM ""MUMMA AND PAPA" WHICH WAS EXPECTED BY BOTH OF THEM AND LEFT PRAGYA!! IT WAS SAME SCREAM AS ABHI BUT IT WAS FROM THEIR LITTLE DEVILS AARAV AND ADITI!! THEIR 5 YEAR OLD TWIN KIDS!!

PRAGYA AND ABHI WENT TO HER KIDS ROOM AND SAW HER KIDS AARAV AND ADITI ARE FIGHTING THROWING EVERYTHING AT EACHOTHER!! PRAGYA BANGED HER HEAD WITH HER HAND AND GAVE A STERN LOOK TO ABHI! SHE SAID "APNE NE BIGADE HAIN INN BACHOKO!! APP NE INNE PILLOW FIGHT SIKAYA AUR YE AB TAKH 15 TIMES AISE PILLOWS SAARE ROOM MEIN PHELADIYE!!"

ABHI SAID "FUGGY TUM SHANT HOJHAVO MEIN BACHOON KO

SAMBHALTHA HOON "

PRAGYA SAID " YE BACHE NAHI HAIN SHATAAN HAIN JAAIYE TRY KIJEYE"

AND ABHI TRIED TO COOL HIS KIDS!!

"CHAMPS YOU ARE GOOD KIDS NA! DONT FIGHT LIKE THIS!! PLEASE STOP THIS HELL AND GET READY!!"

ADITI "PAPA BHAIYA NE START KIYA HAIN TOH BHAIYA KO KAHO"

ARAV "PAPA MEIN NE START KIYA TOH ADITI KO END KARNEKE LIYE BOLO"

ABHI FORGOT EVERYTHING AND SAID "AWW MERE BACHE THO BILKUL MERE JAISE HAIN.. COME CHAMPS LET ME ALSO JOIN YOU AND WINKED AT THEM!!"

PRAGYA WHO HAD ENOUGH BY NOW SREAMED "ENOUGH!!" ALL OF THEM FREEZED AT THE TIME EXCEPT ABHI!! ABHI HAD A IAM GONE LOOK ON HIS FACE AND HE SAID "FUGGY!! WO MEIN!!"

PRAGYA SAID "BAS BOHUT HOGAY YE PILLOW FIGHT AUR ABHI AAP YAHA SE JAIYE AAPKO PRODUCER KE SAATH MEETING HAINA CHALIYE!!" AND ABHI JUMPED OUT OF BED AND HEADE TOWARDS THE DOOR!!

PRAGYA CONTINUED "AUR TUM DONO YE ROOM ROBIN KE SAATH MILKAR CLEAN KARNA! MEIN BREAK FAST BANANE JAARAHI HOON AUR MEIN RAMU KAKA KE SAATH TUMHARE LIYE DOODH BHEJOGEE PEELENA!! AUR CLEAN HNE KE BAAD TUM DONO FRESH HOKE NEECHE BREAK FAST KE LIYE AAJANA!! SAMJE!!"

ADITI AND ARAV "YES MUMMA!!"

AND ADITI,ARAV WITH THE HELP OF ROBIN CLEANED THE ROOM AND BOTH OF THEM GOT FRESHED AND CAME DOWN FOR BREAK FAST!! ABHI'S MEETING WAS CANCELLED AND HE STAYED BACK AT HOME IN THEIR ROOM! PRAGYA WENT TO THEIR ROOM TO CHANGE AS TOMATO SAUCE FALLED ON HER SAREE!! SHE WENT TO THEIR ROOM CLOSED THE DOOR AND WENT TO CHANGING ROOM AND WAS SHOCKED TO SEE THE ROOM CLEANED!! IT WAS MESSY IN THE MORNING WHEN ABHI WAS SEARCHING HIS T-SHIRT SHE WAS REALLY SHOCKED AND ANOTHER MOMENT SHE FELT A PAIR OF STRONG ARMS AROUND HER WAIST!! SHE UNDERSTOOD THAT THIS HANDS BELONGS TO NONE OTHER THAN ABHI AND TRIED TO COME OUT OF HIS HUG!! BUT SHE WAS UNSUCESSFUL! ABHI WAS KISSING HER NECK WHEN HIS PHONE BEEPED IT WAS A MESSAGE!! HE IGNORED IT BUT ON PRAGYA INSISTING HE OPENED AND SAW IT WAS FROM ALIYA HIS LITTLE SIS..[ALIA CHARECTOR IS POSSITIVE AND SHE DOENST LOVE PURAB!!0]

MSG: BHAI I KNOW YOU ALL WOULD BE MISSING ME! EVEN IAM MISSSING YOU AND BHABHI SO I DECIDED TO COME TO INDIA TO MEET YOU ALL!!! I AND PRINCE WILL BE LANDING THERE BY TOMOROWW EVENING!! BYE LOVE ALIA!!

"FUGGY YEH TOH HAMARI ALIYA KA MSG HAIN!! SHE IS COMMING TO INDIA WOW!! SHE IS COMMING ALONG WITH MY PRINCE!! WOW FUGGY IAM SO EXCITED!!" ABHI EXCLAIMED

"HA WOH TOH TEEK HAIN LEKIN AAP ABHI TAKH YAHAN KYA KARRAHAE HAIN? APKA PRODUCER KE SAATH APPOINTMENT HAIN NA!" PRAGYA REPLIED ALL CONFUSED

"HA WOH MEETING CANCEL HOGAYA AUR MEIN SHOPPING MALL JARAHA HOON ALIYA AUR PRINCE K LIYE GIFTS LANE KO!! " ABHI SAID WHILE RUSHING!!

"HA THEEK HAIN LEKIN BREAK FAST THO KARKE JAAIYE NA" PRAGYA SAID WITH CONCERN

"NAHI MUJHE BHOOK NAHI HAIN TUM BREAK FAST KARLO AUR TAKE CARE BYE!!" ABHI SAID WHILE KISSING PRAGYA CHEEK

NEXT MOMENT ABHI DISAAPERED FROM HER SIGHT!! SHE SIGED IN RELIEF,CHANGED HER DRESS AND WENT TO HER KIDS WHO WERE VERY ANGRY ON THEIR MUMMA!!

PRECAP : ALIA IN US AIRPORT BUMED INTO SOMEONE AND SHOUTED AT THAT PERSON "ARE YOU BLIND??" THAT PERSON SAID "ALIA!! TUM??"

THATS IT FOR CHAPPY ONE!!! WAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE!! PLZ HIT LIKE BUTTON AND DO COMMENT!! BOTH NEGATIVE AND POSITIVE ARE WELCOMED!!

LOVE,

BHARGAVI ;)

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Kirti

@Tisha_fan

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Posted: 9 years ago

It's amazing dear. Really loved it. Cute family. ❤️👏

Looking forward for next part.

Please pm me when you apdate next part.

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bhargavi

@Cutiepie318

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti1212
It's amazing dear. Really loved it. Cute family. ❤️👏
Looking forward for next part.
Please pm me when you apdate next part.

YES FOR SURE

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Monika

@moni_06

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice update nd plzz update sooon

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