||Yuvraj Drabble:Unrequited Love|| - Page 2

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

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This is so brilliantly written! I love the longing and yearning in Yuvraj's tone. he is so hollowed out from going after her that any justification would be enough for his mind to handle.

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

nice one

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

it's like i told you before, i honestly was blown away by this piece!

it truly is one of your best writings! the way you got into yuvi's head and portrayed his inner most feelings and thoughts - girl you killed it!!

you really outdid yourself with this!

i absolutely loved it tashu!! <3

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Omg I was actually thinking about how nobody ever writes anything on Yuvi yesterday and I log into IF to receive this.

Natasha this is AMAZING.

I think I am one of those very few people who can see why Yuvi acts how he does, not that I condone his behaviour, and so reading this was such a pleasure! You have depicted so beautifully how his upbringing and his bruised ego have influenced his behaviour from the first day, yet it is actually his own self-deluded thinking that he uses to justify himself and makes him the sick person that he is.

Again, this was beautiful!

Originally posted by: zaara610

Very well written..Loved it

Originally posted by: Komal1298

You showed yuvi's obsession truely hats off to you.. amazing

Originally posted by: Inkheart

Wow I can feel the intensity

No one really written something from Yuvi's POV

If it was so in the serial, maybe I could sympathize with him

"I said maybe"

Anyways, your work is quite commendable

Haayyy

👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Natasha first of all hats off to you, you really thought alot about yuvi.

Reading this made me feel like you got under his skin. I've never read something from his POV and this actually was a nice change.

Explained alot as to why he turned out this way

I really enjoyed reading this