||Yuvraj Drabble:Unrequited Love||

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nat this is really intense
Loved it
It's very well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so brilliantly written! I love the longing and yearning in Yuvraj's tone. he is so hollowed out from going after her that any justification would be enough for his mind to handle.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it's like i told you before, i honestly was blown away by this piece!
it truly is one of your best writings! the way you got into yuvi's head and portrayed his inner most feelings and thoughts - girl you killed it!!
you really outdid yourself with this!
i absolutely loved it tashu!! <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg I was actually thinking about how nobody ever writes anything on Yuvi yesterday and I log into IF to receive this.

Natasha this is AMAZING.

I think I am one of those very few people who can see why Yuvi acts how he does, not that I condone his behaviour, and so reading this was such a pleasure! You have depicted so beautifully how his upbringing and his bruised ego have influenced his behaviour from the first day, yet it is actually his own self-deluded thinking that he uses to justify himself and makes him the sick person that he is.

Again, this was beautiful!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You showed yuvi's obsession truely hats off to you.. amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow I can feel the intensity
No one really written something from Yuvi's POV
If it was so in the serial, maybe I could sympathize with him
"I said maybe"

Anyways, your work is quite commendable
Haayyy
👏👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Natasha first of all hats off to you, you really thought alot about yuvi.
Reading this made me feel like you got under his skin. I've never read something from his POV and this actually was a nice change.
Explained alot as to why he turned out this way
I really enjoyed reading this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshi2000

Nat this is really intense
Loved it
It's very well written


Thank you BabyBear😳 Love you🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

nicely written Natasha <3


Thank you Jer😳🤗

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