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mishti.rain

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Posted: 9 years ago

hallo...

shanaya,nandini,yashfeen & many more sab ki amazing stories padkar mera bhi dil kiya kuch likhne ka,main itna acha to nahi lik pai jitna aap sab likhte ho,but i tried & i hope you all like it & support my story.

i m craziest fan of f.k to maine vaise naughty zaroon par likhna tha,magar maine ashar aur khirad par likha hai.mujhe laga humsafar mein thode aur romantic scenes hone chahiye the...

i have written some parts on ashar-khirad romance...😳

humsafar ki tarah is story mein koi villian nahi hai.evil fareeda,😡😡sara chipkali,😡duffer khizar😡 koi nahi hai is story mein.ashar-khirad ki life mein koi traumatic phase nahi hoga.ashar ki mother zaroon ki mother ki tarah hai not evil😆aur sab same to same.

ashar-khirad ki shaadi bhi vaisi hi hui jaise humsafar mein hui thi...

plz i want your comments...jaisa bhi laga bata dena...

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Raatri

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Posted: 9 years ago

ye kya... itna sahi intro padne ke baad laga...story padne mein maja aayega...lekin...scroll down karne par...mila bada sa ANDA...😆😆...koi nahin shayad isi ko kehte hain...intezar ka phal meetha...

by the way...thanks for ur upcoming story...i lack this ability thats why i respect all the writers.. over here...(new or old)..for their hard and beautiful work...mujh jaise logo ko ...aap jaise logo ki bahut zaroorat hain...jo apne aas paas sab acha sa...pyara sa...world dekhti hain...and u and others are the one...who keeps creating that world...atleast for me in this FORUM👏👏

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mishti.rain

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Yashfeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

yayyy... so gonna get some cute romantic scenes.. excited and plz update soon :) waiting eagerly

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mishti.rain

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Raatri
ye kya... itna sahi intro padne ke baad laga...story padne mein maja aayega...lekin...scroll down karne par...mila bada sa ANDA...😆😆...koi nahin shayad isi ko kehte hain...intezar ka phal meetha...
by the way...thanks for ur upcoming story...i lack this ability thats why i respect all the writers.. over here...(new or old)..for their hard and beautiful work...mujh jaise logo ko ...aap jaise logo ki bahut zaroorat hain...jo apne aas paas sab acha sa...pyara sa...world dekhti hain...and u and others are the one...who keeps creating that world...atleast for me in this FORUM👏👏

thank u,hope tumhe story achi lage..

fawad ko dekh kar apne aap romantic scenes yaad aane lagte hai...😳

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mishti.rain

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Posted: 9 years ago

THANK YOU EVERYONE😊& stay tuned

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mishti.rain

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART-1

Ashar-Khirad romantic phone conversation...

Ashar-Khirad ki shaadi ko 5 months ko chuke hai.ashar khirad se mohabbat karne laga hai aur zahir bhi karta hai apne sweet little little gestures se,magar usne kabhi bhi khirad ko chune ki koshish nahi ki just holding hands,usne kabhi khirad ko hug tak nahi kiya tha,wo nahi chahta tha uski sada aur masoom biwi hurt ho...khirad also know ashar have romantic feelings for her,his eyes speaks everything...

ab khirad bhi ashar ko bepanha chahne lagi thi,she tried to confess her feelings to him so many times but she couldn't,zahir kar dena chahti thi ashar ko wo kitni mohabbat karne lagi hai,wo dur nahi rehna chahti thi ab ashar se,ab uski mohabbat ko mehsoos karna chahti thi...par ashar janta tha ke khirad usse pyar karne lagi hai bas izhaar nahi kar paa rahi apne shy nature ki wajah se...

khirad apni sari feelings apni best & only friend afsheen se share karti thi,afsheen ki shaadi hone wali thi kuch dino mein...

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mishti.rain

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Posted: 9 years ago

ashar ke parents 10 dino ke liy abroad gaye hai...

an afternoon,khirad ashar ki wardrobe thik kar rahi hoti hai,uski t-shirts fold karte soch rahi hoti hai,"wo abhi yahan mujood nahi hai,par unka ehsaas is pure room mein hai,unke hathoon ka ehsaas mere hathoon par"khirad apne hath dekh kar kehti hai,uska chehra blush karne lagta hai...

tabhi khirad ke mobile ki bell bajti hai,phone screen par ashar likha hota hai.

"hello"ashar ki deep voice sun kar khirad ki heartbeat tej ho rahi thi.

"kya kar rahi thi"ashar asked.

"aapka wardrobe thik kar rahi thi".khirad says.

"main bhi aa jao,dono sath mil kar thik karenge,bolo aa jao abhi tumhare paas".ashar shararat bhare andaz mein kehta hai.

khirad apni sharam ko chupate hue kehti hai,"aap ko office mein kaam nahi hai".

"ye kaam hi to hai,jo mujhe tumse dur karta hai"ashar says.

"vaise ashar aapko aane ki zaroorat nahi hai,aapka wardrobe almost thik hi hai,sab kuch to organised hota hai pehle se,aap kitne salike se karte hai har kaam ko,mere liy to kuch khaas hota hi nahi".khirad ne kaha.

"lo,jee,logo ki biwiyan shikayat karti hai ke unke shauhar kitne disorganised hote hai,koi kaam thik se nahi karte aur meri biwi kehti hai,main itne salike se kyu karta hoon sab kaam"ashar shikayat bhare awaaz mein.

he continue-"thik hai aap kehti hai to main bhi bigad jaata hoon,bottles ke cap khol kar chod donga,gila towel bed par rakh donga,to bolo bigad jao,phir sambhalti rehna saara din mere kaam".

"ab maine aisa bhi kuch nahi kaha",khirad reply.

"yahi toh baat hai meri jaan,tum kuch kehti nahi,main kitna kuch sunna chahta ho tumse,tum meri life partner ho tumhara pora hak hai mujhpar,jis tarah mera tumpar,haina,tum sun rahi ho na"ashar ask.

"jee"khirad said

sach mein khirad ab main dil se chahta hoon,tum mere sab kaam ko sambhalo aur mujhe bhi,toh batao sambhalogi naa mujhe".ashar ne kaha khirad apne ehsaaso ko batana chahti hai magar kuch nahi keh paa rahi,wo kuch bolti,isse pehle ashar kehta hai.

"i love you khirad"

khirad heart skipped a beat suddenly ye teen lafz sun kar.

"mujhe pata hai tumhe is baat ka jawab dene mein kitni mushkil ho rahi hogi,but i will wait for ur anwser,shiddat se intezar rahega mujhe tumare izhar ka"keh kar ashar phone band kar deta hai...khirad ashar se kuch keh nahi pati,she feels her palms getting sweat and chilled & her heartbeat getting fast.

precap-afsheen invitation...

hope u all like it...😊plz comment...

Edited by mishti.rain - 9 years ago