ASHAR-KHIRAD LOVE - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Good One.
But somethings in this, are clearly inspired from me.

Anyways. Continue Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Hey.. good work.. longer update next tym plz :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
mishti...just got busy with some seminar...so not replied...
by the way part 1 is good...aur jahan romance ho...woh cheez acchi hi hogi...😊
...so keep writing...romantically
Edited by Raatri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: .Enchantress.

Good One.

But somethings in this, are clearly inspired from me.

Anyways. Continue Soon.



thank you...
we both are inspired from zindagi gulzar hai and humsafar...i think thats the reason,my story is little bit similar to yours...
aur zaroon & ashar dono hi jab tak apni apni biwi se romance na kar le tab tak dono ka khana hazam kaha hota hai...😃
stay tuned...😊
Edited by mishti.rain - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-2

At night ashar pool ke paas baitha hai,put his feet into water.tabhi khirad 2 cups coffee le kar aati hai aur ashar ke paas aa kar baith jati hai.
khirad ashar se pochti hai,"ashar aap coffee,chai bina chinni ke kese pi lete hai"

ashar coffee ka ek sip lete hi kehta hai,"khirad aaj tumne meri coffee mein chinni kyu daal di"

"nahi ashar maine aapki coffee mein chinni nahi dali."khirad says.
"tum hi pee kar dekh lo"ashar give his cup to her.khirad sip his cup & suddenly making face & said "ah kitni kadvi hai".
she said"ye kya tha "
"kyu tum hi to keh rahi thi main bina sugar ke coffee kese pee leta ho,lo ab tumare pine se coffee mithi ho gai...khush"ashar shararat bhare andaz mein kehta hai.
ashar shifts very near to her.khirad blushes,her cheeks become pink.ashar hold her hand,khirad dhere se apna hath chuda leti hai.
"mujhe nahi pata tha aaj-kal ki ladkiya bhi sharmati hai".he saw blush on her face & enjoy the moment.

khirad ashar se kehti hai,"acha sune ashar,kal afsheen aa rahi hai apni shadi mein invite karne ke liy,"
"thats good,chalo acha hai kal sunday hai,kal ghar par hi hounga"ashar replied.


raat ko ashar to so jata hai par khirad ko neend nahi aati,uska dhyan ashar par tha,use dekh kar soch rahi thi"allah ka jitna sukar ada karo,utna kam hai,kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai ye koi meetha khwab to nahi,maine aisi kya neki ki thi jo mujhe allah ne aapke jaise humsafar diy.aap meri zindagi ban gaye hai ashar.aap meri hamesha tareef karte hai ke main kitni khoobsurat ho,par main aapko kese batao ashar ke aap kitne khoobsurat hai,aasman se utre koi noor ki tarah,ashar kash ye sab main aapko bata sakti"khirad ashar ke gaal ko chune ke liy hath badati hai par tabhi apna hath hata leti hai,ye soch kar ki kahi ashar neend na toot jay aur meethi muskan ke sath so jati hai.


next morning,afsheen come to ashar-khirad house to invite for her nikaah.
afsheen khirad se milne uski shaadi ke baad 2-3 baar aa chuki thi,isliy afsheen ashar se bhi mil chuki thi.



precap-more romance...😊



hope u all like it...😊plz comment...




Edited by mishti.rain - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Good but short update.. Pls add more romantic scenes between khisher in next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Thanks for pm. So this story is all about romance. Nice!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
so cute.lovely update.
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-3
At evening,khirad chop the vegetables for dinner in kitchen.wo apne kaam mein itni busy thi ke usko pata hi nahi chala ke ashar kab kitchen mein aaya,jab tak usne notice kiya tab tak ashar uske kareeb tha.he looked into her eyes,his intense staring is something any girl can die for,khirad ka heart zor-zor se dhadak raha tha.he stood so close,he leaned forward to her.
ashar ne apna hath khirad ke waist ki taraf badaya,khirad ne apni ankhein niche jhoka li.tabhi ashar ne khirad ke piche rakhe knife ko utha liya aur dur ho gaya.khirad ko kuch samajh nahi aaya ye kya hua.tabhi ashar ne shararat bhare andaz mein kaha,"knife lena tha aaple katne ke liy".ashar samajh gaya tha,khirad ki kya halat hui hogi gabrahat ki vajah se aur ashar muskurate hue chala gaya.

khirad ko apne upar gussa aa raha tha,usne apne sar par hath marte hue kaha;"bewkoof ladki,ashar ke thode se kareeb aane par meri ye halat ho jati hai,saans aur dil itni tej chalne lagte hai,to jab wo sach mein kareeb aayenge to meri to jaan hi nikal jayegi...phir kehti hai ab main ashar ke kareeb jaana chahti ho,pehle apni gabrahat ka to kuch ilaaz kar"khirad apne aap se chidte hue kahti hai then she again starts chopping vegetables...





next day, ashar office mein kam karte karte thak gaya tha isliy change hone ke liy office ke bahir dekhta hai,musam kafi suhana
hota hai,uska man khirad ke sath time bitane ko karta hai,isliy wo office se jaldi ghar chala jata hai.

ashar ander aate hi khirad ka hath pakadte hue kehta
hai,"chalo bahar chale,aaj acha musam hai."
khirad kehti hai,"acha aap pehle fresh to ho jaye"

ashar agree with her and said,"thik hai main 10 minute mein aata ho,tum koi bahana mat banana"
khirad replied with smile"nahi banaongi"
ashar changed his formal wear to casual t-shirt and jeans

coffee pine aur kuch khane ke baad dono beach par ghoom rahe hote hai,ashar hold her hand tightly,thandi hawa chal rahi hoti hai,khirad ke baal uske chehre par aa rahe hote hai,uska dupatta hawa mein lehra raha hota hai.they both enjoyed each other company.
kale badal aane lagte hai"oh god lagta hai baarish aane vali hai"ashar chidte hue aasman ki tarf dekhta hai,wo khirad ka hath khichte hue kehta hai "chalo ghar chale"
khirad ashar ko rokte hue kehti hai "thodi der aur rokte hai na ashar,kitna acha musam ho raha hai "
ashar say"yaar tumhe pata hai na mujhe barish mein bhigna acha nahi lagta"
tabhi raining starts heavily,ashar bhagte hue car mein ja kar baith jata hai,khirad bhi car ke paas aa jati hai,par bahir hi rehti hai.khirad asmaan ki taraf apna chehra kar ke thandi hawa,baarish ki boonde,mitti ki khushboo ko mehsoos kar rahi hoti hai.khirad bahut khush ho rahi hoti hai aur ashar khirad ko dekh kar khush ho raha hota hai.
thodi der baad ashar khirad ka hath pakad kar car mein bitha leta hai aur khud bhi baith jata hai,kehta hai"bas karo khirad,kitna bhigogi,bimaar ho jaogi,kuch dino baad afsheen ki shadi mein bhi jana hai ke nahi.bimaar ho jaogi to afsheen mujhe kahegi maine uski saheli ka dhyan nahi rakha"
khirad ashar ko kisi ziddi bache ki tarah dekh rahi hoti hai,jaise uski zid nahi puri ki gai ho,ashar ko uski masumiyat par hasi aa rahi hoti hai.they returned to home.

precap-afsheen mehendi...


hope u like it...
Edited by mishti.rain - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
nice write ups. loved it.please continue soon.

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