Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Uptd chap 8(part A, part B) (pg 123)

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sho123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: sho123
chappi is mind blowing di
jo teach them right lesson
ohoh ja was thinking that jo will kiss him but our jo is not an ordinary one instead of him she choose kaka good
then jas gloomy scene remembering past bitter events sad
thanks for pm

continue soon

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Dorperle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#472

Nice , crispy and amazing update.

I love the fatoo not accepting the challenge
Jodha has no other way around yet how the heck
all the boys ...arey aise kaise bhag gaye..😲😡

Jodha is cute and brainiac , poor peon😆
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jalal just staring at her..hehe..😳

But I felt for him, 😭 he is in so much pain and at the top he doesn't

tel anyone either

Sometimes it is good to be quiet...

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meera

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Posted: 9 years ago

#473

AKka such a wonderful story i read all the 3 chappiea

lovely character scetch loved jo's character her bold lovely cute beautiness was well described mothi and jo's bonding more like frnds and jalal's unknown attraction towards jo

great nose cut to ruks..hehe

jo completed her task great job girl

akka really waiting fr nxt chappy

love u so much

plz update soonish akka...

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melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: avika444

Thanks for the lovely comment dear 😊
😊

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swetiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#475

amazing
jo xompleted the dare
& amused everyone..
esp jalal
hehe
loved it di
update asap

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ajuswa19pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#476

awwweee di!!!!😳

this was so guud😉

loved my smarty jodha

haayye she took d challenge

n every1 was like...😆

loved d chappy di😳

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paru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#477

awesome update yaar
loved it soo much
very well written
thank you for pm

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#478

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Titus

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Posted: 9 years ago

#479

Amazing chappy di
jodha saved nafisa with that vevil adham...and the answer of adham's question by jodha is mindblowing...
Wow nafisha and jodha become friend...atleast she met seniour of her which is nice than others
and funny thing is jalal really got shock after knowing someone dare to call him JALLAD
thanks for pm di
update next soon

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maheshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#480

nice update.jo and aadham interaction was interesting.i liked the way jo teach this jerk a lesson.jalal nafisa part was hilarious, so our hero came to his new name.u are an amazing writer balancing ur both stories is not an eeasy task.thanks for pm.