Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Uptd chap 8(part A, part B) (pg 123)

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

chapter 3

wow amazing update avika akka...

moti was first trap of ruks...

but hw can moti do that when she is all ready someone else's love...

i like d way jodha took stand for moti...

here starts taga war b\w jodha nd ruks... i loved it...

wow d way jodha was seeing everyone nd they where hiding haha so sad of jo...

i like d way u told about what jodha was thinking...

everyone thought it was jalal but jodha surprised everyone good move jodha...

by this act of her she made her self different from other in everyone's eye especially jalal...

lovely update akka ...

nw have to comment on chapter 4...

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Swarna

@Swarna_99

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Mind blowing chapter.

Liked the library scene.

Jodha saved nafisa from that Adham khan.

Well that's is our fiery princess attitude.

Jalal tagged as jallad. ...

Jalal is Nafisa's soul brother. ...awesome

Thanks for pm.

Please continue soon.

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#483

Wonderful update Akka
Jalal was sitting with her sister n jodha imagined something other
Wow jallad hilter nice pair right !!
Jodha gave a nice answer to that jerk and saved nafisa
Nafisa cute girl
I loved the talk between jodha-nafisa
Jalal is shocked to know that he is jallad
Hahaha
Both Laughed from their heart
N now onwards I think he ll start following jodha
Looking forward for the next chapters
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

woo awesome update
waiting for next update
update soon

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Awesome chappy dear

Update soon buddy

Update EVAB also

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SomeoneloveJA

@SomeoneloveJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#486

wow Marvellous update dear...👏
Jo saved Ja's soul sister...her answer is perfect...i love it...
she gave Adham a lesson...
Jo became friend with Nafisa...
Now Jo knew relationship between Ja and Nafisa..
Now Ja knew Jo's name ..
Nafisa is cute...she will become a bridge connecting between JaJo..
Thanks for pm..Avi...🤗

Edited by CindyTruong - 9 years ago

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#487

awesome chapter dii!

jodha and jalal now know each other..

though indirectly..😉

loved it!

update soon!

thanx for the pm...😃

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#488

chapter 4

awesome update avika akka...

bold side of jodha nd caring and protective side of jalal was seen...

wow jodha was getting irritated just to see that jalal was with other girl..

ooh god y do jodha always see jalal with negative side only...

poor jalal was setting with his sis bout she took it in wrong way but it was cleared later that is good...

wow moti becoz of her phone was in silent jodha nd sujamal was worried... nd d file thing is common with hubby wife...

wow so stupid person for d chapter is adham...

poor nafisa was hurt becoz for this stupid...

jalal was ready to jump to save his soul sister before that hitler wow d way jodha handled adham was amazing...

nd jalal came up when it was his time to protect d two...

wow jodha nd nafisa talk was cute... poor girl cant talk...good that she nd jodha r friends nw...

wow so caring bro jalal was nd he got to knw his nuw name nd also jodha which was so required for him...

i loved this update akka...

waiting for next part...

thanks for pm...

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#489

lovely update... 😛 wow adham got to taste d medicine form hitler... 😆 😉 and wow she saved nafisa jalal's soul sis too from adham... 😉 but looks like jo's name ahs got imprinted in jalal's mind... 😆 loved d way jo handled adham... ⭐️ and best part was jalal getting a new name jallad and luckily he got to knw also dat was amazing... 😆 😉 update soon... 😃