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Posted: 9 years ago

sorry for late update

and thank u for so many likes and comments


Part 4A

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Fab4 come inside and saw that nandini is shocked standing in kitchen with a jug full of water and manik is laughing like a mad person

Fab4 is happy and shocked because they today saw him laughing like a child who don't have any problems in his life at all

But suddenly they notice that manik smile turned into shocked face because nandini throw all the water on manik from jug and went away from their outside the flat after taking her purse and banging door behind.

Fab4 also shocked with nandinis this act but didn't say anything and looks towards manik and thinking what will manik do now?

Fab4 is looking towards manik that now what will he do with nandini because he never leave anybody without taking revenge

They standing silent from last 5 min and watching maniks face and manik also standing because he can't understand what is happening with him

First she make him eat chilly then she give him cold coffee and then again ake him shower in cold water,

He can't understand her behavior sometimes she care of him and sometimes they fight like children

Manik is in his thoughts lost and fab4 also shocked because they never saw this awatar of manik after someone mess with him

They all come out from their shocked state and start gossiping about manik and nandini and manik still standing lost

Mukti: cabir what happen between these two that manik didn't do anything to nandini and standing like a statue

Cabir: mukti that I trying to figure out what these two r doing here in the kitchen

I m sure manik has done something which make nandini take such big step and still manik is standing

Druv also looking and finding a way to make manik come to real world

Alya is in another world, she is burning with anger because she remember that one time she unintentionally make him wet by water when he is eating food and that time manik scold her that much that after that whenever she eat never take water herself after hearing warning from manik that she will not drink water when she eat food.

And today nandini make him completely drenched in water and still he is standing like a statue and lost

When there is 10 min passed and manik still didn't come out his nandini land, because he is lost in nandinis care free , innocent face, how she feels guilty when she make him eat chilly and after make him chocolate and how he behave child with her like not eating chocolate and then drink all cold coffee because he don't wanna share cold coffee with his friends because it is made by his nandini and his nandini what is he thinking ,

His both mind and heart are fighting and he can't figure out what is happening with him

He thoughts that he never behave childish with anyone then y he is behaving with nandini

What will be she thinking of him and these thoughts are never leave his mind till he hear a loud voice of alya

Alya is watching manik lost in his thoughts and this is increasing his anger because she is feeling insecure because the place she wants in maniks life is nandini getting without doing anything and she wants answer from manik that y he is doing all this

Alya: manikkk in a loud voice and by this voice manik come out from his lala land and fab3 also looks towards alya because they don't know what Is manik thinking and if alya again start her drama then they don't know what will manik do with alya,

And they are afraid that manik will not clam down before removing his anger on someone

Manik: what happen alya? Y r u shouting?

And this is again come as a shock that how can manik is behaving normal after that incident because he never leave anyone who make fall a drop of water on his cloths or his body and here nandini give him full bath and still he is standing statue

Cabir come near him and check his forehead and said fever to nhi hai

And then went near maniks ear and said but I can sense NANDINI FEVER full amount me hai

Manik: what?

Cabir: what? I m asking how is your class? All good

Mukti: cabir manik what r u talking can u explain us whats going on here

Cabir: mukti can't u see manik baba is calm down without braking things or hurting himself or someone

In fact I think is to didn't even angry on someone

Manik also didn't understand what he is saying

Manik: what r u saying cabir? Y I will be angry on anyone of u?

Cabir: yes manik u r not angry with us but I m asking u r u angry on someone?

Manik: someone? Y I will be angry on someone?

Alya: that someone is NANDINI,

Manik: nandini?? Y I will be angry on NANDINI?

And this increase alya mukti anger to next level and cabir is enjoying maniks confused face because he know s what is happing with manik and druv is still trying to find why manik is behaving so calm

Mukti: yes NANDINI, because she pour a full jug of water on your face and u r standing here still clam and without anger

Alya: yes and didn't u want to take revenge from that bloody commoner

Manik: ALYAA in lod voice

Manik: her name is NANDINI, NANDINI MURTY, get that straight in your head because next time if u will speak something ill about someone then I will forgot u r my friend

Alya: what? For some random girl u r fighting with your friends , u r fighting with fab5, u know what I m sick and tired of this fab5 drama, I am leaving from here and she run from there crying

Manik: what happen with her? Y she is behaving like this

Mukti: manik alya is alright nothing happen with her but u r changed because didn't u remember when alya make fall water guilass on your dress when we r eating food and you scold her that much that she didn't drink water for 2 days and today also she didn't drink water when eat food because of your warning

U shout on your friend best friend when she pour water on u and u r standing clam and happy here after some outsider make u wet completely in water, u r changed , I think u didn't care about fab5 more, I also leaving from here

Come when u have answer y u did this and y u r not angry on manik and she leaves

Manik : ohhh he also remember his warning when he give alya and he understand y alya and mukti behaving like this

Manik looks towards druv for some answer but he leave without saying anything

Manik then turn towards cabir and cabir also now standing serious after hearing alya mukti

And when manik about to say something to cabir cabir said

Cabir: talk when u have answer mukti asked u for and hugs him a brotherly and said sit and think and leave manik in thoughts

Manik is standing on gate with expressionless face and watching leaving everyone

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here is 4 part of this ff

i know small update but i m giving because many of u asking to update this also

so i will give small small update of this story

i hope u guys like it


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Edited by Mr_Rahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Manik in Nandini land😆
But Poor Manik muklya got angry with him
Update next part soon...
Thanq for pm

Stay Blessed
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally u updated. ..
Wow.. something is happening between manan. .
Alya is seriously irritating. ..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story
I loved it
Its concept is too good
Waiting for next update eagerly 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello there 😊...first of all thank you so much for the pm😊...nandu pour water on manik n manik was still cool with that he was not angry n was in nandini land😆...aaliya is so irritating 😡...mukti n aaliya was so shocked... Manik shout on aaliya because she called nandu a commoner unexpected...
Aaliya don't drink water while eating because manik warn her haha awesome that was 🤣...cabir a real friend who always support manik...
He is so adorable... U penned it beautifully... Amazing...
Thanks for the update...

OK one question what should I address you...

Continue soon...

Eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dude u update
Still left on suspense

Awesome tha yr
Do pm me


Keep it up

Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Not update .. But after a long time haa...
I loved the confusion of manik...
But this alya na... Sach me she is irritating...

Continue soon dear...

Tysm for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanx for pm
Manik in nandinis land
Bt alya mukti got angry wid him
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally

after a long long time

we got a fresh update

chotu tha but nice


Aliya n mukti angry as manik was completely lost in nandini land

only kabeer understood

awesome sa update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... Amazing update... Manik in denial phase... But seems like fab5 are not liking it... But fir bhi it was so much fun reading the update...
Loved it... N story is proceeding amazingly...
Thanxx for the pm

Hoping for a fata fat wala update...

Keep smiling
Saty blessed
😃

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