ROOMMATE: The Right Mistake(new ff) [ON HOLD]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Friends

How are you All? ALL GOOD?
i am new here on INDIA FORUM. I came 1 week ago on here and one thing i get to know about is that here ratio of Girls are very very very high rather then Boys. so i am nervous a little one(THODA SA). I hope you Guys Don't have Problem with my HINDI. 😃😃

So here i am starting MY 1st WORK i hope U guys like it and support me in my new Journey.

Hey Guys i have an problem that more then 10 post can't do in one day. it says i am spamming here.
so i take time and come today to start new Journey. YOU KNOW ITS MONDAY

I HATE MONDAYS YAAR. After a Free day Again 6 Tiring Days. I know you guys also HATE NA😆😆

Sorry sorry, i come here to give my update and here i start my Lecture, this is only my problem, whenever i found a place to speak and write i join it, because its my HOBBY and Passion. so now enough of this BULLSHIT. i know you GUYS LIKE MY THIS BAK BAK but i will tell you later about this.


okay to here i come on my 1st story


The Name of My Story is

"ROOMMATE: The Right Mistake"



The banner of this story is here





so Guys you like it
yeah i know u did

so the basically the story is FUNNY COMEDY LOVE STORY

mean my story is mixture of FUN, COMEDY, ROMANCE, FRIENDSHIP, LOVE, aur bhi bhot kuch😳😳

okay now i tell you about story then you tell me did you like this concept

" This story is Basically based on Roommates, means how two peoples lives in sharing rooms when they have money problem. in my story also Manik is a Rich Family Brat kid and lives in a Apartment. I mean He is collage student and he don't like to live at home with Family, he wants his privacy you guys know for what. yeah his home is Much Nearer to his collage but he leaves far in a apartment which far away from his collage. That Apartment is not in city because near city rent is very high so they lives here. yeah maniks friends also lives in the same apartment

i mean they are FAB5 and lives in a apartment by Rent away from Family Just for FUN, PRIVACY, we also know at home we are not free Flying BIRDS. so

that Apartment have 10 rooms. all rooms are Booked already and in which 3 rooms on top Flore for FAB5,

okay i am fool am telling you details.

so i am saying they lives on rent and one day their their House Holder come with a Girl and said to Manik to Share room with her. yeah that girl is nandini. manik denys first but when house holder said to empty room if he didn't share then manik agreed with him

then he looks towards nandini and thought in mind

'so i promise my self if i will not make her live this room in one week then i will change my NAME' and gives smirk to nandini and goes inside

he said: ANDAR AAJAYIYE NANDINI JI, AAPKA HI ROOM HAI.(plz come inside think your room it)

nandini feels happy and come inside but she don't know what destiny is waiting for her

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so this story will tell you how manik hate nandini in sharing room, and he do many thing to make her live but nandini is nandini and she didn't leave and by this they slowly slowly falls in love and make a very GOOD LOVE STORY.



so tell me how is this concept

so am i start this concept as my story

tell me na yar
i am here only for entertain you guys.


With Hug
MyGuitarVina
(Rahul)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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i am Presenting you here

👏😃INDEX😃👏
Part 1 : Page 6
Part 2 : Page 14

Promo : Page 29
Part 3 : Page 44
Part 4A : Page 51
Edited by Mr_Rahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello dosto


i am new here
can't update due to problem of spamming
i will give update 1st today evening if this problem is solved

rahul
Edited by MyGuitarVina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept.. Awesome start..
Manan sharing same room sounds interesting...
Manik will make her leave the room in 1 week..wooo..!!
Looking forward...
Continue soon...

_Myrah
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept! Continue soon!😃 All the best! 👍🏼
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Interesting!! Please continue soon... But I don't understand, if there are 10 rooms in the apartment then why nandini needs to share the room with a guy only.. She can share it with any of the girl from fab5... Please do explore this part also in ur story... 😊 😊
Edited by Sonalmanan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay.. So we have a new guy over here..!!
Okay.. I know.. You must be feeling.. Weird..!! Less guys.. No no.. Very less guys and like.. Many girls..!! But don't worry.. We all are very friendly..!!
And i am always up for making friends..!! So friends..?? But i am just in class-8 and about you.. I don't know.. But hardly matters...!! Friends are friends..
Achha.. Okay.. Enough.. Even i talk alot..!!
So.. The idea was nice..!! And you know what..!!
I am just addicted to this forum..!!
Update the chapter-1 soon..!!


REGARDS..
ADYA..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hai rahul...
welcome to manan world...

waiting for update with lot of manan😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept
Update soon...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to forum 😊
Nice start. Pls do cont

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