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Furball ... My very own Anna...
Sometimes our own light goes out and there, in that fleeting second of darkness we sense someones presence; in another fleeting second we see a flicker of the flame and come to terms that this very person is here to rekindle the spark.
You have been that someone Sis... And I'm so happy to have found you.
Okay me emo now... What do you expect after me reading this work of yours? All I can do is
Baccha you had me going all teary eyed I must say. The way you have depicted the MaNan love that transpires even after death. Ah... that took my heart away. Loved how you slowly revealed that the girl Manik was gently watching over was their "Rey- a- light"... MaNan's Roshini.
Now that's storytelling for me.. when you keep the reader glued to every word and bring in an array of emotions... to have the reader feel the pain that the character feels to ear along with the character... that is to have succeeded as a writer. You have done that Sista... And I love you to the moon and back (and the time travel isn't over yet... I'm on my way back to the moon again).
As I read...I had this feel of reaching home all drenched in the rain and then being offered hot coffee to drive the shivers away and finally being tucked into the bed with a warm comforter. Now that's what your writing did. I was sad at MaNan not being together in the physical sense and yet that Nandini had left behind the very important part of her... their Roshini... to light her Manik's way... just as she did... Humesha. And he took great care of what she left behind... their Roshini... to shower all his love... just as he always did... Humesha.
I have lots to say but keeping in mind that there are other writeups and stories of yours that I need to read and comment on... I shall save the same... for I know you will leave me wordless. I atleast need to come with a decent comment after your treats.
Thanks for writing such a heart tugging story Baccha... 🤗
Till we meet again its...
Love and Huggies and Pampers
Sneha
P.S. : Why do I feel that the next story will have me in tears?...Send in the tissues... And remember I'll need all the warm hugs.
And one more connection just to let you know we are soul minions for a reason :
I love the unplugged version of the Humdard song... the song happens to be one of my favourite and this version kinda makes it more endearing... i love with is version from quite some time now. So I sing the same for you Sista...
" Tum agaye , zindagi aagayi"
You came Sis and I knew, I had this part of childhood that I will never lose.
"Dil ko mere , Raunakein mil gayi"
My heart lights up just 'cause they is a "Rey--a- light" that smiles beside me.
"Rab kare waqt bhi, Ruk jayye yahin"
I 'd ask God to freeze these moments with you sis, for I'd love to cherish it more
"Ye pal main jee loon sada"
I 'd loved to live this moment forever, for it means a world to me Sis
"Ab door jana nahi"
And now that I have found you, I'll never let you go nor give up on you Sis.
"Jo tu mera humdard hai"
We are soul sisters... soul minions... so undoubtedly Humdards
Love you Sis 🤗
Sometimes our own light goes out and there, in that fleeting second of darkness we sense someones presence; in another fleeting second we see a flicker of the flame and come to terms that this very person is here to rekindle the spark.
You have been that someone Sis... And I'm so happy to have found you.
Okay me emo now... What do you expect after me reading this work of yours? All I can do is
Baccha you had me going all teary eyed I must say. The way you have depicted the MaNan love that transpires even after death. Ah... that took my heart away. Loved how you slowly revealed that the girl Manik was gently watching over was their "Rey- a- light"... MaNan's Roshini.
Now that's storytelling for me.. when you keep the reader glued to every word and bring in an array of emotions... to have the reader feel the pain that the character feels to ear along with the character... that is to have succeeded as a writer. You have done that Sista... And I love you to the moon and back (and the time travel isn't over yet... I'm on my way back to the moon again).
As I read...I had this feel of reaching home all drenched in the rain and then being offered hot coffee to drive the shivers away and finally being tucked into the bed with a warm comforter. Now that's what your writing did. I was sad at MaNan not being together in the physical sense and yet that Nandini had left behind the very important part of her... their Roshini... to light her Manik's way... just as she did... Humesha. And he took great care of what she left behind... their Roshini... to shower all his love... just as he always did... Humesha.
I have lots to say but keeping in mind that there are other writeups and stories of yours that I need to read and comment on... I shall save the same... for I know you will leave me wordless. I atleast need to come with a decent comment after your treats.
Thanks for writing such a heart tugging story Baccha... 🤗
Till we meet again its...
Love and Huggies and Pampers
Sneha
P.S. : Why do I feel that the next story will have me in tears?...Send in the tissues... And remember I'll need all the warm hugs.
And one more connection just to let you know we are soul minions for a reason :
I love the unplugged version of the Humdard song... the song happens to be one of my favourite and this version kinda makes it more endearing... i love with is version from quite some time now. So I sing the same for you Sista...
" Tum agaye , zindagi aagayi"
You came Sis and I knew, I had this part of childhood that I will never lose.
"Dil ko mere , Raunakein mil gayi"
My heart lights up just 'cause they is a "Rey--a- light" that smiles beside me.
"Rab kare waqt bhi, Ruk jayye yahin"
I 'd ask God to freeze these moments with you sis, for I'd love to cherish it more
"Ye pal main jee loon sada"
I 'd loved to live this moment forever, for it means a world to me Sis
"Ab door jana nahi"
And now that I have found you, I'll never let you go nor give up on you Sis.
"Jo tu mera humdard hai"
We are soul sisters... soul minions... so undoubtedly Humdards
Love you Sis 🤗
Ufff Yeh Love Hai Mushkil
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