Manan OS: His Light - Page 4

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Yayyers!!! okies reserved for meee and thankyou for this! ILY! <3

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So I want to start off by saying that if you and I lived even a tad more closer to each other like even if it was just the same suburb, without caring what's the time, whether you would be sleeping or not, studying or not... I would just rock up at your house and give you the tightest hug possible. If tears could express how absolutely beautiful, miraculously perfect and inspirational your writing is, I would gift you a sea. And i'll be honest here; I haven't cried as much as today in a very long time.

Surprisingly with the tears though, my heart was feeling an usual sense of soothing, like some kind of pain was being relieved. It was almost like the emotions that he went through at every stage of this story, my heart could feel those very exact emotions as I read on. I smiled in his happiness and cried in his pain. And I really want to thankyou for this rather ardent yet emotional experience. You know we've known each other for hardly 2 weeks now but in these few days I've learnt so much from you and I can undoubtedly say that no matter how many novels i grow up to read or how many pieces of creative I try to write myself, I will just never be able to feel the same emotions whilst reading a book that I experience when I read your work. The sentiments that you evoke in me whilst and after I finish reading your work always leave me speechless and just stunned. Like how? just how? And well as for me writing a story... unm let's just not even try and get me to write one after today because my mind is absolutely blank Your ideas, your use of dialogues, the aura you create around Manan is just so realistically heart-capturing. No way can I mirror even half of the perfection the way you weave your work.

Your writing was just so crisp and precise that again I felt I could paint every details of each of the scenes in this story. And well obviously just like the show, I had my favorite bits in this story too. The only difference is that when we watch the episode I usually have just one or maximum 2 favorite scenes but with your piece my numbers escalated haha After sometime, each line, each word they said to each other had it's own beauty. I exceptionally loved the way you describe Roshni's value in Manik's life. Oh just what a heart-wrenching ride for me it was to read that description. I actually didn't know whether my tears were weeping Nandini's loss or they were joying Roshni's existence in Manik's life. His new yet still the old shining light. His Nandini's promise of hamesha shining for him. She never gave up on him did she... not even for a single second. Gahhh you have quite a crazy affect on me you do realise that don''t you? Like I want to go on and on and on about this piece but you know what, I'm not going to. Because this is your piece and it's too good to be even broken down for any sort of analysis. And well then there's the obvious reason that if I start going through what i loved and liked and loved and liked about this piece thennn I'm going to probably end up taking up a whole page of this post with just my reply.

All I really want to say is you made it even harder for me to find the right words to write you a reply worthy of your piece. I probably even blabbered and repeated myself so much here because like I actually don't have any words. You already know I have a soft corner for tragedies just like you, so for me, I couldn't have asked for anything better than this. This is as best as it gets. I'm seriously so so proud of you and proud of the way you just conceptualize your work and I truly hope your passion for writing remains with you forever because it really is a talent that very few are gifted with. You already know I love you to the moon and back but no harm in it saying it again hahah I loved the piece and of course love you for writing one for me this soon and love you for just being you!

Stay smiling <3

Your Twinkie <3 :)

Originally posted by: LoveAngelsimmy

its so beautiful..
vry well written...

Originally posted by: piyu008

beautiful dear..u write beautifully ..one request nxt time plz write happy ending..i don't like crying ..u made me cry with this one😭

Originally posted by: Manan_aRMAAN

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nah

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Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili

I am speechless...U killed this emotional fool... 😭

I find so many things to make this OS my fav

first... this song is a part of my life...and I too do writings with song link

2nd... motherhood... some personal reasons

3rd... MaNan... it is obvious so comes 3rd

4th and shocking coincidence (don't want to spoil your post with this info but I'll PM you after you read it)

I found you...👏

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie

*Crying*

Originally posted by: serenam

Beautiful!

I write this even as tears flow down my cheeks and simultaneously, I smile!

Thank you for writing such a lovely, poignant story!

Love,

Serena

Originally posted by: navk

So beautiful

I was crying

U had written fabulously

Loved it