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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha_ash

u r the best I m so sorry cos I can't comment long please exams hai yarr continue it soon I think u should continue frm the chapters u left y to start all over again I really want to know n read more yar mtlb I have to wait like 12 chps more for the further story but I know u have started this so now u can't go back its ok I will wait dil toh nhi maaan rha but my love for this story is more then waiting I really wanna tel u phle hi ki start frm wr u left but tym nhi mila I thought ajj raat tak I will give my suggestion but u started all over again but I really respect ur decision n I will wait dil se for this awesome fantastic story remember I love this story frm the core of my heart just bcozu have portrayed the emotions so well when u had stopped it I have really begged u to start this story n now my happiness has no boundaries really like I feel I m on 9th cloud!! it was suppose to b a short comment but I really can't stop writing it for u u r the best u rock sorry exams hai if I don't comment please dont consider me as a silent reader I m not just I don't have tym for commenting but I always do slowly n gradually so ya that's all byee love u u rock1!!


No story is not gonna be the same
I have mentioned already that I have come up with a new plot so will be editing the previous post and then updating them! So u need to read them all over again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Wow u r back with updates.
Awesome.u r reposting darbadar dil with new storyline. Great idea.looking forward for Story. We know u will rock.all the best.give us an rollercoaster ride of manan's world.will support u always.
Coming to update, manan's intro was mindblowing. Loved it. Manik's pov was phenomenal.song part was mindblowing. Nandini rocked.manan's meet was marvellous. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.love to read more
Keep shining
Stay blessed😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Hey i'm new reader of your ff its amazing i read it twice... I once read it on your old thread long back the time i joined If but was not able to comment but now i'll comment... Starting was awesome... Manik meeting nandini after years... But what happen between them why nandini left him wanna know plsss count. Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Wow finally its back with a bang !!!!

Updt was beautiful

Continue soonsoon 😉 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
This feels so good!!!
The story is back..
And yaa I remember it ( because I had a doubt that I had forgotten it)...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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finally u r back with this story...i was waiting for u to continue this story since so long...
but this time u dint added pics like last time...i still remember u had so many pics last time...the photo kept on manik's desk (in the prologue)...her outfit...the scene when everybody showed the light of lighters n there phones when she opened her eyes...n sang the sa ni ga re...for the second time...that pic was just awesome...
n about the song i had first heard it when i read ur this ff before...n now when i was reading it i dint even needed to play it as i could just sing it along while reading...really as i had told u before also at that time just feel in love with the song...
as i have read ur this ff before so i will not be giving guesses about what will happen next or what dose NM stands for...n about there reactions...just waiting for u to continue the story further ahead from were u left...n sorry if i wont comment till then on every chapter...as i had commented it last time...on every chapter...so sorry about it...but i am eagerly waiting for u to reach that point of story...
n i just wanted to ask a question will u change the plot or it will remain the same till the part u had written earlier...plz do tell...
n once again i'm every as u had again started writing one of my favorite stories again...n this time plz dont discontinue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Glad that its back,
all the best for it and further chapters jaldi jaldi do na please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Yehhh
Darbadar dil is back
Mei toh story bhul hi gyi thi
Abhi phir se 1st chapter read kiya
Jaldi se update de do plz
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Devanshigupta14

finally u r back with this story...i was waiting for u to continue this story since so long...

but this time u dint added pics like last time...i still remember u had so many pics last time...the photo kept on manik's desk (in the prologue)...her outfit...the scene when everybody showed the light of lighters n there phones when she opened her eyes...n sang the sa ni ga re...for the second time...that pic was just awesome...
n about the song i had first heard it when i read ur this ff before...n now when i was reading it i dint even needed to play it as i could just sing it along while reading...really as i had told u before also at that time just feel in love with the song...
as i have read ur this ff before so i will not be giving guesses about what will happen next or what dose NM stands for...n about there reactions...just waiting for u to continue the story further ahead from were u left...n sorry if i wont comment till then on every chapter...as i had commented it last time...on every chapter...so sorry about it...but i am eagerly waiting for u to reach that point of story...
n i just wanted to ask a question will u change the plot or it will remain the same till the part u had written earlier...plz do tell...
n once again i'm every as u had again started writing one of my favorite stories again...n this time plz dont discontinue...


Nope! If I said I have changed the plot that means things are gonna change in too!
From next chapter things are gonna open up!
And this time I will keep as minimal chapter as I can so yeah! It's converted into a thriller so things are deco gonna change and actually past will be reveled from the next part!

Those who have read the stroy earlier they will have new things to solve in it and new once it's gonna get complicated!

So yeah I would say don't wait till 12 chapter coz tabs tak I would have finished many things up...

Last story I targeted as 25 chapters but this time around 30 my target is so yes things are definitely gonna change! Rest it's ur call!

Awe! About pictures, yes I had to put them here but my iPad wasn't supporting them so next time will add images too!

Lol! Don't worry I am not gonna disconnect... It will definitely see its end!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Glad u r reposting it
Fab prologue n chap
Fanx 4 pm

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