MaNan SS||Darbadar Dil|| chapter 5 (5/4) - Page 2

Misha !!
the essence of the story remains same..
first class prologue and chapter 1...
u din change the gist of it :) :) :) :)

sooo happpyyy !!!

yaayyy 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

i am already greedy for more !!

i can haq se request u ki pehle kuch chapters fatafat dena...
cz i already read prev 12 and then u kept me waiting for ages...
so punishment fr u...😆😆😆😆😉😉
bahott jaldi update karna...

and the pain...
dam manik malhotra in pain
and him adressing nandini as nandini malhotra is so INTENSE...

LOVE IT...
back to my dreamland...
jaldi update karo..i am greedy 😃

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: divtan

Misha !!
the essence of the story remains same..
first class prologue and chapter 1...
u din change the gist of it :) :) :) :)

sooo happpyyy !!!

yaayyy 😃

i am already greedy for more !!

i can haq se request u ki pehle kuch chapters fatafat dena...
cz i already read prev 12 and then u kept me waiting for ages...
so punishment fr u...😉
bahott jaldi update karna...

and the pain...
dam manik malhotra in pain
and him adressing nandini as nandini malhotra is so INTENSE...

LOVE IT...
back to my dreamland...
jaldi update karo..i am greedy 😃

Thanks for the PM

Wow...
Thanks for update...

Awesome prologue...

N tha chapter is just amazing.. .

Lovely Ya. .

Manik and nandini both are very hurt.. ..

Both still love each other. ...

NM means? ?? Nandini Malhotra Or nandini Marty?? ??

Please update soon Ya.. ..

Please 😆

Wow. Finally U R Back.. Mish. M Shoo Happieee. Update pdkr purane dino ki yaadein taja ho gyi... Matlb Update yaad aa gyi.. everything was just likee same.. Vhi Mjedar Dhinchak update. . Intensity se bhari huyi .. Feelzz Awesome !!!! while reading this. . Thodaa jaldi update de denaa. okieee.. Will wait for next. ...

u r the best I m so sorry cos I can't comment long please exams hai yarr continue it soon I think u should continue frm the chapters u left y to start all over again I really want to know n read more yar mtlb I have to wait like 12 chps more for the further story but I know u have started this so now u can't go back its ok I will wait dil toh nhi maaan rha but my love for this story is more then waiting I really wanna tel u phle hi ki start frm wr u left but tym nhi mila I thought ajj raat tak I will give my suggestion but u started all over again but I really respect ur decision n I will wait dil se for this awesome fantastic story remember I love this story frm the core of my heart just bcozu have portrayed the emotions so well when u had stopped it I have really begged u to start this story n now my happiness has no boundaries really like I feel I m on 9th cloud!! it was suppose to b a short comment but I really can't stop writing it for u u r the best u rock sorry exams hai if I don't comment please dont consider me as a silent reader I m not just I don't have tym for commenting but I always do slowly n gradually so ya that's all byee love u u rock1!!

Nice update.
Loved it once again.
Will wait desperately when u will reach to the chapter where u left last time.
I know u will rock dear.
Next part soon please.

Omg
It was so good
I luvd it
It was so beautiful
Plz post soon

I m loving it dear nd that song was magical

Awsum

Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Interesting
It starts from seperation😭
Like Manik I am also so curious 2 know what made Nandu so aloof😕
Cont soon

Wowooo soooioo dammm excited tooo good loveddd it awesome superb amazing update plz cont soon thanks for pm😛