ragya os the equal and opposite reaction EPILOGUE up page 8

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I am totally disturbed after watching todays news segmetns laksh's slap to shekhar was too bad and he still had no regrets and so i am here with this os it is my point of view about how should things happen laksh stooped lower than ragini pls don't kill me after reading this i seriously think this will be the genuine reaction of any girl if her father is treated this way so badly...

Laksh's dirty plan was out. Ragini was continousely crying.Tears blurred her vision Laksh was contiously speaking and speaking all sorts of rubbish against her till then she accepted it as a punishment for her misdeeds.But suddenly there was a loud sound in a fraction of second it was repeated again. Someone was slapped. Ragini shook her head up , yes Shekhar her father have slapped laksh and vice-versa. But wait laksh slapped Shekhar. Now, her eyes which were teary and had so much moisture were dry, dry in a second. They were now not regretting but filled with anger . The heart which still loved laksh even after betrayal now stopped throbbing for him. It was rather regretting, regretting be in love with this cheap spoilt brat. SwaSan lost all hopes of uniting. Their eyes were now filled with moisture but still they knew that now even the last weak strings of their union were now broken. The hall was filleed with deadly silence, broken by Dp-

DP- Laksh yeh sab kya hai?

L- ba Papa Bas, Thak gaya hoon mai. Thak gaya hoon achha bante bante, aap sabki baat mante mante. Aur yeh to Lucky hai, laksh to mar gaya kyuki acchai ke badle use kewal daga hi mila. Yeh... Yeh ghatiya sooch wali ragini mili.

R- Bas Laksh, ek aur shabd nahi sunenge ham.

L- Tum toh chup ho jao ragini.

r- nahi hue toh kya karenge?

She ran upstairs and yees she went into Laksh's room leaving everybody dumbstruck. She threw her bag on the enterence with a bang and then came down too with her sitar and she then placed it near her bag.

But her hand were still not empty; they had somethings more. She now headed towards hall with. With rage in her eyes, so much powerful that she appeared as goddess KALI, ready to burn Laksh with this rage.

R- Hum chup nahi honge Lash aaj Aaj humein ghin aati hai khud pe jo aapse nahi nahi, TUJH JAISE GHATIYA JANWAR se pyaarkiya jis maa k liye tadpe usi ko dhokha diya. Saalon baad mili behen ko dhokha diya. Saalon tak jis Dadi Ma ne hamari maa ki tarha humein pala- posa, unke Sanskaaron ko gali di ... CHI ... Samajh nahi aata hai kaise itna gir gaye aur kiske liye gir gaye. Thujh jaise NAKARA aur GHATIYA insaan k liye sach mein aaj k baad kabhi khud se nazarein nahi mila payenge.

Laksh wa s dumbstruck at the words. He was now numb. The actions and words he spoke. HE VOMITED, HE POISONED. The two families were completely churning in his head.

R- Par acha hua laksh aaj humein khud par garv h kyunki beete mahino se hum swara se mafi mangrhe the ki humne uski zindgi kharab kari par nahi aaj garv se kehte h ki humne uski zindgi ek janwar se bachali

Now ragini headed towards mandap

R- yahin aapne iss ladki ke saath saat vachan liya h na ( pointing towards the hawan kund whose fire was now anguished or may be was transfered to her)

Ragini dropped the articles in her hand in the hawan kund. These were both of her shadi ke jode wore in laks's name. she empied the sindur bottle over it, broke her mangalsutra as it was worn for the safeguard of the person who distructed her. She set them all on fire in that kund..

r- Haan toh mr. Laksh maheshwari tumse aaj hum 5 wade karte h. Pehla ki apne papa ke upman ka badla lenge ; Doosra aaj se khudko tumse humesha k liye aazad karte h ; teesra ki badla hum sirf tmse lenge tumhare parivar se nahi; chautha ki badla esa lenge ki jab jab hmara zikar hoga tab tab tumhari aatma kamp uthegi ... Aur yeh badla tabhi pura hoga jab tum apne ghutno k bad rengkar humare ghar ki dehleez par aaoge aur apni galti ki mafi aur saaza mangoge aur panchwa aur akri wada h ki hum tumhe tab bhi maaf nahi karenge.. kabhi nahi karenge SAMJHE( while she said these lines she was burning in fire it was the fire of insult, insult of her father insult of her unconditional but obsessed love)

This avtar of ragini left everyone numb. She headed towards sanskaar and swara.

r- hum tum dono ko alag nahi karna chahte. Hum nahi chahte ki humari galtiyon ki saza tumhare rishte ko mile par jab tak humare ghar ka eke k sadasya laksh ko maaf nahi karega jab tak laksh maafi nahi mangege jab tak humare papa unhe maaf nahi karenge jab tak unki patni maaf nahi kerenge jab tak unki beti swara unki maa aur bauji maaf nahi karenge tabtak hum swara ko is ghar mein nahi aane de sakte ... iske liye hum maafi mangte h aap dono se ki bina galti k aapko saza di par

Sw- par swaragini k liye duniya k kisi bhi rishte se upaar h unke maa baba aur

Sa- mein bhi tumhe nahi rokunga swara kyunki jo aaj hua uski koi maafi nahi h uski kewal saza h .. kewal saza .. mene tumse shadi ki h tumhara aur tumhare parivar ka samman mera samman h aur laksh ne mere aur mere parivar k sammman ko thes pohyalyi h utni jjitni raini ne bhi nahi pohchai aur sabse badi baat ragini ko apni galti ka pachtava h usne na kewal mafi mangi h balki sach mein apne aap ko badla h .. par is insan ko toh koi pachtava hi nahi h aur jese tumne aaj bade pap aur badi maa aur baba ki disrespect ki h na sach mein tumse gira hua mene koi nahi dekha koi nahi chii laksh

L- just shut up sanskaar

Sa - nahi lucky bas bahut ho gaya, tera kya bharosa, pehle tune swara ko dhoka diya phir ragini ko, sabke pyaar ka har bar Mazak banaya h, tere sath mera koi rishta nahi h aur ( turning to dp) bade papa mein chahta hunk i meri karma and co wapas mujhe dedein

Dp- haan sanskaar jo aaj laksh ne kiya who bahutt galt tha itna ki hum bhi kabhi isse maaf nahi karenge aur nahi is ghar mein iske saath rahenge hum sanskaar k saath yeh ghar chodh kar ja rahe h

Everyone came on their side and this is the beginning of ragini's new life, free life, life without a hinderance laksh...

LINK part-2- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4573181/ragya-os-the-equal-and-opposite-reaction-epilogue-up-page-8?pn=5

LINK EPILOGUE-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/131554765

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh this is very well done Harshita !!

I really hope Ragu does something like this.

But I doubt she will.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Oh this is very well done Harshita !!


I really hope Ragu does something like this.

But I doubt she will.

Thanks hues I too want this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
very well written👏

I hope we get something like this in the show
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudhi03

Awesome

very well written👏

I hope we get something like this in the show

Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is really good thank you for posting it if something like this happens in the show it will be great
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i really loved it
nice os
n i can understand ragini ka gussa u can take u r insult bt someone insulted u r parents u will react like that
hope ragini will react in this way
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os
Hope Ragini does something like this in the show aswell
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os 👏
The way you have written ragini's feeling it is outstanding 👏
I loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
You beautifully portrayed the emotions of ragini

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