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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am planning to update today by 7pm or 8pm maybe and thanks for ur comments and appreciation
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sorry guys for the late update i know it is 9pm+ but i promised it earlier sorry for it . But i promise u will really enjoy and like the Epilogue ther is a short segment for swasan fan too but no worries this is a RagLak os and hence contains a lot more of raglak. Pls read and comment whole heartedly...

After a month-

The MF is guilt ridden and Gf are having mixed feelings of guilt and disguised...

RagLak have not yet gained conscious, though their lives have been saved.Afterall they are 2 mad people, 2core haters and 2 obssed lovers. They cannot be separated so easily, they cannot get rid from eachother even when both wanted to they have left no chance of survival of eachother but yet they have survived may be, for begining their new story...

KAVYA left the same day when she married laksh, leaving this letter behind-

Dear Laksh,

I'm going. I don't think u love me but u were only blinded by revenge.U have used me for ur so called revenge and hate u I hate u for that. I'm the 3rd girl u played with but it's ok now don't follow me or be sorry cause I have moved on in my life. Afterall I cannot handle a hyper person like u in my life, This patience, tolerance and skill is only bestowed to ragini I suppose. Now pls don't bitray anyone else in your life.

GOOD BYE N HAVE A HAPPY LIFE AHEAD WITH RAGINI...

Now, swaSan the 2 victims of their obssetion. They were living separately even after their marriage. They have paid for the crimes they have never commited.Each day for them was a decade long and every night was equivalent to a century.They could neither cry nor laugh on their fate. They were so easily united when never wanted to be but see today they are separated even after uniting for lifetime.

14th march 2016...

Today was a big day for MF and GF RagLak gained conscious-

R( gaining conscious)- LAKSH

L( gaining conscious)- RAGINI...

They slowly opened their eyes 1st saw each other and then SwaSan the biggest victims of their obsession. Their faces clearly stated their story of their tears and pain. Then they turned to their families and remembered what they did to eachother's family and at last the terrific end of their story which they scripted by themselves.

Now raglak kept their hand on eachother's oxygen machines' switches and said-

R- papa kya aapne maaf kiya Laksh ko

l- Maa apne maaf kiya Ragini ko

Sh- haan beta .. ab bas karo

Ap- haan Laksh .. kardiya mene maaf

RagLak turning to each other

RagLak( turning to eachother)- Maaf karpaoge

RagLak9 Again to eachother)- Haan! Ek baar phir

R- Nayi kahani likenge..

L-Pyar ki... Par

r- swara sanskaar humari kahani ki shurut tumhari adhuri kahani ke paano ko kuchal kar nahi ho sakti

L- haan bhai swara bolo agar humari kahani mein nafrat mitate mitate humne tumhari kahani mitadi h toh ( shifting their ffingers to their own oxygen machine switches)

swaSan could not speak no words were sufficient to describe this centuries long story of their pin and separation and simply hugged each other, tears were continuously flowing from their eyes.{ BGM- Tere LIye- Veer Zara}

Sa (still hugging swara)- Ab kabhi chod kart oh nahi jaogi na

Sw( still hugging)- Nahi ab agar maut bhi aayi na toh bhi nahi {BGM- TERE liye continuing}

Sa( breaking the hug)- Par agar in dono phir se kuch gadbad kardi toh

Sw- Toh hum bhag jayenge kahin door baht door ( turning to RagLak ) SAMJHE

SwaSan again hugged each other saying this (BGM - tere liye continuing)

This silence and hug was broken by the words of sharmistha and Ap

Sharm- tum dono pagal ho kya ?

Ap"sach mein pagal ho kya dono? Pata h tumne kitna dard diya h humein aur swara aur sanskaar ko

RagLak- hAAN maa jante h, Par app dono abhi bhi shak h kya ki hum dono pagal h ya nahi

SwaSAn- Nahi BIlkul Nahi, U Jerks, U Fools.

RagLak- Kya h na swara aur Sanskaar yeh soft stories tum jese logon par hi suit karti ( to eachother) agar agli bar dhokha diya ( and switched of eachother's oxygen machines for a few seconds till they were almost out of breath and then again switched it on, This took away the breaths of MF and GF but ragLak were similing at eachother and shared a passionate eyelock)

Holi...

Now RagLak have fully recovered and SwaSan have marked eachother as their's for forever and ever...

It was 8 in the evening. Mf have left for some function and RagLak are alone at home. Ragini is in the kitchen,, Laksh is coming there...

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq (x
2)

laksh enters the itchen. He looks at the floor it is still having some faded blood spots. He is getting flashes of their Fight and Love in his mind.

Ishq-ishq, Ishq-ishq.

He then looks at Ragini she is busy chopping veges. The sound of knife on the chopping board was clear.She was wearing a Red saari without her paala and her hair a bit messed and sari quite misplaced ...

Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa
Ho raha na main phir apne jaisa

Laksh took another knife and hugged Ragini from back..

R- Aagae

L- Hmmm

And he slowly and sensuously moves the tip of the knife from ragini's hair to her hand that gripped another knife. Ragini slowly turns towards laksh taking the knife in his hand from the one in her hand such that the knives are crossed and are b/w RagLak

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq (x3)

Ragini and laksh are directly looking in eachothers eyes... saring a passionate eyelock

Mera naam, Tera naam
Mera naam ISHQ!

R- aaj kya h..(brings the crossed knives in front of their faces)

L( touches her bare belly sensuously )- Ek katilana shaam

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq (x2)

Ragini places the crossed knives on laksh's lips and places her lips on them and gives a peck on it

Ishq-ishq, Ishq-ishq

Laksh removes these knives, while sharing a passionate eye lock with her... They fell on floor with a loud noice

Apna naam badal dun
Ya tera naam chhupa lun

Ragini turned her back towards laksh.. he brushers his lips from her earlobes to her sholders and rests his head there.

She turns and hides her face in his chest..

Ya chhod ke saari aag
Main vairaag utha lun

she now starts moving out of the kitchen Laksh follows her.. but somewhere in the middle laksh stops near a pillar in MM hall, turning his back towards Ragini.

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

She runs and hugs him fom back.. He turns towards her and she gives a peck on his lips.

Laksh lifts Ragini,who is opening 1st few buttons of his shirt..

Mera naam, Tera naam
Mera naam ISHQ!

He slowly take s her to their bedroom and places her gently on their bed, raglak share a passionate eyelock. Their lips are moving closer and closer slowly.

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq (x2)

Ragini places her lips on his, Resulting in a passionate kiss. RagLak bit each other's lips

Ye kaali raat jakad lun
Ye thanda chand pakad lun (x2)

They separate because of lack of oxygen.He slowly removes ragini's saree who in return unbuttons his shirt.

Din-raat ke bairi bhed ka
Rukh mod ke main rakh dun
Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa

RagLak are now celebrating their love for the 1st time earlier it was revenge. They notice some blood on their lips...

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq (x3)

Mera naam, Tera naam
Mera naam ISHQ!

ragLak again share a passionate liplock and again bit their lips on the same place

Ye laal ishq
Ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq
Ye bair ishq (x2)

Blood now oozes a bit out. It was no problem for them . It was their love story's key ingredient-"BLOOD"

Ragini wipes blood from Laksh's lips and fills her partion with it. Also, laksh fills her partion with the blood on her lips again...

Now, they are united. Bonded by love and passion. They are united by this bond 1st time but for forever.





Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
wow his is awesome thank you for posting it
Thank god Kavya left before things got more messed up

wow they were saved that was good but it took them time which was okay and realistic

these two are crazy but i like them it was nice

you scared me for a second when they both started playing with the knives

I like how both Ragini and Laksh filled her forehead with their bloods

it is good how finally they both became one ater everything been through

I hope you write more intense stories of Raglak
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Mindblowing 👏
Loved it
Raglak romance 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Nice update...

Kavya is gone...how cool it will be?

I am going to dream about it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Thank you thank you and thank u so much for reading and appreciating my story this is the 1st time I have written something like this thanks a lot a ton a bunch every one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Awesome.
The end was really nice.
Thanks for such a beautiful os
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
again thanks a lot everyone for this appreciation
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Lovely ending to ur story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
OMG..harshita...that was so so so good...

A really really unique love confession..

Plz in the next part let them live..save them...I don't want this story, this love story to end with two broken souls...

Plz cont soon.

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