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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-2
hi buddies this the part of my os and i would like to thank rbb1 for inspiring me and helping me write this part.I will also post another epilogue typeof thing soon. Pls do read, enjoy and give ur comments.

Ap- shekhar ji! Hum sab aapse mafi mangte h ! aur saza bhi ( turning to laksh) laksh aaj humein khud se nafrat hoti h ki hum tumhari maa h.. tum itna kese gir sakte ho.

l- Maa aap bhul gayi kya iss ghaatiya ladki ne bhi toh yahi kiya than a .. sabko apne bholi surat se dhokha dena, phir mandap se aakhri waqat par mujhse dhoke se shadi karna, swara ke divorse papers per signatures karna aur phir aap sabko apkehi ghar mein beizzat karna, papa ko blackmail karna

Ap- haan laksh ! kiya tha ragini bahut galat HAAD se ZADA GALAT kiya tha par aaj tumme aur usmein koi pharak nahi h

L- bas maa aapko jo samajhna h samajhiye par ab bas aaj mera badla pura hota h iss thappad k saath aur kavya se shadi k baad

Ap was looking at his son in disguist, she was completely astonished. How was her parvarish so hollow so fake? Today she lost her laksh completely yet not forever.

Ragini too with a sarcastic smile on her face started moving upstairs to take her last bag.

Laksh followed her, her smile was pinching him, how can she smile now no matter whether it was sarcastic but afterall it was a smile. According to him now he have scratched ragini's soul and now she must be dead but how can she still smile. He was unknown that ragini that loved laksh loved him so much that as soo as the old laksh was lost she too left in her search. Sanskaar tried to stophim but in vain.

Sa(blocking laksh0- ab kanha jar aha h

L (pushing him)- hat ja mere raste se sankaar

Laksh ran upstairs, followed by MF and GF who were terrified with RagLak's rage, which was slowly overpowering their ability to think.this hour seemed to be of distruction of 2 families, 2 lovers and 2 haters. Laksh now entred his room and lashed it.he looked directly into the raging eyes of ragini which were looking directly into his raginng eyes.Laksh pinned ragini to wall with immense forsed and questioned her-

L- tumhe dard nahi hua

R- hua na bahut hua par ab who humara gussa ban chukka h

l- aacha

R- haan kyu koi dikkat h

l- nahi

R- toh kyu aaye h yahan

l- hissab barabar karne

r- abbhi kuch bacha h kya

L- haan who badle ki aag jo tmne abhi jalayi h uska hisab abhi baki h

r- haan sahi kaha aapne laksh acha h ab hum dono har badle ka hisab saath k saath barabar karte chalein toh accha h

MF and Gf were outside ragLak room banging the door and begging them to open it but in vain.

Ap- laksh ragini darwaza kholo yeh kya pagalpan h

Sw- ragini laksh pls badi maa ki baat mano aur darwaza kholdo pls

Sh- ragini mein sab kuch bhuljaunga beta darwaza kholo

Sa- laksh bas karde ab aur kya baccha h khol darwaza

L- nahi sanskaar aaj mein yeh chapter yahin kahtam karke rahoonga

R- hum bhi karke rahenge iss pyaar aur nafrat ki kahani ka ant saach kehte h duniya yaad karege isse

L- mein bhi wada karta hoon sach mein duniya yaad karegi iss chapter ki esi ending kisi ne nahi sochi hogi

Saying this RagLak strangled each other

Now MF and GF could not take it sankaar and Adarsh now broke the door and they along with Swara and Pari separated RagLak. Now RagLak were in their tight grips

Sa- Pagal ho gaye ho tumdono

RagLak- haan

Saying this they freed themselves from the tight grips and moved towards a drawer in laksh's room. To the shock of the family members they took 2 bottles of liquor out drank of them and broke the remaining. They saw each other's face which aggravated them further and they threw the broken bottles on each other, hence hurting each other.

L- hogayi shanti

R- nahi abhi jab tak aap zinda h tab tak humein shanti nahi milsakti

Now, ragLak moved towards the kitchen.The whole Mf and Gf tried to stop them, but as usuall in vain..

Sa- lakh ruk kanha ja raha h

l- Ragini k peeche aaj chapter ki closing h bhai

Sw- ragini kanha ja rahi ho pagal ho gayi ho kya

R- haha.. tumhe abhi bhi shak h AAj toh hum bhi iss kahani ka ant karke rahenge.

They now reached the kitchen and took out 2 sharp knives. The families tried to stop their hands stop them in vain. RagLak stabbed each other.

R(stabbing laksh with a side smile)- Khatam kardi humne nafarat aur pyaar ki kahani

L(stabbing ragini with a side smile)- Ho gaya har hisab barabar

R( stabbing him again)-Ab

L(stabbing her again)-ab sirf pyaar hoga

R(3rd stab)- Vapas aaoge

L(3rd stab)- haaan iss bar sach mein tumhari bepanha mohobbat ko jeene aaunga tumse bepanha mohobatt karne aunga

R(4th stab)- iss bar daga toh nahi dooge

L(4th stab)-nahi aur tum

R( 5th stab)-nahi kabhi nahi

L(5th stab)-kyun?

R( 6th stab)- Aap ke liye toh maut se bhi lad sakte h

L( 6th stab)- saach mein

R (7th stab)- Saach mein! I love u Laksh

L(7th stab)-love u 2, 3 and infinity

Saying this Laksh filled ragini's partion with His blood making her forever his. And they both fell on the ground. Blood was flowing, taking all the rage, revenge, haterate along with it turning the whole floor red ...

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Wow amazing update 👍🏼
OMG iss pyaar ko kya naam doon?
What will hapeen to RagLak ? 😲
Please please update soon
Can't wait to read next part

Edited by gopikashalu93 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Oh my God. This is such a unique take on RagYa...their love is truly madness. Loved this line so much:
ragini that loved laksh loved him so much that as soo as the old laksh was lost she too left in her search

Please update soon Harshita, this is amazing !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Aww you thanked me there is no need but thank you so sweet

Really nice update I like how you ended it it was intense and nice

I like how they loved and hated each to what at the same time

It was really shocking how Laksh confessed his lover and filled her forehead with blood
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome update
Loved it
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Thanks everyone and @rbb1ru have really helped me thanks a lot for that
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Thanks everyone and @rbb1ru have really helped me thanks a lot for that

aww your are sweet and a brilliant write I hope we get to read more stories from you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rbb1

aww your are sweet and a brilliant write I hope we get to read more stories from you

Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: gopikashalu93

Wow amazing update 👍🏼

OMG iss pyaar ko kya naam doon?
What will hapeen to RagLak ? 😲
Please please update soon
Can't wait to read next part

Thanks and sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Oh my God. This is such a unique take on RagYa...their love is truly madness. Loved this line so much:

ragini that loved laksh loved him so much that as soo as the old laksh was lost she too left in her search

Please update soon Harshita, this is amazing !!

Thanks and I am just writing the epilogue

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