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Posted: 10 years ago

hey guys... i had this idea in my mind after llistening to the song yeh fitoor mera and from title it self you all must be getting it but as i have already said that my board exams are starting from this coming month so before going i thought to give u guys a little suprise ...so suprise suprise here i am any ways coming back to the point... i will give you the promo to this new ff of mine after am done with the typeing part this will be a story of a simple gujrati girl ,who is very simple and well behaved a perfect difination of a sanskari girl but only for the people but from inside she is a total tikhi churi ,full of life and a total package and a famous rockstar who rules over every girls heart ,with whom every girl dreams to be with...this is a story which started with love and ended with hate . but was it really hate which ended it ??? what actually happened in their past which forced them to separate ??? so whats say guys ...do commenmt and like waithing for your reply ...

stay tuned cause this love story is a little hatke as most stories start from hate and end in love but this story stars from love and ended in hate ...but is it really the end or the beggining of a new passion in the form of "FITOOR"...

MANAN FF-YEH FITOOR MERA...

INDEX

PROLOGUE- PG 1

CHAPTER 1-PG2

CHAPTER 2-PG3

cHAPTER 3-PG6

Edited by abhilashaS - 9 years ago

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Pari_mananholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

Intresting start...

Nandu is gujrati (😉so am I)

Would love to read it...

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Tiara115

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting concept..

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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abhilashaS

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Posted: 10 years ago

DY Patil Sports Stadium-

crowd of lakhs egarly waiting to just get a glimpse of him...girls dieing just to see him,just to hear his voice ...the crowd continously cheering for him...suddenly the crowd gets out of control ...

anchor- guys plz plz shant ho jayeye ...plz everybody ...(worried)

then suddenly the lights go off...

crowd- manik !manik! manik! manik! we want manik ...we want manik...(whole crowd at the same time..)

and spot light falls on a man who is holding a guitar waring a mic and faccing his back towards the crowd ...and the whole crowd becoms quite...

man- pyaar , mohobbat, aashiqui sirf lafzoon ke sivah aur kuch nahi...par jab vo mili

...in lafzon ko mano maine se mill gaye ... yeh saansein chal toh rahi thi par uske aane se dhadkan chalne shuru hui thi ...huuh...kismat bhi kais din dikhate hai jo dill ke kareeb hote hain wahio nasoor banke chubh ne lagte hai...jis jagha se sallon pehele shuru hui thi ek baat ... jiski aag ki taapan se aaj tak jal uthta hai yeh dil ...all phir use jagha kheech layua hai YEH FITOOR MERA...

starts playing the guitar...

Zindagi ne ki hai kaisi saazishein

Poori hui dil ki wo farmaishein

(remembers his fast and a girl appears infront of his eyes ...only her eyes ..hazel colour eyes ...so hypnotising that anyone s world would stop right there after seeing them...)

Maangi duaa ek tujh tak jaa pahunchi

Parvardigara, parvardigara

Kaisi suni tune meri khamoshi

O parvardigara

(then he sees her smile which can turn any goomy day into a bright snny and happy day...and sees her long jet black straigt hair comming onher serin and bautiful face covering it lightly with the rythem of the brezze)

this was aired on the tv live and was shown on every channel somewhwn in a caffee in mumbai a girl is seating weariing a beautiful whit knee length dress...

sipping coffe and having a meeting with her clients ...when see hears his voice ...after so many years ...but trying not to get affcted by the situation ...

girl- ex...excuse me...(and runs inside the womens washroom ...thankfully no one was there and she locks the door but in the washroom also the spakers are playing the song of live concert sung by him and she finnay is not able to control and gives up and bursts into tears...and leaning to the washroom door and slowly slids and sits on the floor with a thud and starts crying her heart out)why ...why god why ...kyun itne saalon baad ...kaise kahun mein tumse ki mera bhi wahi hal hai jo tumhara ...jitna dard tumhe horaha hai utna hi dard mujhe tumhe dard mein dekh kar horaha hai...bhalehi mere diye hua zakham aajj tumhare liye nasoor ban gaye hain lekin tumhe diye hua har uss zakham ka dard aaj bhi mere ragoon mein har pal daudta hai...(and again starts crying her heart out)

on the other hand in the stadium

and he turns around facing the audience and all the lightas get switched on and audience go mad and start cheering for him...

Ye fitoor mera laaya mujhko hai tere kareeb

Ye fitoor mera rehmat teri

Ye fitoor mera maine badla re mera naseeb

Ye fitoor mera chaahat teri

O parvardigara, parvardigara

(suddenly all the memories of his worst part of his past come flashing infront of his eyes and the pain the hate the anger hidden inside him for so many years can all be seen on his face clearly )

Dheeme dheeme jal rahi thi khwaishein

Dil mein dabi, ghut rahi farmaaishein

Banke dhuaan wo

Tujh tak jaa pahunchi, parvardigara..

Deewangi ki hadd maine nochi o parvardigara

Ye fitoor mera laaya mujhko hai tere kareeb

Ye fitoor mera rehmat teri

Ye fitoor mera maine badla re mera naseeb

Ye fitoor mera chahat teri

O parvardigara, parvardigara

Ye fitoor mera laaya mujhko hai tere kareeb

Ye fitoor mera rehmat teri

Ye fitoor mera maine badla re mera naseeb

Ye fitoor mera chahat teri

Parvardigara...

dariya ishq ka aisa hai ...jo jeene de na maarne ...

jzeher aisa hai teej iska ke har zakham ko nasoor bana dale ...

ishq ki buniyadein ...toopte nahi tootti ...

par halki chingari isski kayeen aindagiyan zarur jalati hain...

Here is the promo ... Sorry for the spelling mistakes and do comment...

Edited by abhilashaS - 10 years ago

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Tiara115

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow.. awesome promo. .

Really loved it

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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Pari_mananholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow awesome...

It's soo much interesting...

Luved it..

Thnx for pm...

Update soon...

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abhilashaS

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Posted: 10 years ago

hey guys here u go with the first chapter...

CHAPTER 1

STILL IN THE WASHROOM-

NANDU POV -

no nandu ... nahi tu weak nahi padd sakte ...manik ke liye you have to be stong...(wipes her tears) chahe kuch bhi hojaye mujhe appna yeh side manik se chipana hi hoga usse pata nahi chalna chahiye ki mein ab bhi usse...no nandu be strong you cant give in to all these feelings...

nandini gets up goes to the sink and cleans her face with water as her kajal had spread due to so much of crying...(she takes her bag and leaves)

meanwhile...

back stage-

manik returns to the back stage after the concert fumming in anger and all the pain and betrayal is clearly visible on his face... but there is one person present there who has been with him since ages he has seen his evry stage of life he has seen him die every moment just for that one mistake he had don e ,he has sen him breaking into pieces ,he has seen him changing into an emotionless a completely hearttless person which he is today... he is none other than his best friend cabir...

cabir- manik yaar kab tak ,kab tak tu apne apko aise saza deta rahega ...aur wo bhi uss galti ke liye jo tune kiya hi nahi... mere bhai buss bohot hogaya enough is enough...ab jane de ...yaar uss baat ko abb char sall ho chuke hain...

manik- noo!!!!(shouts loudly) nahi bhul sakta uss baat ko mein jab tak meri saansein chal te rahe gi tabtak mein aapne aap ko uss galti ke liye kabhi maff nahi kar sakta...(and hits the wall angryly and blood starts coming out )

cabir- (rushes towards manik) manik ...!! kya kar kya raha hai tu kyun tu aapne aap ko aise hurt karta hai yaar...

manik-huh !! hurt...hurt toh unhe hota hai jo zinda hote hain cabir aur mera dil toh usse din band ho gaya tha jis din mein ne uss aurat pe trust kiya tha..pyaar ,mohabbat sab dhakosla hai...enke koi mayene nahi ...enke liye ab mere zindagi mein koi jaghe nahe...jkaghe hai toh sirf aur irf naffrat ke liye...(angry and betrayed look)itne sloon baad ajj phir see mujhe usse jagha JAHAN ISS SAB KI SURUWAT HUI THI khinch laya hai YEH FITOOR MERA ...FITOOR USS NAFRAT KI JALAN KI JO NA KABHI BUJHTE HAI AUR NAHI KAM HOTE HAI...LOGON NE PYAAR KE LIYE FITOOR DHEKHA HOGA LEKIN AB LOG FITOOR DEKHENGE LEKIN SIRF AUR SIRF NAFFRAT KA...

NANDINIS APPARTMENT-

nandini returns home ...as she opens the door suddenly a little of 4 ys comes running towards her wearing a pink frock..giving a big sweet smile...

girl- mama...!!!! aap aadaye... meine apto kitna missy kiya...

as soon as nandini sees her she forgets all her tensions even that she was upset a while ago and a smile of peace and satisfaction appears on her face and without thinking any thig she picks her up...and showers her with lots off kisses ...and all her motherly love..

nandini- awww... my baby ...mayu baby ne mama ko itna sara missy kiya...(says cutely playing along and kisses her on her cheek) mama is solly ...wo mama ko kaam tha na isilye unhe tumhe chorkar jana pada aur mama late bhi ho gaye but my baby i promise hence forth mama aisa kabhi nahi karegi okk...

maira- its ote mama i kow ke aap busy the but aapko mujhe ice cleam khilani palegi fol making me wait sho much...

nandini- ok my baby done ...mama appko jarur ice cream khilane leke jayegi..

suddenly a girl enters the room...

girl arre aagaye maadam ...ufff kiss toofan ko mere sar chor kar gaye thi tu Nandu...ufff she is so difficult to handle...puree ghar mein mujhe bhaga bhaga kar mujh aadha pagal kardiya...uff

nandini- (laughs) aare navya aisa kya kiya mere baby ne...

navya- kya kiya ...bolo kya naihi kiya ...meine usse bola ke chal maira mein tujhe nehela dete hun pehele toh usne kuch react nahi kiya toh meine socha kitni shant bachhe jhai par phir washroom mein usse bithakar mein usske kapde leene gaye toh inn maadam ne puri ki puri shampoo ki botle khali kar di aur jab mein ayi toh i was shocked pure bathroom mein charo taraf sirf bubbles he bubbles the after that maddam ka tab bhi man nahi bhara toh ussne mujhe pura ka pura gila hi kar diya phir kya tha maadam pure ghar mein geele towel mein bhagne lagi aur mujh bhi unke phiche bhagaya ...hey matarani yeh bacche puri ki puri toofan hai toofan...school mein mein ita marathon mein bhi nahi bhagi hungi jita aaj tumhare iss toofan ke piche bhage hun...

nandini-(laughs) mayu ..baby tumne massi ko itna trouble kiya...very bad baby...

maira smiles sheepishly...giving her sweetest smile which melts down nandu within minutes...

maira- sooly massi...(with her sweet anger melting smile)

navya- aww...ok theek hai iss bar maan jate hun lekin nxtime no masti ok...

(maira quickly runs towards her massi and gives a kissie on her cheek...)

awww...ok jao andar cookies rakh hain go and have some...

maira- i luv u massi u r the best... (runs into the kitchen)

nandini- (with tears in her eyes) bohot naughty ho gaye hai... bilkul aapne papa pe gaye hai...

navya- nandu yaar tu usse baata kyun nahi dete its high time ...maira ko bhi aapne papa ke bare mein janne ka haq hai...aur o usski bete hai he has a right to know...aur kab tak maira bin baap ke aise jeete rahe ge...usske papa ke hote hu ae bhi tune usse andhere mein rakha hai...

nandu-(listening to this her breath becomes uneven and she becomes scared)na..nahi navya... mei..mein aisa nahi karsakte(tears start to make their way from her eyes)...usse pata chala toh... nahi mein aur maira usse dur rahi isse mein sabke bhalai hai...

precap- keeep gussing ...truck accident nandu and the past flashbaks of the beggining of all of these...😃😃😉

spelling mistakes ho toh maff kar dena and do comment...😳