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Posted: 9 years ago
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meet maira patel...
do comment and like this is just her childhood look but as she grows up you will she her actual look...

MAIRA PATELMAIRA MOORTY
Edited by abhilashaS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Wow awesome update...
But what happened in past tht manik hates nandu soo mch...
Nandu is in soo much pain...
Maira is soo cute..
Luved it..
Cant wait for flashback..
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
Loved it
Maira is so cute
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys ... Actually i need your help as I was searching for an appropriate look for manik but I am not getting it so can u guys plz help me with it ...
Will be eagerly waiting for your replies and suggestion ...and those who have any photo plz send the link...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
hey guys see i am again back with a new chappy...but sorry not able to update regularly... as board exams are already knocking at my door so plz bear with it and i will be irregular for about 1 month more after that regular updates pakka wala promise ...anyways i shoul cut the crap and here is the chappy...happy reading...


CHAPTER -2

nandini was still in tears when maira came running into the room...
maira- mama ...mama see masssi has made tocolate chip cookies fol me...(showing her the cookies)
seeing her nandini quickly wiped off hr tears as she didnot wnant to stress her baby...and pulling off a smile quickly picked up her bundle of joy and made her sit on her lap...
nandini- aww..my baby...(and kissed her cheeks) cookies itni acchi lagi aapko...
maira-(bobbed her head cutely) han ...mama u know i love tocolate chip cookies...(hearing it nandinis eys becomes teary and she just smiles gives her a kissie)
mama...mein palk mein ghume ghume kane daun??
nandini- ok my baby... but siya didi bhi tumhare sath jaygi ok...aur zada dur mat jana ...
(and again kissd her )
maira- otey mama...
nandini- siya...
siya- ji maam
nandini- tum maira ke saath park chali jau she wants to visit th park...
siya- ok maam...maira baby chaliye...
maira- bye mama bye masi...

nandini -(still in tears smils )she is just the carbon copy of him ...use bhi chocolate chip cookies bahut pasand the...navya tumhe yaad hai humari first meet...
navya- hmmm(smiles) wo kaise bhul sakte hun tijhe koi bhi tab dekhta na wo faint he ho jata...kitni bholi bhali shakal the teri leekin uss bholi bhali shakal ke peeche ke shaitan ko sirf mein he janti thi...babre bab kitna nautanki karte thi tu...

FLASHBACK-

a boy had come to se a girl with his family in ahemdabad and are sitting in the lavish living room of a big villa ...
man- anne ghar dundene mein koi parishani toh nahi hui?
(did u have problem in finding the house)
the family- na na bilkul nahi... yeh maro dikro...gignesh...
gignesh- namaste uncle...
man- namaste beta ...tame keemcho...??
gignesh - majama...
family- app bura na manein toh aapke deekr se milna chahenge...
man- kyun nahi...nandu...

and nandini enters with full ville covering her face and in an beautiful lehenga choli...comes out with a tray containing tea and snacks for the guest...
NANINIS ATTIRE

man- yeh hai mari deekre nandini...bohot his susheel <samskari aur sharmili hai...
gainesh- agar app bura na mane toh mein kya aap ki deekree se akele mein baat kar sakta hun...
man- han han deekra kyun nahi...

IN A DIFFERENT ROOM-

THEY BOTH ENTER THE ROOM AND CLOSE THE DOOR ...
gignesh- hi i am gignesh...but u can call me gigs ...i must say ...tame bahut saras lagucho ...
nandini prov- gigs ...ya pigs... abe kutte tere tukde tukde kar ke aagar chil kaowon ko khiladiye na toh mera naam bhi nandini patel nahi...
gignesh- toh aapke koi shauk bataye ...kya pasand hai apko...

and that was it for nandu...
nandini-oh god i cant handle this nonsense anymore...(pulls her ville and throws the whole chunni in the corner of the room...(gignsh looks at her in total shock) shun ...shun che...why r u staring at me like this... look i am sick of this drama ...and get one thing straight in your head ...mujhe iss shadii se koi problem nahi hai...but(says in all bubbly andaz)
gignesh-but ...
nandini- but i need to confess something...
gignesh-(confued)what...??
nandini pov- fas gaya...abb dekkh tu bada uchal raha tha na tu papa ke samne mujhse shaadi karne ke liya...abb dekh mein tujhe kaise bali ke bakre ke tarah hala karti hun...
nandini- ki look mujhe laga ki tumhe bata dena hi sahi hoga aur agar shaadi ke baad tumhe pata chala toh shayad ..pata nahi tum aur tumhari family kaise react karegi...so coming to the point...mujhe ladkon mein nahi ladkiyon mein interest hai and shaadi ke baad bhi min apni girlfriend k saath relationship mein rahungi and yes iss bar mein abhitak papa ko bhi nahi pata so aga tum agreee karte ho toh mujhe iss shaadi se koi problem nahi hai...
gignesh- (he s shockd to the core hearing this and freaks out and starts acting wierdly)
nandini- (hugs him) arre chill mujhe pata hai ke tumhe koi problem nahi hai ...i know u r very broad minded so u will accept it so... bahar jakar han boldete hain chalo...(and pulls him)
gignesh prov- bhai iss ladki mein toh pura chemical locha hai isse pehele ke tu halal ho jaye kat le beta gignesh) nandini nandini dekho mein tumhe yahan yeh hi batane laya tha ki me..mein kisi aaur see pyaar karta hun aur...isse liye humari shaadi nahi ho skte...
nandu- kya!! aab mein papa ko kya bolungi...
gignesh- wo mein sambhal unga ok bye(and leaves the room leaving nandu with a naughty smile with her victory in the mission"ladka bhagao"...
and suddenly a girl couldnot control anymore and bursts into laughter and comes out from behind the sofa...
navya- nandu ...tu puri pagal hai ...agar usne uncle ko batadiya toh...
nandini- chil navya ...wo gadha kuch nahi bataga... aur waise tu yeh bata ke kaisa laga tujhe mera bakre ko halal karne ka style...
navya- bada hi ...katarnak...(and both burst into laughtr)
navya- tujhe yaad hai na ke humare college monday se khul rahe hain ??
nandini- han yaar ruk mein ek bari papa se milk aate hun...
chal beta nandu sanskari mode on(and puts the ville on her head)
NANDINIS PAPAS ROOM-
knoks the door ...
nandini- papa mein andar aajaun...
papa- aana deekra ...tujhe puchne ki koi zarurat nahi...
nandin- papa wo monday se college start ho rahe hain toh muje aaj he mumbai retun karna padega toh kya mein jaun????
papa- hmmm...deekra socha tha iss bar tu ghar ayegi toh tera rista te kardunga lekin pata nahi kyun unka aur koi ans he nahi aya...chal koi nahi teek hai beta tu ja aur have a safe journey...
nandini- thank u papa ...ok bye bus ka time ho rahha hai ...
papa- bye deekra...
NANDINIS ROOM-
navya is sitting on the bed when nanu enters...
nandini- uff finaqlly iss get up se chutkana milega...(and in a go pull her lehenga off and also its blouse... she is wearing a jeans shorts and aq crop top)
navya- kisi din uncle ne tujhe iss getup mein dekh liya na...tu pakka maregi ..kud toh marwegi mujhe bhi marwaegi...
nandini- chill navya chal ab late ho raha hai...
IN THE BUS -
navya- nandu agar kisi uncle pata chala na ki unki so called sanskari bete aissi jhalii aur chant hai na matarani ki kasam uncle faint ho jayenge...
nandini- kya yaar navya lif mein na adventure hona bahut zaruri hota hai ...jabtak adventure na ho na life feeki padjate hai yaar ...aisa lagna chahiye na ki tum zinda ho...aur rahi baat sanskari hone ki ...wo toh mein abhibhi hun...leekin difference sirf itna hai ki mein 21st century ki ladki hun ...toh toda twist toh banta hi hai...
navya- tu nahi sudhre gi har chiz ki excuse tere pass hamesha ready hota hai hai na??
nandini - akhir beete kiski hun...(gestutes to pull her collar up)
and both burst into laughter...
flashback to be continued...

so guys do comment and yes ...mujhe gujrati nahi aati par phir bhi i tried so agar galat hop to plz mafff kar dena and also speeting mistakes ke liye bhi sorry,,,all juta chappal and sada tammatar allowed ...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
Amazinggg update
Hahaha ladka bhagaoo mission
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...
Gujrati talk was nice...
Hamne pan gujrati aavde che😆
Luved this adventurous nandu...
Thnx for pm..
update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome update
I just love miara
She is so cute
She is just like her father ...aww
The flashback was hilarious
Nandini rocked, gignesh shocked
Waiting for first meeting of Manan
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Are kya yar mast gujrati lang likhi hai tune (are su mast gujrati lakhi 6 te) even im also patel yat...
awsm update boss...sabse a6aa i lyk Ki u swa nandu patel...dat means nandu murty nahi balki patel hai...let see wt happen nxt..continueee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys ... Actually i need your help as I was searching for an appropriate look for manik but I am not getting it so can u guys plz help me with it ...
Will be eagerly waiting for your replies and suggestion ...and those who have any photo plz send the link...

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