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Hi friends!!! So this is my first TS...
I hope u enjoy..
DIL MEIN MAGAR JALTE RAHEIN CHAAHAT KE DIYE
Our leads...
Ragini Gadodia: a nice, sincere, innocent and caring girl.. she is a perfect daughter, a lovely friend and a selfless lover...
Laksh Maheshwari: a total jerk, spoilt brat of a rich father, indeed a good friend, not interested in good girls, n loves his brother, Sanskar, very much. ..
Sanskar Maheshwari: a heartbroken lover himself. .wants to seek revenge from his brother n family cuz he thinks they killed his lover, kavita..
Sorry no Swara in the leads..
Here it begins...
Ragini n laksh are *booked* for each other now.. Laksh doesn't like Ragini..he likes but she is not his types..she is traditional, shy n selfless.. she never stands for herself..she just sees other's happiness.. no matter hell happens to her..
Laksh's POV..
She is good. ..more than good...but why doesn't my family understand that I don't wanna marry a girl like her..she is damn good...n I hate good girls..it is funny..we are getting engaged in some days.. like really?? She won't be able to handle a jerk like me...at least i won't let her..what a Dadi maa's girl..she can be a good daughter-in-law but not a good wife..she toh even won't agree to let me touch her, kiss her, share bed with her before marriage..i don't want a girl like her..I like girls who never feel shy when i come closer to them..n she..naahhh...not my types...f***...my family doesn't understand...
Ragini's POV..
He is nice..but I don't know how to handle him..he probably be thinking m not his types..n yes..he is not wrong..m actually not..I've seen him romancing him with different girl everyday when we were in college..yes he is a good friend..but i don't know why is he being so strange with me from days...if he continues roaming with girls after marriage, then? ..no no..my family chose him..of course they first had investigated about him..My family will always choose the best for me..but can't trust thus very man, ahaan! Correction, boy..I wanted a man..
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So this was their engagement..Ragini starts loving laksh and laksh, doesnt love her, starts feeling for her..as a friend..Laksh never thought je will be so open to and befriended with a *sanskari* girl..It was a nice feeling to have a friend who understands you without saying..she did everything possible for him..never making him feeling she was great n loves him...but this was hightime...laksh started knowing her well..he knew she has feelings for him..but couldn't sense her unconditional love..he was on.an edge..actually he did plan something and did that..
Ragini was about to make him wear the ring but
Laksh: ruko Ragini...I can't marry you..
Everyone was hell shocked..especially Ragini..she was not able to move..she could not blink her eyes n shed the water which filled her eyes..
Shekhar: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Laksh?
Laksh: uncle I m speaking out my heart..I can't marry a girl i don't love..she is not my types..
Ragini was.still..just listening..she wasn't able to understand what is all happening..
Laksh: I know Ragini I am hurting you..I m sorry Rag..
She stopped him in between..
Ragini: then why didn't you tell earlier Laksh?
Laksh: bcz i didn't want to hurt you..
Ragini: n u think now I am happy?
Laksh was ashamed..he had no answer..ragini.was right...he can't play with her feelings...but according to him he was right.. he thought Ragini didn't love him..she was just marrying him cuz her family wanted. .
Shekhar went to him
Laksh: what is ur problem Laksh?? I knew you were spoilt but never thought you were so heartless. ..
Ragini: no papa..he isn't heartless.. he spoke out his heart..it is his life..let him decide whom to marry n whom to not..
Dadi maa: par laado...what about you..your dignity.. our reputation.?..who ll marry you in future..no Laksh..plz don't say that..marry her..
Ragini was shocked listening to dadi maa. .she thought she was the one who cared for her..but more than her happiness... their so-called family reputation was important.. may be Ragini knew it always but today was actually a shattering day..
Shekhar: maa!!! What are you saying..u want to land ur laado in that hell..no..my Ragini will not marry this boy..never!!
Dadi maa: par shekhar..
Shekhar: maa I know what is better for my daughter..
Laksh was quiet in all this..he was just looking down but was satisfied that he wasn't marrying this behenji..
Shekhar to dp: sorry durga prasad ji..we cant marry our children w/o their happiness..
DP agreed..
Ragini went inside crying..laksh noticed it and felt bad..unknowingly his eyes watered..
When the maheshwaris were about to go..soneone screamed from inside..
Shekhar: Ragini!!
Dadi maa:Laado
Laksh whispered: Ragini...
They all went inside. .someone was with ragini..he was holding the end of the dupatta of Ragini and was playing with it..there was an innocence on his face..ragini was ofcourse scared..anyone will scream to see a stranger in his room..
Laksh: Sanskar..
He went to him n hugged him..Sanskar pushed him..n hid behind Ragini covering his face with Ragini's dupatta..
Laksh was broken to see his brother in this state..
Laksh: bhaai?
Sanskar: dupatte wali dost..save me..he wants to snatch this dupatta from me..
Ragini: Laksh u know him?
Laksh: yes Ragini he is my brother.. (to Sanskar) bhai come..
Sanskar: no...no..I will stay with my dupatte wali dost..
Laksh: par bhai..
Ragini stops him by blinking her eyes..
Ragini to Sanskar: hello..
Sanskar who was scared now smiled: hello...
Ragini: aapka naam kya hai?
Sanskar: he he..tumhe yeh bhi nhi pata? Sanskar..aur tumhara
Ragini: Ragini..
Sanskar: Dupatte wali dost..Ragini dost...dupatte wali dost.. Ragini dost...
Ragini: Sanskar aap yahin rukiye hum abhi aaye.
Sanskar: nhi...nhi..main bhi...I'll come with you..
Ragini: offo..you r so stubborn..
She goes to her cupboard..n takes out a dupatta..
Ragini: take this..n play..I'll come in seconds..
He starts playing with it..she goes outside with Laksh ..everyone follows them..
Ragini: Laksh who is he? U never told me about him...
Laksh: Ragini he is my brother.. we thought he was deaddead but he is alive.. papa bhai is alive. ..
Ragini: Laksh then I ll go with u n take him..he'll not go without me..
Shekhar: Ragini tum is insaan ki madad karogi? He cheated you..
Ragini: yes papa he did..but what is the fault of that innocent one who is playing with my dupatta like a 4 yrs old kid
SanRagLak goes in one car n other maheshwaris in another..
Laksh's car..
Ragini was sitting beside Laksh n Sanskar at back..Laksh looked at Ragini who was looking out of the car with tears in her eyes..Laksh felt bad..
Laksh: m sorry Ragini..n thank you..
Ragini: Laksh no need to say sorry.. u just said that u don't want to marry me..simple as that..yes one mistake u did..u should hv told that earlier..n thank you..i should say you to make me meet Sanskar..at least I got someone who needs me n literally call me a friend..
Laksh was ashamed..
Sanskar: where are we going Ragini dost?
Ragini: at home..
Sanskar: you will stay with us?
Ragini: no sanskar..but I ll come to meet u everyday..
Sanskar: no no..stay..stay with us...Laksh say her..
Laksh: bhai she is saying right..
Sanskar made a face n sat quiet..Ragini smiled upon it..Laksh noticed that and smiled to himself. He didn't know why but he liked when Ragini smiled..
They reached MM..
Ragini ti AP: okay maa...I mean Auntie I should go...it is already dark..
AP: no need to call me auntie Ragini..call me maa..
Ragini: no auntie ..I've no right left.
Laksh: Ragini..woh..I was saying..Its dark..u may stay here tonight...
Ragini: no Laksh..I've to go..
Laksh: it'll be risky for u to go alone at this time..I will drop u...
Suddenly it started Raining heavy..
Ragini looked it..
Ragini:no laksh...I learnt to maintain n manage myself. .
Ragini's phone rings..it was shekhar..
Shekhar: Ragini..don't come here right now.. I heard on tv that a tiger escaped from the zoo..it is roaming on the streets right now...
Ragini: but papa..how can I stay here?
Shekhar: okay then m coming to take u..
Ragini: no papa..u don't come..it'll be dangerous.. I'll manage..
They hung up the phones..
AP: what happened Ragini? Is everything okay?
Ragini: yes auntie..papa informed that a tiger is roaming on streets..
AP: oh god... so u must stay here..
Ragini: no auntie ..I'll manage and go...
AP: no Ragini..are u mad..it ll be a risk to ur life..I can say u to stay here tonight.. at least I own u that much, don't I?
Ragini: no auntie ..u definitely do..
To be continued...
I hope u enjoy..
DIL MEIN MAGAR JALTE RAHEIN CHAAHAT KE DIYE
Our leads...
Ragini Gadodia: a nice, sincere, innocent and caring girl.. she is a perfect daughter, a lovely friend and a selfless lover...
Laksh Maheshwari: a total jerk, spoilt brat of a rich father, indeed a good friend, not interested in good girls, n loves his brother, Sanskar, very much. ..
Sanskar Maheshwari: a heartbroken lover himself. .wants to seek revenge from his brother n family cuz he thinks they killed his lover, kavita..
Sorry no Swara in the leads..
Here it begins...
Ragini n laksh are *booked* for each other now.. Laksh doesn't like Ragini..he likes but she is not his types..she is traditional, shy n selfless.. she never stands for herself..she just sees other's happiness.. no matter hell happens to her..
Laksh's POV..
She is good. ..more than good...but why doesn't my family understand that I don't wanna marry a girl like her..she is damn good...n I hate good girls..it is funny..we are getting engaged in some days.. like really?? She won't be able to handle a jerk like me...at least i won't let her..what a Dadi maa's girl..she can be a good daughter-in-law but not a good wife..she toh even won't agree to let me touch her, kiss her, share bed with her before marriage..i don't want a girl like her..I like girls who never feel shy when i come closer to them..n she..naahhh...not my types...f***...my family doesn't understand...
Ragini's POV..
He is nice..but I don't know how to handle him..he probably be thinking m not his types..n yes..he is not wrong..m actually not..I've seen him romancing him with different girl everyday when we were in college..yes he is a good friend..but i don't know why is he being so strange with me from days...if he continues roaming with girls after marriage, then? ..no no..my family chose him..of course they first had investigated about him..My family will always choose the best for me..but can't trust thus very man, ahaan! Correction, boy..I wanted a man..
-----------------
So this was their engagement..Ragini starts loving laksh and laksh, doesnt love her, starts feeling for her..as a friend..Laksh never thought je will be so open to and befriended with a *sanskari* girl..It was a nice feeling to have a friend who understands you without saying..she did everything possible for him..never making him feeling she was great n loves him...but this was hightime...laksh started knowing her well..he knew she has feelings for him..but couldn't sense her unconditional love..he was on.an edge..actually he did plan something and did that..
Ragini was about to make him wear the ring but
Laksh: ruko Ragini...I can't marry you..
Everyone was hell shocked..especially Ragini..she was not able to move..she could not blink her eyes n shed the water which filled her eyes..
Shekhar: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Laksh?
Laksh: uncle I m speaking out my heart..I can't marry a girl i don't love..she is not my types..
Ragini was.still..just listening..she wasn't able to understand what is all happening..
Laksh: I know Ragini I am hurting you..I m sorry Rag..
She stopped him in between..
Ragini: then why didn't you tell earlier Laksh?
Laksh: bcz i didn't want to hurt you..
Ragini: n u think now I am happy?
Laksh was ashamed..he had no answer..ragini.was right...he can't play with her feelings...but according to him he was right.. he thought Ragini didn't love him..she was just marrying him cuz her family wanted. .
Shekhar went to him
Laksh: what is ur problem Laksh?? I knew you were spoilt but never thought you were so heartless. ..
Ragini: no papa..he isn't heartless.. he spoke out his heart..it is his life..let him decide whom to marry n whom to not..
Dadi maa: par laado...what about you..your dignity.. our reputation.?..who ll marry you in future..no Laksh..plz don't say that..marry her..
Ragini was shocked listening to dadi maa. .she thought she was the one who cared for her..but more than her happiness... their so-called family reputation was important.. may be Ragini knew it always but today was actually a shattering day..
Shekhar: maa!!! What are you saying..u want to land ur laado in that hell..no..my Ragini will not marry this boy..never!!
Dadi maa: par shekhar..
Shekhar: maa I know what is better for my daughter..
Laksh was quiet in all this..he was just looking down but was satisfied that he wasn't marrying this behenji..
Shekhar to dp: sorry durga prasad ji..we cant marry our children w/o their happiness..
DP agreed..
Ragini went inside crying..laksh noticed it and felt bad..unknowingly his eyes watered..
When the maheshwaris were about to go..soneone screamed from inside..
Shekhar: Ragini!!
Dadi maa:Laado
Laksh whispered: Ragini...
They all went inside. .someone was with ragini..he was holding the end of the dupatta of Ragini and was playing with it..there was an innocence on his face..ragini was ofcourse scared..anyone will scream to see a stranger in his room..
Laksh: Sanskar..
He went to him n hugged him..Sanskar pushed him..n hid behind Ragini covering his face with Ragini's dupatta..
Laksh was broken to see his brother in this state..
Laksh: bhaai?
Sanskar: dupatte wali dost..save me..he wants to snatch this dupatta from me..
Ragini: Laksh u know him?
Laksh: yes Ragini he is my brother.. (to Sanskar) bhai come..
Sanskar: no...no..I will stay with my dupatte wali dost..
Laksh: par bhai..
Ragini stops him by blinking her eyes..
Ragini to Sanskar: hello..
Sanskar who was scared now smiled: hello...
Ragini: aapka naam kya hai?
Sanskar: he he..tumhe yeh bhi nhi pata? Sanskar..aur tumhara
Ragini: Ragini..
Sanskar: Dupatte wali dost..Ragini dost...dupatte wali dost.. Ragini dost...
Ragini: Sanskar aap yahin rukiye hum abhi aaye.
Sanskar: nhi...nhi..main bhi...I'll come with you..
Ragini: offo..you r so stubborn..
She goes to her cupboard..n takes out a dupatta..
Ragini: take this..n play..I'll come in seconds..
He starts playing with it..she goes outside with Laksh ..everyone follows them..
Ragini: Laksh who is he? U never told me about him...
Laksh: Ragini he is my brother.. we thought he was deaddead but he is alive.. papa bhai is alive. ..
Ragini: Laksh then I ll go with u n take him..he'll not go without me..
Shekhar: Ragini tum is insaan ki madad karogi? He cheated you..
Ragini: yes papa he did..but what is the fault of that innocent one who is playing with my dupatta like a 4 yrs old kid
SanRagLak goes in one car n other maheshwaris in another..
Laksh's car..
Ragini was sitting beside Laksh n Sanskar at back..Laksh looked at Ragini who was looking out of the car with tears in her eyes..Laksh felt bad..
Laksh: m sorry Ragini..n thank you..
Ragini: Laksh no need to say sorry.. u just said that u don't want to marry me..simple as that..yes one mistake u did..u should hv told that earlier..n thank you..i should say you to make me meet Sanskar..at least I got someone who needs me n literally call me a friend..
Laksh was ashamed..
Sanskar: where are we going Ragini dost?
Ragini: at home..
Sanskar: you will stay with us?
Ragini: no sanskar..but I ll come to meet u everyday..
Sanskar: no no..stay..stay with us...Laksh say her..
Laksh: bhai she is saying right..
Sanskar made a face n sat quiet..Ragini smiled upon it..Laksh noticed that and smiled to himself. He didn't know why but he liked when Ragini smiled..
They reached MM..
Ragini ti AP: okay maa...I mean Auntie I should go...it is already dark..
AP: no need to call me auntie Ragini..call me maa..
Ragini: no auntie ..I've no right left.
Laksh: Ragini..woh..I was saying..Its dark..u may stay here tonight...
Ragini: no Laksh..I've to go..
Laksh: it'll be risky for u to go alone at this time..I will drop u...
Suddenly it started Raining heavy..
Ragini looked it..
Ragini:no laksh...I learnt to maintain n manage myself. .
Ragini's phone rings..it was shekhar..
Shekhar: Ragini..don't come here right now.. I heard on tv that a tiger escaped from the zoo..it is roaming on the streets right now...
Ragini: but papa..how can I stay here?
Shekhar: okay then m coming to take u..
Ragini: no papa..u don't come..it'll be dangerous.. I'll manage..
They hung up the phones..
AP: what happened Ragini? Is everything okay?
Ragini: yes auntie..papa informed that a tiger is roaming on streets..
AP: oh god... so u must stay here..
Ragini: no auntie ..I'll manage and go...
AP: no Ragini..are u mad..it ll be a risk to ur life..I can say u to stay here tonight.. at least I own u that much, don't I?
Ragini: no auntie ..u definitely do..
To be continued...
