SanRagLak 2S: Dil me magar jalte rahe chaahat ke diye (Completed)

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alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome start to ur story

Can't wait for next part

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anzana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Finally sumthg different ... Liked it.. Sanskar-ragini bonding lubly.. Huh laksh wud nvr be different.. plzz do updte soon. Thnkww for pm.

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sudhi03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Love sangini. Nice update.

continue please

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Acumen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey nice Neha...SanGini's dupatta friendship...aww I miss it!

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shamina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome update

SanRagLak,, the concept is really nice

Waiting for your next update

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Shinning_AD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awsome Start👏

Sagini bonding were nice

So Ragini will stay in MM or go to meet the Tiger?🤣

Update soon

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Thank you friends for such love and appreciations...
So this is the second and the last part of my SanRagLak two shots. .
Dil Me Magar Jalte Rahe Chaahat Ke Diye
...Continued

AP: if you really think I've a right on you to ask you to do something then stay...only for tonight... n vaise bhi I want to repent my son's mistake...
She looks at Laksh, who is still standing there, n Laksh tries to ignore her but yet he feels bad..
Ragini: auntie what are you saying ..I'll stay here..n about repenting laksh's deed..no question arises.. he was right..he just doesn't like me..that's it...n I also can't live with a man forever who doesn't love me...
Laksh looks at her...
AP smiles: anyway ..my Ragini is beautiful enough that every boy will die to have her..
Ragini smiles wide: auntie!!!!
AP laughs...
AP to Laksh: Laksh show Ragini uttara's room..
Laksh: but maa...that is uttara's room..it will definitely be messed up...
AP: laksh..she is uttara..not you..
Ragini giggles on it n laksh sees her from the corners of his eyes. .she immediately suffocate her laughter..
Laksh fakes laughter: ha ha ha..very funny..Ragini look..
AP: Laksh dare you to say my Ragini anything..
Laksh: but maa..
AP: do what I said. .
Ragini: no auntie Laksh is right..if I will stay in uttara's room..then where will she sleep?
Laksh: yes...see..your Ragini is at my side. .
AP: beta she has gone to her friend's house..she ll stay there tonight..Laksh go..
Laksh: okay maa...chalo Ragini...
AP goes..while going she looks at RagLak, who were looking at each other..
AP thinks: shayad main tumhe ek kar sakoon..Ragini I selected a girl like you for a boy like Laksh bcuz I know only u can handle himhim..n i can see u love him a lot..
Sanskar comes...
Sanskar: Ragini dost. ..
Ragini: haan Sanskar..
Sanskar: dekho...baarish..baarish ho rahi hai..
Ragini: kya baarish!!wow..
She gets happy seeing the rain...SanLak both look at her..they admire her smile, her eyes n her beauty..
Sanskar remembers that he has come here to take revenge of her only love..he is just faking friendship with Ragini. but he can't deny that the one who ll get Ragini will be the luckiest person of the world. ..she is so beautiful n caring..
Sanskar: come...we'll play in rain..
Laksh: bhai u both will catch cold..
Ragini: no we won't..chaliye Sanskar..Sanskar is my friend I'll do whatever he says..
Laksh: rude..
Ragini: thanks..
Sanskar holds Ragini's hand..He is the first man(except her family) to who ever held Ragini's wrist..Ragini looks at him.. n somehow he also feels good touching her..he looks straight in her eyes..there is a small eye lock between them..
Suddenly thunder sound comes which break the moment..
Sanskar with her runs towards the garden...Laksh doesn't like to play in rains..he feels it girlish unless he has a hot partner with him..so he goes n stands near the door looking at sangini..he stands on support of the door with his arms folded..

Sanskar's foot slips on the wet garden soil...Ragini laughs..Sanskar makes a puppy face..
Ragini looks at him with an awww n makes him stand..laksh giggles seeing this..
Sanskar runs jumping..
Sanskar starts singing...
Sanskar: Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jane kahan main kidhar chala
Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jane kahan main kidhar chala
Arre phisal gaya
Yeh tu ne kya kiya

Ragini looks and smiles..n also jumps after him..

Ragini: Idhar chali main udhar chali
Jane kahan main kidhar chali
Idhar chali main udhar chali
Jane kahan main kidhar chali
Arre phisal gayi
Le tere sang ho chali

During the instrumental break..Sanskar goes to Laksh n asks him to come but he refuses..Sanskar raises his shoulders in *as ur wish* n again runs to Ragini.. RaginiRagini goes to laksh n she also asks him to come but mr arrogant stubborns on his decision..
Ragini:arrogant..
Laksh thanks...
Sanskar comes n takes ragini with him..
Ragini starts singing targetting laksh in her words..

Ragini: Nazar yeh kiski hume lagi
Nazar yeh kiski hume lagi
Ke chalte chalte phisal gaye

Laksh looks at her shrinking his eyes.

Sanskar: Hasi hasi mein yeh kya hua
Hum badal gaye .

Instrumental break-both of them play in the garden..

Sanskar: Nazar yeh kiski hume lagi
Ke chalte chalte phisal gaye
Ragini: Hasi hasi mein yeh kya hua
Hum badal gaye

Sanskar comes in front of her n makes a cute face asking..

Sanskar: Kyon badal gaye
Ragini hits his nose with her index finger ..
Ragini: Hum badal gaye

Laksh also starts singing standing at the door . ..unwantedly

Laksh.. Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jane kahan main kidhar chala
SanGini are shocked seeing it..
Laksh: Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jane kahan main kidhar chala
Arre phisal gaya
Yeh tu ne kya kiya

Instrumental break -He then realizes that he is singing ..n scratches his hair with his hand raising his eye brows..
SanGini laughs...Ragini finds a true friend in Sanskar..yes she does... she sings smiling..

Ragini: Tum itne bhole ho kis liye
Sanskar: Tum itni aachi ho is liye
Ragini: Kyon achchi ho yeh batao tum
Sanskar: Kyon batao main
N Sanskar goes..Ragini comes behind him..
Ragini: Tum itne bhole ho kis liye
Sanskar: Tum itni aachi ho is liye
Ragini: Kyon achchi ho yeh batao tum
Sanskar: Kyon batao main
Ragini: Kuch batao na
Sanskar: Kyon batao main

Ragini: Idhar chali main udhar chali
Jane kahan main kidhar chali
Idhar chali main udhar chali
Jane kahan main kidhar chali
Arre phisal gayi
Le tere sang ho chali
Laksh also comes: Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jane kahan main kidhar chala
Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jane kahan main kidhar chala
Arre phisal gaya
Yeh tu ne kya kiya
Ragini: Main tere sang ho chali
Laksh: Yeh tu ne kya kiya
Ragini:Main tere sang ho chali

SanRagLak start laughing.. suddenly Ragini realizesrealizes she is with two boys...she never had this much fun ever n especially with boys..
Her smile fades when she remembers laksh's refusing her..
Ragini: sanskar its enough ..u ll catch cold. .
Sanskar: no Ragini..*sneezes*
Laksh: bhai look...come on..go n change..
Laksh: chalo Ragini..I'll show you ur room..
Sanskar goes to change. ..Laksh takes Ragini to her room..her room was exactly opposite to sanLak's room..
Laksh: Ragini, there are uttara's dresses in the cupboard..wear whatever u like..
Ragini nods..they don't interact much..Ragini goes to cupboard..her leg slips n Laksh balances her by holding her from her waist..there is an intense but small eye lock...
Laksh: sambhal kar..
Ragini: sorry!
He goes..
All of them change their dresses..
Night passes..the whole night Ragini was crying... SanLak could not resist thinking about her..
In the morning news comes that the tiger running was a rumor spread by some college jerks to hv a holiday..
Days pass..its one month..
Laksh comes to Ragini daily with Sanskar..
One day when SanLak comes to Ragini's home..
Laksh to Ragini: you n sanskar have a great bonding..
Ragini: yes..i trust him...he will never betray me..
Laksh hearing tgis feels really guilty whereas sanskar, who was listening to itit ,also felt guilt..he is betraying the one who believes him so much, does so much for him without asking for return..
Both SanLak know that they love Ragini..yes they do..How when where..don't know. .but they do..
The other day..
Ragini to dadi maa: dadi maa.. woh aaj Swara aa rhi hai na mumbai se..
Dadi maa: haan toh..
Ragini: hum use airport lene jaayein..
Dadi maa: no need..
Shekhar: let her go maa..Swara is her sis..Ragini go beta..
"Where? " a voice comes..
Ragini: Sanskar..come...
She searches for Laksh..
Sanskar:today I came with the driver..Laksh was busy. .
Ragini feels bad..
Sanskar: wherever u r going Ragini dost.. may I come with u..
Ragini:yes Sanskar. .come..
They both go to the airport..
On the way..
Sanskar: Ragini I wanna tell you a truth..
Ragini first time saw him speaking normal without saying her dost..
Ragini: Sanskar aap theek ho gye..m ..m very happy..
Sanskar: I was always okay Ragini..that was just a pretense..
Ragini: Sanskar?
Sanskar: yes Ragini... (he tells her the truth)

At baadi..
Laksh comes..he has decided today he'll tell Ragini about his feelings..
Laksh: Ragini? Ragini?
Dadi maa: she has gone to airport..
Laksh: airport?
Dadi maa: yes..woh mumbai..
Laksh: what??? She is going to mumbai.. how can she go without me...
He doesn't listen to dadi n runs to the airport...

SanGini reach the airport...
Ragini with watered eyes: Sanskar I thought u r the one I can trust upon .
Sanskar: m sorry Ragini..
ragini: why did u do thisthis ?
Sanskar: I got blind to take revenge... but u changed me Ragini..u did..
Ragini: why me?..why u changed cuz of me?
Sanskar: bcz I lov..
He is interrupted by a voice calling ragini's name on mike...it was Laksh..
Laksh on airport 's mike: m sorry Ragini..
Sangini run to Laksh..
Laksh: m sorry Ragini ..I know I hurt u a lot... but m sorry..
He is crying.. ragini is crying.. Sanskar is also crying..but Sanskar hides his tears..
Laksh: Ragini forgive me..u hv to..bcuz I know u love me..
Ragini is happy..she goes to Laksh..
Ragini: no I don't. .
Laksh giggles: u do..
Ragini: no I hate you..
Laksh: but I love you..accept a shit like me as ur would-be husband..
Ragini: no..Laksh.. I don't deserve you..no no..actually you don't deserve me..I m too good for u...you deserve someone like tina..
Laksh: who is tina...
Ragini: how do I know... there will be someone..
Laksh giggles while crying..
Ragini: why r u laughing?
He stops laughing..
Ragini: don't look at me like that..look down..
He immediately looks down...
Ragini: u know what m not gonna come with you..
Laksh holds her wrist while she was going..
Laksh: dilwale dulhaniya lekar hi jaayenge..
Everyone: accept him..
She looks at him...
Laksh: sorry..
She is crying
Ragini: no Laksh..
Laksh: sorry for everything I did to u..
Ragini: no Laksh..
He immediately hugs her..
Everyone claps..
Sanskar is left heart broken.. but he does clap..tears are falling off his cheeks..
He is stepping backwards... he also bumps into someone n falls on her..
Girl: ouch. ..hey mister..
Sanskar: sorry..
Girl: whats happening here?
Sanskar: love's victory..
Girl: what? First u stand up off me..
Sanskar: oh sorry..
He stands up n help her stand upup..
Girl: by the way.. m Swara ..Swara bose.. oops..Swara gadodia..
Sanskar: Sanskar maheshwari..
They both shake hands...

Here two love stories begin ...

SwaSan and RagLak...

Happy ending...

Thank you
.hope you like it...
Sorry for mistakes. .
Good day/eve/night...

Love
Neha/Radha..

😆

Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago

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Acumen

@Acumen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hey Neha, smart girl...so its RagLak and Swasan...hahahaha!

But I felt bad for Sanskar...may be because I liked SanGini...had it been kept under wraps that whom Ragini would choose it would have been great...SanGini fans would have imagined them together and RagLak fans would have imagined them.

I thought Ragini would reciprocate to Sanskar's feelings...*Dreaming* but she could not listen to his love confession...aww!

But it was too good Neha...👍🏼

Edited by Pheunli - 9 years ago

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Rachel006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

wow very nyc , n lovely update , it was really gud n both fell foh ragini tat was nyc

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Pheunli
Hey Neha, smart girl...so its RagLak and Swasan...hahahaha!

But I felt bad for Sanskar...may be because I liked SanGini...had it been kept under wraps that whom Ragini would choose it would have been great...SanGini fans would have imagined them together and RagLak fans would have imagined them.

I thought Ragini would reciprocate to Sanskar's feelings...*Dreaming* but she could not listen tohis love confession...aww!

But it was too good Neha...👍🏼

Sorry...

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