the confession, DYM FF..**[updated and complete]. - Page 4

Hi ... Few days back only i completed reading d story.. It was really good... I read ur comment on ending d story due to lack of encouragement... Truly felt bad... D way u explained neils inner turmoil n love , sam's defeat , betrayal n loss , love n hope was really good... D poetic way... Some times 3rd pov, funny banter... Really nice... Wat i liked most was , poetic way n sam's way of confession... I think dats d way they go abt it... Truly good... ur inclusion of neil's height in their kissing scene... D pregnant lady n her husband their bike... Totally nice... Great work... Looking forward to read some work from u... Take care...

Originally posted by: lavv

Hi ... Few days back only i completed reading d story.. It was really good... I read ur comment on ending d story due to lack of encouragement... Truly felt bad... D way u explained neils inner turmoil n love , sam's defeat , betrayal n loss , love n hope was really good... D poetic way... Some times 3rd pov, funny banter... Really nice... Wat i liked most was , poetic way n sam's way of confession... I think dats d way they go abt it... Truly good... ur inclusion of neil's height in their kissing scene... D pregnant lady n her husband their bike... Totally nice... Great work... Looking forward to read some work from u... Take care...

thank you. I will write more after my exam.