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Rvibha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

I lyk concept.. I want to participate and SW's MMS-SMS idea are best..m comfortable with it 😊

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Vidya Shetty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: spashta-wakta
Apologies for presenting a half-baked idea without fully thinking through. I think it would be best if Dilip and I sort it out by playing around with the MMS-SMS idea for a week or so before deciding what would work best.
E.g. one of us would write the story of an MMS on one day and the next day, the other responds with an SMS on the same storyline (possibly with radically different ending!). This will give the others a chance to learn from our mistakes before we let everyone loose!

Yeah that would be best SW 😆 all of us would then get the hang of it 😛 Actually, I deleted my post when I saw that Anni had already continued from Dilip's line...I thought mine would be sort of double post, so I deleted it 😊

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dlip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: spashta-wakta
Apologies for presenting a half-baked idea without fully thinking through. I think it would be best if Dilip and I sort it out by playing around with the MMS-SMS idea for a week or so before deciding what would work best.
E.g. one of us would write the story of an MMS on one day and the next day, the other responds with an SMS on the same storyline (possibly with radically different ending!). This will give the others a chance to learn from our mistakes before we let everyone loose!

So, take the idea further, we (myself and SW) try MMS-SMS writing alternatively. Then all can join in 😊

SW, Pl let me know if I write an MMS part or SMS part. I can post it by evening.

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dlip

@dlip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Gosht... MMS version... Continued

"Mi aata ithech rahaNar aahe"

"Ka?"

"kA mhaNje kAy? He ghar tumchyAitkach mAjhe hI Ahe"

"He pahA Sanjay ... hech nAv Ahe nA tujhe? tar Sanjay, tujhe ithe achAnak yeNe, te suddhA he jAUn jemtem dahA diwas jhAle asatAnA, ANi AmhAlA sAngaNe kI tU hyAnchAch mulgA Ahes, hA AmhA sarwAnA ek moThA dhakkA Ahe. tewhA ApaN jarA ekmekAnA samjUn gheNyAchA prayatna karAyalA hawA nA?"

"A aai, tu Kay premane bolates tyachyshi? Ithun tabdtob jayala sang tyala"

"Ani sangun eikat nasel tar ... Jadhav kaka na bolav. ACP aahet na te"

"Ajay, Anu... Tumhi doghe jara gapp basa baghu. Mi boltey na tyachashi"

"A lallu-panju... Aaplyashi ani aaplya baddal nit bolayache"

"He bagh Sanjay... Mi mazya bhavashi bolate ani mag Tula kalawate... Tu ithe rahayache Ki nahi te."

"Oh Madam, mazya aai kade yetana tumche 'he' tumchya bhavala vicharun ale hote ka? Nahi na? Mag Ata tumhi tyala kashala vichartay? Aapla tharlay. Mi ithech rahanar. Aapalya bapachya sagalya property war aapla ardha Hakka aahe. Hya ghara war pan! Tumchya hya lallu-panju la mi tumchya barobar nakoy na? Mag aapan ek kaam karuya. Hya ghara che 'Ubhe' don bhag karuya. warachya ani khalchya hya bhagat mi, Sampi ani ticha baap rahu... Ani tya bhagat tumhi sagale raha"

"Hi Sampi kon?"

"Kalel tumhala... Ti aalyawar"

"Aai, pan warti left la mazi bedroom aahe"

" ani ithe Khali ... Mazi"

"Kahli karayachya donhi rooms... Kalale ka Lallu-Panju? Mi jaaun maze saman ani Sampi la gheun yeto"

Sanjay nighun Gela... Vatsalabai dokyala haat lavun basalyat. Sanjay che bolane tyana punha punha aiku yetay. Tyanchya tpndawar vija chamkalyache lightning

"Aai, Ata Kay karayache aapan?" Ajay ani Anagha ne ekdam vicharale

Camera Vatsala bai chya tondawar freeze hoto.

Edited by dlip - 9 years ago

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dipalimanish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Dilip Da, chhan aahe. 👍🏼

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dlip

@dlip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Mitrano... mi hay weekend la bahuda baher jatoy. Mhanun hyach 'starting point' che SMS version khali post karatoy.

SW was also busy today. Hopefully he will post his version (of either story) over this weekend.

Dilip

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Gosht... SMS version.. Continued

"Mi Ata ithech rahaanar aahe"

"ka?"

"karan aamchi chawl dhokadayak mhanun declare kelye...

mag me kuthe jaanar????? tujhyashivay dusra hakkacha ghar aahe ka mala??????"

"Char bhinti ani chappar mhanje fakta adosa, GHAR naahi. Ghar banate manasani, tyanchyatalya jivhalyani. Ghar asave tar 'Hari-Niwas' saarkhe... Jyat Radhakka chi Maya aahe, Krishna kaka chya Garud-pankhanchi chaaya aahe, Usha-Nisha cha khaLaLnara utsaah aahe, jya gharache darwaje aalya-gelya sathi, pai-pavhanya sathi nehmi ughade aahet. Ghar asave tar...

"Ani... Te ghar gamavale kuni? Ti Maya, Ti chaya, to utsaha; aapan gamawala! Fakt tuzya mule... Ani mag aapli hi ashi farfat zali. Tuzya kade... Tuzyach bhashet sangayache tar nidan ha 'bhakkam' adosa tari aahe. Mazya nashibi maatra diva-bhita sarkha jagane ... Tya modkaLila alelya chaLit."

"Pan ... To tar tuzach choice hota... swtahacha shodh ghenyacha!!"

"ani mazya tya choice la jawabdar kon hote?"

"Chuk mazi ektyachi navhati. Aapan je kele, to gunha asel tar aaplya doghancha hota"

"Prem karane ha gunha asto ka?"

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Vidya Shetty

@vidya0906

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

SW, Dilip we are waiting 😛

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dlip

@dlip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: vidya0906
SW, Dilip we are waiting😛

Jawe tyachya wansha... Tevha kaLe

Serial chya lekhakana 'nave' tar thevli. Pan Ata kaLtay ha sagaLa prakar (watala titaka) sopa nahi. Hatashi mokaLa weL hava, man sarkhe 'tyach' wicharat guntalel have kinwa... Vyas- Walmiki sarkhi pratibha havi!!

Utsahane survat tar keli. Pan - jevha suchate tevha 'suchalele' develop karayala weL nastoy (dusare kahi tar kam asatay) ani jevha weL miLato tevha... Sucahalele sagaLe "Gajani" madhalya Aamir khan sarkhe 'memory' madhun 'udun' gelel asate

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dlip

@dlip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Ha "thread" sure karatana mala suchaleli story-line Ashi hoti -

Mumbai-Pune-Mumbai, Part 2 madhali situation"reverse" zali tar? Mhanje ... Gautam ne lagna la "nahi" mhatalay. Agadi last moment la. Tar mag ti "navari mulagi (Gauri)" Kay karel?

My imagination -
- In spite of being NOT married, Gauri decides to stay back in her (could be) in-laws house.
- Over the period everybody in house starts liking her, start relying on her opinion/ advise when they are in difficulty.
- Gautam avoids confrontation or interaction with Gauri and so is she. But they silently track each other's activities and over the period fall for each other
- Though Gauri is important member of household, she has no definite status or recognition in house.
- After some time, the relatives of Gautam starting looking out for new bride for him, identify one, plan their wedding. In all these activities nobody has bothered about Gauri's sentiments
- The wedding event is planned. Gautam again refuses to get married. His parents ask him will he not marry ever?
- Then Gautam admits that it was his mistake not to marry Gauri. But now he wants to rectify his mistake and he wants to marry Gauri

Kashi hoti story idea?

Hya thread chya suravatila je conversation dile hote te Gauri ani tichya wadilan madhale hote!!
How I wish I had enough time (and imagination) to develop this idea in full-flagged 'story'

Aso

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Vidya Shetty

@vidya0906

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: dlip

Jawe tyachya wansha... Tevha kaLe

Serial chya lekhakana 'nave' tar thevli. Pan Ata kaLtay ha sagaLa prakar (watala titaka) sopa nahi. Hatashi mokaLa weL hava, man sarkhe 'tyach' wicharat guntalel have kinwa... Vyas- Walmiki sarkhi pratibha havi!!

Utsahane survat tar keli. Pan - jevha suchate tevha 'suchalele' develop karayala weL nastoy (dusare kahi tar kam asatay) ani jevha weL miLato tevha... Sucahalele sagaLe "Gajani" madhalya Aamir khan sarkhe 'memory' madhun 'udun' gelel asate

Thats absolutely fine Dilip...no pressure at all...when you have the time, inclination and are free from more important issues you can continue with the story...but again, no compulsion at all 😛

And your story idea of a reverse MPM2 is interesting 👍🏼

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