Thread for 'Gosht aapulya aawadichi

Dear all ZM Forum-friends, it is evident from various comments on GTC and other serial-specific threads that; we are NOT happy with any of the serial being aired currently.

Koi kare to kya kare?😕

In one of his post on GTC thread, SW has suggested one fantastic idea. I reproduce his words below -

" ...We can even make the story contributory - each of us writes story for an episode to take the story forward (and make life difficult for the person writing the next episode!). When we travelled for inter-collegiate elocution / debating competitions, we would get together in the evenings and play such games. E.g. I would speak a sentence and the guy to my right would add another to it to start a story. Then the guy to his right would add another and so on.

Here's an example:

1. It was a lovely morning in Karad. (The canvas is blank.)

2. But it was not so in the Patil household. (A dark background has been added.)

3. The moneylender had taken away the two bullocks Baburao used to plough the fields. (Specifics have been added.)

4. But Baburao wasn't going to sit idle and take the misfortune lying down. (A dash of optimism)

5. He decided to rob an ATM near the deserted end of the town. (An unexpected twist.)

You get the idea.

So Dilip, pl come up with an idea for a TV serial and we will keep it going. We can also vote on who should play which part and so on. Just for fun."

Friends, giving below is blank canvas' to start with.

Any one can take lead from it and as per his/ her imagination may write next paragraphs, next couple of lines.

Language is no barrier. On can narrate in English or Marathi (Bhavana pochalyashi matalab)

Then other person can take it further.

Once the premise is built, characters are known, we will write the episodes'

Let's explore if we (all collectively) can write a sensible story' for TV serial and ...

Let's start

Gosht aapulya aawadichi... (sarwani milun Lihayachi)

Opening shot -

"Mi aata ithech rahaNar aahe"

"Ka"

It's up to our imagination now, who is talking to whom, why, etc

The one who will be writing next part of story can write "Gosht ... continued" as Header and then write further

Gosht aapulya aawadichi... (contd)

Opening shot -

"Mi aata ithech rahaNar aahe"

"Ka?"

"kA mhaNje kAy? He ghar tumchyAitkach mAjhe hI Ahe"

"He pahA Sanjay ... hech nAv Ahe nA tujhe? tar Sanjay, tujhe ithe achAnak yeNe, te suddhA he jAUn jemtem dahA diwas jhAle asatAnA, ANi AmhAlA sAngaNe kI tU hyAnchAch mulgA Ahes, hA AmhA sarwAnA ek moThA dhakkA Ahe. tewhA ApaN jarA ekmekAnA samjUn gheNyAchA prayatna karAyalA hawA nA?"

Good start, Dilip! Hope this catches on!

Pl feel free to add as much as you want if you have a definite idea and need that much space to develop it. The first declaration and the question could have been answered in many ways and I chose one (albeit a popular one among Marathi serials - the hero's father has a child from a previous marriage unknown to the rest of the family and the arrival of that child shatters the peace of the family). If you don't like this direction, feel free to expand it differently.

If you like it, keep going!

Originally posted by: dlip

I agree about 'locking mechanism' and good to one can 'pass' to the next in turn 😉

So, as off now The sequence is Dilip, Anni, SW, Vidya

Look forward for more contributors 😊