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Hey shruti first of all thnx for giving us beautiful OS and TS earlier...After Reading prologue this seems very different from ur earlier beautiful works...This has potential to be as ur Best Story among all ur writings.. Eagerly Waiting For ur 1st Chapter😃

Originally posted by: sneharay

Interesting.. update soon

Thank you Sneha:) I'll work on the update this week!

Originally posted by: avihothi

Nice.

Do pm me.

Thank you! I'll surely PM you, have sent you a buddy request:).

Originally posted by: manasie23

Shruuu this was absolutely brilliant... I was actually waiting for you to write an SS... The way you describe a certain event actually makes me feel that I am present there...
When you described the scene where Sanskaar was being whiplashed I literally cringed at the pain he might be feeling...

By the way I am supposed to imagine an alternate reality but I think in the 18th century there were more of healers rather than doctors... *sorry I am sooo into 18th century highlander romance*

By the will be waiting for the next update

Manuuu xoxo

Thank you sweetie! I haven't attempted a SS before as I'm so impatient myself, I don't like waiting! I want to write out the whole thing asap and writing this takes a totally different skill set which seemed daunting to me! But let's see how this goes, everyone's reactions have made me so happy! Glad you really felt that scene! Oh yes re healers and the like but they still considered themselves doctors na? I mean technically the term would be "vaid" I suppose which we later came to differentiate. Also it's just a reference as that's how they would think of them- people in charge of treatment. I am writing the dialogues in English for a change hence have to rely on terms that are commonly used in conversation and not be too prescriptive. Hope that makes sense? I'll try and work on next part quickly! Lots of love xx

Wow !!!

Originally posted by: simsen23

Shruti..
Wow superb one dear...another beutiful story from you 😊
i love prince-princess kind of story...
And am eagerly waiting for next update
love
simi 😊

Hey Simi! Thank you so much, glad you liked it so far, I'll let you know when i update:) love x

Originally posted by: tarun1234567

Hey shruti first of all thnx for giving us beautiful OS and TS earlier...After Reading prologue this seems very different from ur earlier beautiful works...This has potential to be as ur Best Story among all ur writings.. Eagerly Waiting For ur 1st Chapter😃

Lots of Love,

Tarun

Thank you so much Tarun, especially as I know you've been time pressured. Am so grateful for your ongoing support on my work! Yes this is totally different from anything I have attempted before, hence the nervousness. I so hope you are right about the potential it has but I genuinely don't know! I can only do my best I suppose so will see where this journey takes:). I am working on chap 1 already:). See you soon! Love xoxo

Originally posted by: pearl.16

Wow !!!

That was fantastic !!!

Please continue...

Hi there! I believe you are a new reader? If so, welcome and thank you so much for liking this! I'll try and have the first chapter up soon:)

unreserving...

Shruti ...A brilliant update once again. I am not gonna go in details about your writing... because like always you have cast your magic spell on me and I was totally lost... 😳 Coming to the real content... So we are finally meeting The angels and demons of this story... loved the title... I am liking Annapurna ... she is an interesting character I am looking forward to see how and what her role will shape into.
Swara... lolz... you described her so perfectly... I can imagine her like that... spilling out of a carriage and looking and still laughing... told you you write so amazingly... 😉😉
Sanskaar... gihehehe... our devil boy want to stir trouble... amazing... looking forward to read how...😆😆 and poor guy... Right now he have only caught a glimpse and he is distracted... what will happen when they will meet... so looking forward to it...
Coming to my most favorite part of this update the cosmic connection...we have that in show too but you made it more impactful by your words and make it more amazing by further extending it to their eye lock... So first impressions have been made up by both... now I am looking forward for more...
Love you
Nitz...