~ Door Tak Nigahon Me Hain Gul Khile Hue ~ IshRa OS (Banner: Thnx Aru)

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Song : DEKHA EK KHWAB

Movie: SILSILA






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Door Tak Nigahon Me Hain Gul Khile Hue



"Ye kya hai Raman? Kuch bhi utha lete ho aap. Ek baar mujhse pooch toh liya hota" Ishita complained while scanning the shopping bags that Raman had got.



"Teri problem kya hai Madrasan? Tu ne hi to kaha tha ke tujhe Kshitija aur Rohit keliye toys khareedne hain. To mai le aaya. Ab isme chillane wali baat kya hogayi?" Raman was irritated.



"Haan maine kaha tha ke mujhe unke liye toys khareedne hain. Par ye to nahi kaha tha na ke kuch bhi utha lawo. Ye kya hai Raman? Isse Kshitija aur Rohit kya khel payenge?" Ishita pointed at the 3+ years mark on the toys and questioned him.



"Kyun nahi khel paayenge? Aaj nahi to do saal baad khel lenge" Raman tried to cover up for his mistake.



"Kuch bhi logic magar poore confidence se! Ab do saal tak ye khilone aise hi pade rahenge kya yahan?" Ishita mocked.



"Hogayi galti. Baksh do mujhe. Ab in khilonon ke peeche meri jaan le logi kya" he slapped his palms against each other making a namaste in front of her and slumped on the single couch.



"Arey aap to bura maan gaye. Mera woh matlab nahi tha Raman. Mai bas ye keh rahi thi ke jin cheezon ki samajh na ho usme pooch liya karo" she tried to coax him by sitting on the arm rest of the couch he was seated on and hugged him sideways.



"Mujhe jo pasand aya wo sab khareed liya. Ab ye thodi na pata tha ke iske liye bhi Ishita Encyclopedia ko refer karna padega" he sulked.



"Haan toh aap apni pasand thodi na sab pe thop sakte ho. Kabhi meri pasand se bhi kuch kar liya karo" she teased.



"Tum apni pasand ki toh baat hi mat karo. Meri pasand ka ek class hai. Tumhari pasand kya hai? Wo gaudy sa kanjeevaram, wo sada hua dosa, wo badboodaar tel...ewww" Raman started to annoy her.



"Rehne do aap. Zyada mat underestimate karo meri pasand ko. Ye mat bhoolo ke aap bhi to meri hi pasand ho" Ishita smirked.



"Oh hello Madrasan! Galatfehmi me jeena band kar samjhi na. Agar tu bhool gayi hai to yaad dila doon mujhe tune pasand karke shadi nahi ki thi. 'Sirf Ruhi keliye' majboori me shadi ki thi. Tabhi jaake mujh jaisa handsome, intelligent, classy pati mila tujhe. Warna teri choice kya thi? Wo psycho Subbu aur wo interfering Nagmani" Raman trapped her in her own words.



"Haan toh theek hai na. Aap ne bhi thodi mujhe apni pasand se shadi ki thi. Aapne bhi to 'Sirf Ruhi keliye' hi to ki thi shadi mujhse" Ishita gulped embarrassed and tried to play his own game at him now.



"I completely agree Madrasan. Ye baat tune 100% sahi kahi. Maine tujhe pasand nahi kiya tha. Tabhi toh mujhe tu mili hai" Raman said making an ugly face.



"Aap kehna kya chahte ho?" Ishita jumped down from the arm rest and stood in front of him with her hands on her hips.



Raman stood up too, locked his hands behind her neck and huskily came close to her ears and whispered: "Mai ye kehna chahta hoon ke agar mai apni pasand se shadi karta to..."



"Toh..." Ishita began to melt under his gaze.



"Toh aaj mujhe baat baat pe tere lecture sunne nahi padte. Mai to koi kam bolnewali, khoobsurat, patli kamarwali ladki se shadi kar leta" Raman winked and left her to recover from the shock as he proceeded towards the washroom.



"Aap kehna kya chahte ho? Mai khoobsurat nahi hoon?" She shouted as he locked the door of the washroom.



Cluck he unlocked the door, popped his head out and said: "Nahi. Mai ye kehna chahta hoon ke TUM...MERI...PASAND...NAHI...HO" he emphasised on each word and quickly saved his head from being butchered by locking himself safely in the washroom.



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Next evening



"Raman aaj ghar pe sirf mai aur aap hain dinner keliye. Sab bahar gaye hue hain wahin se khaake aayenge. To bataiye hamare liye kya banaun dinner me?" Ishita called Raman at his office to ask his dinner preference.



"Kuch bhi bana lo apne pasand ka. Waise bhi aaj mujhe kuch achha khane ka man nahi hai. Lunch me zyada hi khaa liya tha" Raman said casually while he was checking some important data on his laptop.



"Iska matlab aapko seriously meri pasand achhi nahi lagti? Mujhe laga tha aap kal rath hamesha ki tarah mazak kar rahe ho mujhe chidaane keliye. Par abhi aapne ye bolke prove kar diya ke aapko sachhi me meri pasand, pasand nahi hai. How mean Raman! Aap se ye ummeed nahi thi" Ishita sulked.



Raman paused what he was doing as the interpretation of his words dawned upon him. He bit his tongue and smacked his forehead.



"Arey jaan mera matlab wo nahi tha" he tried to convince her when he heard her sniffing.



"Don't jaan me Raman. Mai achhi tarah se samajhti hoon aap kya kehna chahte ho. Samajh gayi mai ke mai kitni bhi koshish karloon apki pasand nahi ban sakti" she sobbed.



"Arey yaar. Tum baat ko kahan se kahan le jaa rahi ho" he said.



"Bilkul sahi jagah le jaa rahi hun mai baat ko. Thank you for enlightening me. Bye" she said and disconnected the call.



"Ishita meri baat to suno"


Beep beep beep he heard in return.



"Yaar ye kya kar diya tune? Rula diya na Madrasan ko. Kya zarurat thi tujhe kal rath itna sab kehne ki. Mazak ki bhi ek had hoti hai. Par tu kab samjhega. Yaad nahi pichli baar kitni insecure hogayi thi in sab baton ko leke. Pata chala phir se wahi sab sochne lag jaye ke she is not my type n all. Hadd hai tu bhi Raman. Sochna chahye na bolne se pehle" he reprimanded himself.



Raman dialled Mihika's intercom "Hello Mihika kahan ho?" He asked when she said hello.



"Jiju...Aapne mere cabin ke intercom pe call kiya hai. To mai wahin hongi na" Mihika stated the obvious.



"Arey haan. Kya kar rahi ho?"

"Bansal's ki project keliye quotation final kar rahi thi. Aapne kaha tha na ke aaj ghar jaane se pehle submit karna hai. Toh bas usi me lagi thi"



"Ummm...usko rehne do. Tum abhi ke abhi meri cabin me ajao" he commanded.



"Kya hua jiju? All ok?" Mihika was concerned.



"Actually not ok. Ek problem hogayi hai. Teri help chahye" he said.



"Oh. Mai abhi aati hun" she hung the phone and hurried to Raman's cabin.



"Kis baat ko leke pareshan ho jiju? Wo Australia wale project me koi problem hogayi kya?" Mihika guessed.



"Chennai wale project me problem hogayi hai" he said.



"Chennai wali project? Chennai wala project aapne kab liya?" She was confused.



"Dedh saal pehle" he replied.



"Aap kya keh rahe ho jiju? Company ko start kiye hue abhi 6 mahine hi hue hain. Aur aap dedh saal pehle ki baat kar rahe ho?"



"Ye project company ki nahi hai. Meri personal hai" he rubbed his forehead.



"Personal?" Mihika knitted her brows in confusion. "Oh...haan...ab mai samjhi...To problem mere boss ko nahi mere jiju ko hai aur help ek employ ki nahi ek saali ki chahye. Am I right?" Mihika put all the pieces of puzzles in place.



Raman sheepishly nodded his head in affirmative.



"Toh bataiye is baar kya kaand kiya aapne?" Mihika folded her arms acroas her chest.



"Arey problem hai iska matlab ye to nahi ke maine hi koi kaand kiya hai. Kaand to teri akka bhi kar sakti hai na" his male ego didn't let him accept the fact that he was at fault.



"Agar aisa hai jiju toh aap mujhe Bansal's ki file chodke yahan aane ko nahi kehte" Mihika shot an arrow right back at his ego.



"Tum behnein bhi na. Apni baat manwake hi rahogi" he lamented.



"Wo to hai" Mihika raised an imaginary collar "Toh ab apni galti bata rahe ho ya mai jaaun?" Mihika smirked.



"Batata hun meri maa" he gave up and then mumbled "Kya kya papad belne pad rahe hain ek galti se hui galti ko sudharne keliye"



He narrated the entire incident to Mihika and asker her to help him out in convincing his wife. He said that he wanted to do something of Ishita's choice so that he makes her realise what she and her choice means for him.



Mihika took some time to think of some unfulfilled wishes of her sister while Raman grew impatient with every second.



"Yaad agaya" Mihika snapped her fingers.



"Ab batane keliye muhurat dekhogi kya? Jaldi batao na" Raman commented.



"Akka ka bachpan me ek sapna tha ke unhein phoolon ki waadi me ek rath guzarni hai" Mihika revealed.



"Phoolon ki waadi?" Raman was confused.



"Haan phoolon ki waadi. Akka ko bachpan se hi phool bahut pasand hain. Aur wo hamesha sapne dekha karti thi ke wo kisi aisi jagah me rath guzare jahan har taraf phool hi phool hon" Mihika explained.



"Maine sahi kaha tha. Madrasan ki pasand ajeeb hai. Par jaisi bhi hai ab uski ye pasand ko pasand karna hi padega warna wo mujhe kitni pasand hai ye pasand ko pasand se samjhane me mere pasandey hi ban jayenge" he blabbered.



"Jijuuu...ye aap kya bol rahe ho? Mujhe kuch pasand nahi aaya...I mean mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya" Mihika said.



"Mujhe bhi nahi aaya. Par itna samjha hoon ke abhi mere paas zyada time nahi hai, aur mujhe jaldi hi sab arrange karna padega" he declared.



"Aap aisa kya karnewale ho jiju?" Mihika was excited to know.



"Just wait and watch ke Raman Kumar Bhalla ab apni biwi ke wish ko poora karne keliye kya karta hai" He smiled with determination and set out on his mission.



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Contd in the next to next post...Sorry for the inconvenience

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Ishita was busy sulking when the landline rang.



She wiped her tears, cleared her throat and received the call "Hello"



"Main door kholo...Corridor ke left end pe jaao...Udhar tumhe garbage room milega. Aur wahan bade bade trash cans rakhe hue hain. Unme se kisi ek me apna phone daal do" Raman gave instructions from the other end.



"Kya?" Ishita asked trying to get a hang of what he just said.



"Agar phone use nahi karna hai to rakhti kyun ho? Phenk do na garbage me. Kab se phone lag raha hun. Kar kya rahi thi tum?" Raman screamed.



"Mai kuch bhi karun. Aap ko kya? Aur mai aapse baat hi kyun kar rahi hoon?" Ishita was too angry.




"Wo baad me decide kar lena. Filhaal apna huliya sudharo aur Sarai Rohilla pe ajao. Jaldi" he ordered.



"Mai nahi arahi kahin bhi. Mai koi katputli nahi hoon jo aapki marzi ke mutabiq rahun ya aapki PASAND se kuch karun" she emphasised the word Pasand to taunt him.



"Tum apne lectures kisi paper pe likho aur bina pate ke envelope me daalke paas wale post office pe de dena. But usse pehle warehouse pe aa jaana. Ek consignment aake ruka hua hai aur unloading keliye documents pe tumhare signatures ki zarurat hai" he said.



"Mere signatures kyun? Mai koi chief minister hoon kya jo mere signatures ke bina koi kaam nahi ho sakta?" She didn't want to give up easily.



"Itne bhi bure din nahi aaye janta ke tumhe chief minister bana dein. Aur abhi tumhe ye bhi yaad dilana padega kya ke hamari company ki power of attorney tumhare naam pe hai aur tumhare signatures ke bina ye kaam nahi ho sakta. Isliye behes karna band karo aur abhi ke abhi aa jao" the war of words continued.



"Oh! Achha! Theek hai mai abhi aati hun. Par aap keliye nahi, MERI company keliye" she said.



"Jo bhi hai bas aa to jao. Bye" he hung up.



"Hawww...Kitne beghairat hain ye! Na mera haal chaal poocha, na hi mujhe manane ki koshish ki. Bas taane phenkte rahe meri taraf aur upar se hukum jhaad rahe the. Company ki baat na hoti to mai kabhi na jaati...hmph" Ishita said to herself as he hung the phone.



"Jaanta hoon ke mere bulane par nahi aati. Isliye ye bahana karna pada. Aur seedhe seedhe baat karta to tumhe shaq ho jata isliye aur kadwi baatein ki tumse. Sorry Ishita! Bas ek baar ajao phir tumhari saari shikayatein door kardoonga" Raman thought aloud.


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"Kahan sign karna hai Raman?" Ishita asked with a straight face as soon as she spotted him near the station master's office.



"Kardi na bewakoofon wali baat. Aise hi thodi na sign kardogi. Pehle containers check to karlo ke saara saman theek hai ya nahi. Phir uske baad sign kar lena" Raman said.



"Ye sab kaam aapka hai. Mera kaam bas sign karna hai" she was adamant.



"Sirf sign karne se company nahi chalta. Ek to mujhe salary bhi nahi deti tum, bas mehnat hi karaye jaati ho. Ye kaho ke tumhe ye kaam aata hi nahi" he hit on the right spot.



"Earth to Mr.Bhalla! Aap jab hospital me admit the tab aapki company...correction...MERI company maine hi chalayi thi. Ye taane dena band karo aur batao ke kounse container ka maal check karna hai" she shrugged proudly.



"Chalo" he guided her towards a space that was assigned to them for the loading and unloading of the consignments.



Raman unlocked the door of the square space and signalled her to enter it.



Ishita hmphed and stomped towards the space disinterested.



Raman locked the door behind her and waited for her reaction.



As soon as she was in the enclosed space, she halted in her steps taking in the beauty of the place.



It was literally a dream come true moment for her.


Dekha Ek Khwab Toh Yeh Silsilay Hue



The fragrance of roses and lillies and orchids filled her nostrils and the sight of colourful beautiful flowers filled her vision.

Door Tak Nigahon Me Hain Gul Khile Hue



Ishita bent down to pick the petals that were spread like a carpet on the floor. She gathered some in her palms and took a deep breath inhaling the unmatched natural fragrance.



She then slowly swirled around admiring the fresh colourful flowers living her dream and as she completed one round she spotted the man who had made this dream come true.



He was leaning at the door and admiring her in his trademark style with his right hand across his chest supporting his left hand that held his chin and not to mention the left index finger that was at the corner of his lips which had curved into a lop-sided smile.



He looked all the more handsome when he did that. Ishita pouted and stared back at him with complaining eyes.

Ye Gila Hai Aapki Nigahon Se



"Aise kyun dekh rahi ho?" He asked from there.



"Aap na Raman" Ishita acted helpless "Aap itne door kyun ho? Paas aao na" she begged extending her arms for him.



He smiled at her cuteness and took quick long strides towards her.



She took him in the tightest hug not leaving an inch between them.



"Arey kitna kaske pakdogi? Bande ko saans to lene do" he teased.



"Nahi doongi. Mujhe bas aapko tightttly hug karna hai, in phoolon ki pankhudiyan jitna bhi fasla nahi chahye hamare beech" she tightened the grip if it was possible.

Phool Bhi Ho Darmiyaan Toh Faasle Hue



He too held her tightly in response till it became difficult to breathe.



Then they gently loosened their grips around and hugged each other sideways.



"Tumhe achha laga?" He asked.



"Obviously Raman. Kitna khoobsurat hai ye nazara. Aur ye khushboo" she inhaled deeply yet again "kitni achhi hai na?" She said in awe.



Sniff sniff he fake sniffed and said "Mujhe toh nahi aarahi phoolon ki khushboo" he said.



"Ramannn...Don't spoil the fun now. Itni achhi khushboo aa toh rahi hai" she said.



"Jiski saanson me tumhari khushboo basi ho, usko koi aur khushboo kahan se aayegi" he recited like a ghazal.

Meri Saanson Mein Basi Khushboo Teri



"Mera kadwa karela itni meethi batein kab se karne lag gaya?" She was surprised.



"Tumhare pyar ki jadoo ne mere kadwepan ko door kardiya, Meri Meethi Madrasan" He winked.

Yeh Tere Pyaar Ki Hai Jadugari



"Oh ab mai meethi bhi lagne lagi aapko? Kal to bada keh rahe the ke mai aapko bilkul bhi pasand nahi hoon" she complained.



"Jhoot nahi bolunga. Tumhare kuch pasand mujhe pasand nahi aate. Jitni ye baat sach hai, usse bhi zyada sachhi baat ye hai ke tum mujhe bahut pasand ho aur tum sirf aur sirf mere liye bani ho" he admitted with all honesty.



"Itni hi pasand hoon mai toh mujhe satate kyun rehte ho?" She asked.


"Kyunki tumhare lectures sunne se mujhe relief sa milta hai. Strange but true. Tumhari awaz sunta hoon fin bhar ki saari thakaan door ho jati hai"

Teri Aawaz Hai Havaaon Mein



"Kuch bhi! Mujhe manana hai to ab aapko mere lecture bhi relief lagne lage hain? Lectures se relief??? Kuch bhi Raman!" she didn't buy his lines.



"Sach keh raha hoon Madrasan. Kyunki mujhe tumhare lectures me chupa hua pyar nazar aata hai. Aur jab us pyar ko mehsoos karke mera dil dhadakta hai to tumhari baatein sangeet banke mere ragin me doudne lagti hai" he expressed in a poetic style.

Pyar Ka Rang Hai Fizaaon Mein

Dhadkanon Mein Tere Geet Hain Mile Hue



Ishita's cheeks coloured up and she lost her speech.

Kya Kahun Ke Sharm Se Hain Lab Sile Hue



"Itna mat sharmao ki tumhe dekh ke meri dhadkan hi ruk jaye" he held her blushing cheeks in his plams.



"Shhh! Kuch bhi bolte ho Raman. Kitni baar kaha hai ke aisi baatein mat kiya karo" she pushed him away for uttering words like that.



"Sabko ek na ek din jaana hi hai. Agar mai teri wajah se gaya toh ye achhi hi baat hui na. Phir tu bhi sukoon se reh payegi. No taane, no kitkit" he teased.



"Mera dil to aapke hone se dhadakta hai. Jis din apki dhadkan ruk gayi, us din ke baad mera dil bhi nahi dhadkega" she said earnestly.

Mera Dil Hai Teri Panaahon Mein



"Hmmm...Ab itne intense line ke baad ek hug to banta hi hai. Aa jao" he said gathering her in his arms.


Aa Chhupa Loon Tujhe Main Baahon Mein




They stayed in a hug until the lights went off.



Raman panicked knowing Ishita's fear of darkness. "Shit...ye light kaise chali gayi? Ishita tum ghabrana mat. Mai hoon tumhare sath" he blabbered while he fished for his phone in the pocket.



"Calm down Raman. Mai theek hoon" she calmed him.



"Pata nahi ye flashlight bhi kahan gaya. Zarurat ke time koi bhi cheez haath nahi lagti" he cursed impatiently looking for the flashlight app on his phone.



Ishita held his hand and said "Ramannn...Relax...Mai theek hun. Light ajayegi don't worry"



He turned the mobile screen towards her face to make sure if she is really fine or just trying to comfort him. When he saw her smile he found relief.



"Tumhe dar nahi lag raha andhere se ?" He was surprised.



"Jab tak aap mere ankhon ke saamne ho mujhe kisi andhere se dar nahi lagega. Aap ho to roshni hai" she said capturing his image in her big black eyes.

Teri Tasveer Hai Nigaahon Mein
Door Tak Roshni Hai Raahon Mein



"Achha? Itna bharosa hai mujh pe?" He asked in awe.



"Usse bhi zyada. Mujhe poora yaqeen hai ke aap agar sath ho to mai kisi bhi mushkil ka saamna kar paaungi. Aapka pyar hi wo roshni hai jo mujhe dard ke andheron se bahar le aayi hai aur aage bhi agar koi dukh ka andhera mujhe gher le to aap apne pyar ke diye se meri zindagi ko roshan kar doge" her faith on him was unwavering.

Kal Agar Na Roshni Ke Kaafile Hue
Pyar Ke Hazaar Deep
Hain Jale Hue



"Thank you Raman. Meri zindagi me aane keliye, mere khwabon ko sach karne keliye. Aaj bhi aapne mere ek aise khwab ko poora kiya hai, jo maine kabhi nahi socha tha ke sach hoga. You amaze me Raman and I love to be amazed by you every second I live with you" she confessed.



"Khwab to maine bhi ek dekha hai Ishita. Actually ye khwab humne sath milke dekha tha aur ab mai us khwab ko sach karna chahta hoon" he said.



"Aap kis khwab ki baat kar rahe ho Raman?"



"Hamare pyar ke bagh me ek naye gul ke khilne ka khwab" he reminded.



"Raman...Wo khwab kabhi poora nahi ho sakta. Wo khwab toot chuka hai aur ab kabhi sach nahi ho sakta" she choked as she remembered how she had lost her baby due to the accident and was told that she would never be able to taste motherhood again.
(PS: There is no surrogacy in my story. I just hate it)



"Kyun nahi ho sakta Ishita? Mujhe yaqeen hai ke jaise aaj ye sapna poora hua hai, wo bhi hoga kisi na kisi din" he was adamant.



"Raman aap kyun nahi samajhte? Is sapne ki baat alag hai aur us sapne ki baat bilkul alag. Aap kyun aise behave kar rahe ho jaise aap kuch jaante hi nahi. Meri medical history aur phir wo miscarriage. In sab ke baad its not possible Raman" she tried to put some sense in him.



"Medical science se bhi badi taqat hamare pyar ki taqat hai aur doctors se bada hamara Khuda hai. Uski laboratory me kisi ke medical history ya kisi test ki koi ehmiyat nahi. Wo bada doctor upar baithke hamara test kar raha hai. Agar is test me hamara report positive aaya to phir hamara sapna poora hone se koi nahi rok sakta" he explained.



"Raman" she didn't know what to say.



"Be positive Ishita. Agar hum himmat haar jayenge aur koshish bhi na karenge to ye possible kaise ho paayega? Mai ye nahi kehta ke ek bachha hamare pyar ko aage badhane keliye zaruri hai. Agar woh na bhi hua to hamara pyar ek doosre keliye kam nahi hoga. Par haan mujhe is baat par bhi yaqeen hai ke hamare pyar me itni taqat hai ke wo naslon tak zinda rahegi. Aur iske liye tumhe mera saath dena hoga" he poured out all his hidden desires which he had kept to himself until now to let her recover from the shock and pain she had gone through after losing their first baby.



"Mai apka sath doongi Raman" she nodded with teary eyes.



He was finally able to convince her.



"Thank you Ishita. I love you" he said.



"I love you too Raman" she replied.



"Ab hamare paas zyada time nahi hai. Chalo gul khilate hain" he said casually.



"What????" Ishita laughed at his funny statement.



"Aur nahi to kya? Itni der PHOOLON KI WAADI me waqt guzara aur koi gul nahi khilaya toh lanat hai mujhpe" he winked naughtily.



"Kuch bhi" she slapped his arm.



"Tum aise hi kuch bhi kuch bhi kehke kuch bhi karne nahi dogi to gul khilne se pehle hi murjha jayenge. Itni der tumpe phool barsaye ab pyar barsane do" he said and leaned in to taste the sweetness of his love.

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With a dream being fulfilled they lied on the bed of flowers for the fulfilment of another dream that would fill their garden of life with flowers of love.

Dekha Ek Khwaab Toh Yeh Silsilay Hue
Door Tak Nigahon Mein Hain Gul Khile Hue
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kya bolun main...matlab sachi kya bolun...agar possible hota na toh main aapko khud ki pic bhejti is time ki and aapko meri khushi ka andaaza ho jaata

yes i was sulking ki mujhe first RES nahi mila par phir maine realize kiya ki mujhe kya ho gaya hai...ek post ke liye main udaas ho rahi hoon jabki yeh pura OS pura thread hi sirf mere liye hai...ab iske main first page pe comment karun second pe karun ya last pe kya pharak padta hai...iske kisi bhi page par main comment karun mujhe haq hai 😳😳😳


you know i am feeling so special today that i cannot express in words...ofcourse the OS is special but what makes it eternally special is the time...if i am not wrong you had started working on it around the same time yesterday and having it ready to read today is something called huge achievement specially when i know how packed your days are

haan main chahti thi ki aap ek OS likho but jab yeh chahti thi tab yeh nahi socha tha ki aise main aapko koi song dungi ya mood specify karungi

par yeh toh double bonus ho gaya na

OS bhi mil gaya apne one of the fav songs pe bhi mil gaya aur jaisa chahie tha waisa bhi mil gaya...actually jaisa chahie tha us se better

toh bas as you know when i am too happy, my real madness comes out...ab dekho meri pagalpanti and meri khushi ka andaaza laga lo


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Dekha Yeh OS Toh Yeh Silsile Hue

Dur Tak Forum Pe Hain Gul Khile Hue

Yeh Gila Hai Aapki Aadaton Se

Paas Hain Hum Itne Phir Kyun Faasle Hue ( by faasle I mean your absence from the forum because honestly i miss you here and by paas i meant ki we are connected on WA all the time)


Dekha Yeh OS Toh Yeh Silsile Hue

Dur Tak Forum Pe Hain Gul Khile Hue



Is OS Mein Basi Mehnat Teri (Please read teri as aapki )

Yeh OS Hai Tere Talent Ki Jaadugari

Teri Aawaz Hai Hawaaon Mein ( your strong write ups are famous on the forum)

Pyaar Ka Rang Hai Fizaon Mein (readers' love is everywhere which brings you back again and again)

Dhadkanon Mein Tere Geet Hain Mile Hue ( aapki stories har reader ke dil aur dimag mein jo mile hue hain)

Kya Kahun Ki Sharm Se Lab Sile Hue ( Yes i am blushing so much reading this OS for two reasons...firstly the romance in it and secondly since it is exclusively for me )



Dekha Yeh OS Toh Yeh Silsile Hue

Dur Tak Forum Pe Hain Gul Khile Hue



ok ab OS ke baare mein bahut kuch keh diya ab zara apne dono ke baare mein keh dun even though samajh sirf humen hi aayega yeh sab...to the world, it would look like we are retarded.



Mera Dil Hai Teri Kahaniyon Mein

Aa Chupa Lun Tujhe Main Baahon Mein (If possible i could have hidden you from the world and specially from JEEJU 😡😡 and kept with me taaki aap bas likhti jao likhti jao and 24*7 updates deti jao 😳😳😳)

Teri Tasveer Hai Nigaahon Mein (Yes photo se hi kaam chalta hai abhi toh since we haven't met)

Dur Tak Roshni Hai Raahon Mein (Ok this is funny and kuch connect karna samajh nahi aa raha toh i would say i keep the whole house's lights on when we talk late night toh ho gayi na dur tak roshni 😆😆😆 )

Kal Agar Na Roshni Ke Kaafile Hue ( the days when our patis don't let us talk 😆 )

Pyaar Ke Hazaar Deep Hain Jale Hue ( We manage with the memories of old talks and plan about the talks for the next day 🤣🤣🤣🤣)


Dekha Yeh OS Toh Yeh Silsile Hue

Dur Tak Forum Pe Hain Gul Khile Hue


ab tata bye bye see you with a sane comment in my next post
Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago
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one more i need kyunki ek post se mera kya hoga 😆
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see i am trying my best to comment like a normal sane human but kuch pagalpanti dikh jaaye toh chup chaap has lena IRCTC kholke meri Agra ki ticket mat katana pleashe ( badi mumma 😉😉 )

first line of the OS itself cracked me up 😆 yaad hai France se kya aaya 😆 men will be men kuch bhi le aate hain

unki nok jhok ko maine itna jyada enjoy kiya ki kya bolun bas maza aa gaya...har dialog bas lag raha tha ki KP ke personal collection se aaya hai...you are a tough competition for KP didi when it comes to one liners...maza aa gaya nok jhok dekhke...i mean padhke but maine imagine kar liya DT and KP ko woh saare dialogs kehke

"Tum apni pasand ki toh baat hi mat karo. Meri pasand ka ek class hai. Tumhari pasand kya hai? Wo gaudy sa kanjeevaram, wo sada hua dosa, wo badboodaar tel...ewww" sorry but yeh best tha 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 best pata hai kyun...kyunki ek south Indian hone ke baad bhi aapne yeh likha 🤣🤣🤣🤣



Warna teri choice kya thi? Wo psycho Subbu aur wo interfering Nagmani"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 i agreee...Ishita ne choose toh bade ajeeb ajeeb se bande hi kiye hain. 😉


"Toh aaj mujhe baat baat pe tere lecture sunne nahi padte. Mai to koi kam bolnewali, khoobsurat, patli kamarwali ladki se shadi kar leta"

patli kamar like seriously 😆 why do i feel yeh dialog kisi ke personal collection se hai 😎😎😎😎😎 kahin aisa toh nahi aapke pati ki bhi yeh hasrat thi

"Kuch bhi bana lo apne pasand ka. Waise bhi aaj mujhe kuch achha khane ka man nahi hai.
ACHA 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


bas yahi tak thi comedy...aage toh woh serious ho gayi 😭 waise i can understand her state...main bhi toh mazaak mein serious ho jaati hu aur ghanto roti hoon

Don't jaan me Raman🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

yaar yeh Ishra hum sab fans ko ek din maar daalenge...ladte bhi hain toh itna cutely ki hum fans kehte hain aur lado

loved it loved it loved it totally


Mihika toh humesha hi meri pasand rahi hai you know it
and usne jo Raman ke silly questions ke smart answer diye maza hi aa gaya 👏👏👏👏

Chennai wala project 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 jo biwi ko project bulae woh bas Raman Bhalla hi ho sakta hai

"Maine sahi kaha tha. Madrasan ki pasand ajeeb hai. Par jaisi bhi hai ab uski ye pasand ko pasand karna hi padega warna wo mujhe kitni pasand hai ye pasand ko pasand se samjhane me mere pasandey hi ban jayenge"

this was epic...tongue twister ki list mein yeh pasand zarur kiya jaega 😆😆😆

mujhe kuch pasand nahi aaya...i mean samajh nahi aaya 😆


aiyo...i just realized ki OS abhi aadha hua and my comment already looks like an essay...i hope yeh mera comment post karde IF...message size overlimit dikhaya toh main iska katl kar dungi 😡 khair to be on safe side i am copying this all saath saath


yaar yeh Raman bhi mahaan hai...romance ke liye bula raha hai phir bhi itna rudely
aur yeh Ishita bhi dumb hai...ise samajh jaana chahie ki jab iska antique pati aise weird tareeke se bulae toh samajh lo kuch acha hone wala hai...kyunki jab woh ache tareeke se kuch karne nikalta hai toh waise bhi kuch acha nahi hota...sirf haddiyaan hi palle padti hain


btw beghairat 😆



Kardi na bewakoofon wali baat. Aise hi thodi na sign kardogi. Pehle containers check to karlo ke saara saman theek hai ya nahi. Phir uske baad sign kar lena

Kardi na bewakoofon wali baat this line i hear almost twice a day 😆


and finally the dreamy sequence start ho gaya...us mein se ek bhi line copy nahi kar rahi hoon kyunki har ek line behad khaas hai...copy karne pe aayi toh pura update hi copy karna padega

bas yahi kehna chahungi ki maine sachi nahi socha tha ki aap us song ko aisa kuch bana dogi...mera dimag bas itna chala tha ki kahin park wark mein ghumne jayenge aur wahin lehraate lehraate gaana gaayenge...but this was totally unexpected and as it is said unexpected is always the best and this was the best

BTW it had my name 😳


jaise aapne lines sync ki hain...perfection 👏

jo jo words use kiye hain...perfection

jo moment create kiya hai...perfection

Ishra perfection

and bhaiya author toh beyond perfection

maza aa gaya behad maza aa gaya...btw aapke munna ne bhi padha saath mein...woh keh rahe hain next Delhi trip ke liye maa ne idea de diya 😆


and yes i loved the small twist you gave in the end...not exactly the twist but thoda sa jo hatke kiya aapne...loved that sweetness

and now

"Ab hamare paas zyada time nahi hai. Chalo gul khilate hain" he said casually.



"What????" Ishita laughed at his funny statement.



"Aur nahi to kya? Itni der PHOOLON KI WAADI me waqt guzara aur koi gul nahi khilaya toh lanat hai mujhpe" he winked naughtily.



"Kuch bhi" she slapped his arm.



"Tum aise hi kuch bhi kuch bhi kehke kuch bhi karne nahi dogi to gul khilne se pehle hi murjha jayenge. Itni der tumpe phool barsaye ab pyar barsane do" he said and leaned in to taste the sweetness of his love.


this was hilarious plus naughty...gul khilane hain 😆


With a dream being fulfilled they lied on the bed of flowers for the fulfilment of another dream that would fill their garden of life with flowers of love.

this was beautiful


i know i know aapko late ho raha hai and i am keeping you waiting

islie bas winding up

all i can say is i love you as much as many flowers were there is this song

and a heartfelt thank you for writing this

par aapko kis baat ka thank you aapko toh yeh likhna hi tha

kyunki main dhadkan aap dil


Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Diii aap toh ek bahut achi surprise diya.
as I saw this story with ur username I was like yeyy mannudiii vaapas aagayi. but nooo
still I'm happy.

res

unres


Diii it was awesome.

aur kya bataun main?

aap kaise likh deti ho aise jaise Hume lagta hai ki yeh ek story nahin balki its a shayari

the nokjoks was superb. I feel like old yhm mil gayi

I lvd the update sooo sooo much.

I don't how to express my happiness.

Pankhuri thanks. jaanti hoon yeh sirf tereliye tha.

but still it's a surprise for me also

thank u sooo much for making it possible that
mannu Diii waapas forum mein aagaya even just for an OS.

n Diii acha hua aapne is story mein Raman ki help karne keliye mihika ko bulaya

agar WO mihir hoti omg I can't even imagine.

Diii WO pasand waala dialogue after reading it I was also like mihika
totally confused.

totally I lvd the update
Edited by AshmiShahul - 10 years ago
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it's lovely os dr. thanks for this lovely story dr.
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Ayyyo😲
Yeh kya hogaya mere post ke sath?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dekho Chaand Aaya
Chaand Nazar Aaya

Aapko is forum pe dekha to yehi gaana
yaad aaya...
Main to yehi chahungi ki ye chaand
humesha nazar aaye is forum par...sacchi


OS ke baare me kya kahun...
It was Beautiful and Awesome...
Jo ki shuru hui unke nok-jhok se aur jaa
pahunchi phoolon ki haseen waadiyon
me...gul khilaane...heehee


Maine to dono ki nok-jhok ko bahut hi
jyada enjoy kiya... mujhe to show ke
purane din yaad aa gaye...

amazing dialogs & one liners ke to jawab
nahi...hillarious...

You wrote it very well...aur jab aaplog(M+P)
kuch likhte ho to wo humein pasand to
aana hi aana hai...

I enjoyed Raman and Mihika's scene a
lot...ye dono jab saath hote hain...to waha
humein entertain to hona hi hai...

Chennai wali project...hehehee...too good

Aur wo pasandey wala line mujhe bhi bada
pasand aaya...


Aur iske baad to jaise main kisi dream world
main chali gai ...sab kuch bas ek sundar se
khwaab jaisa laga...


"Jiski saanson me tumhari khushboo basi ho,
usko koi aur khushboo kahan se aayegi" he
recited like a ghazal."

Aww...so romantic...


"Ab hamare paas zyada time nahi hai. Chalo
gul khilate hain"

Haahaa...I loved it...


"With a dream being fulfilled they lied on the
bed of flowers for the fulfilment of another
dream that would fill their garden of life
with flowers of love."

Beautiful line...


Dekha Ek Khwaab Toh Ye Silsiley Hue
Door Tak Nigahon Me Hain Gul Khile Hue

Sach me ye OS ek sundar sa khwaab tha...jise
maine khule aankhon se dekha...



Edited by riYa09guPta - 10 years ago
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It was freaking Awesome OS yaar..
U nailed it..
Why didn't u write more OSes?

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