SS - Break Ke Baad - Part 3 Pg. 11

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Santosh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Sanam Di & Mak Bhaiya !😃

Sorry I am bit late kya karu adatt se majbur hu 😆!

I loved it as usual, it was amazing! This update reminds me "Dwayne johnson's" mysterious island movie 😆!

Though I loved every word of it. but here are my most favorite parts!

"Haan haan bolo!"

"Chi... Tum mujhse sunna bhi chahte ho k tum kya kar rahe the party me? Ab mein ek minute bhi yaha nahi ruk sakti tumhaare saath" Ragini cried out. Chi!!! 🤣 This part in particular was no less hilarious.🤣

"Mein kya keh raha tha Ragini..." He pauses looking at Ragini, who is shamelessly staring her. Isse kya hua, ghoor kyu rahi yeh mujhe. "Ragini... Ragini..." He climbs down to check if Ragini is all well until something struck his mind, Is she staring??? She is staring!!! Nachiket comes closer and though his heart loved it he felt a little embarrassed... "Stop... Stop staring" He stammered. Shaken from those shouts and unable to handle Nachiket's intense eyes, Ragini looks down to mutter sorry.I loved it bhai

Superb work..

"Tum bhi na Ragini... Ab chalen."

"I am Sorry Nachiket... Mujhe nahi kehna chahiye tha, ab mera koi haq nahi kehne ka.. Chalen"

Feeling pained at that sorry, "Let me do something" Nachiket said and strode out towards the sea.

"Nachiket, tum aaj bhi accha khaana bana lete ho." She comments taking the first bite.Poor Nachiket feeling pained!😭

"Thank you Ragini. Aur mein jaanta hun tumhe aaj bhi Maggi ke ilawa kuch nahi baanae aata." "Maggi" 🤣 🤣 🤣 Maggi tho wapas agayi ab koi "mentos" ka bhi kuch karo Kitna khata hu firbi dimag ki batti nahi jalti.😆 🤣

The entire update has been so much fun to read this story is getting better by time and i don't want it to end because this story is sooo cute!

Pleeej 😆 Update choon.😆

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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: AsEnAth

Dont say last part yaar 😭cant you make it 6parts😳or more😉

Sorry for the late reply dear as the ID had some issues😛

6 Parts?😲 Really sorry but we cannot stretch Neira's stay on Island any longer 😆 the next part will be the last one😳

Edited by MansurKhan56 - 9 years ago

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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Santosh99
Sanam Di & Mak Bhaiya !😃

Sorry I am bit late kya karu adatt se majbur hu 😆!

I loved it as usual, it was amazing! This update reminds me "Dwayne johnson's" mysterious island movie 😆!

Though I loved every word of it. but here are my most favorite parts!

"Haan haan bolo!"

"Chi... Tum mujhse sunna bhi chahte ho k tum kya kar rahe the party me? Ab mein ek minute bhi yaha nahi ruk sakti tumhaare saath" Ragini cried out. Chi!!! 🤣 This part in particular was no less hilarious.🤣

"Mein kya keh raha tha Ragini..." He pauses looking at Ragini, who is shamelessly staring her. Isse kya hua, ghoor kyu rahi yeh mujhe. "Ragini... Ragini..." He climbs down to check if Ragini is all well until something struck his mind, Is she staring??? She is staring!!! Nachiket comes closer and though his heart loved it he felt a little embarrassed... "Stop... Stop staring" He stammered. Shaken from those shouts and unable to handle Nachiket's intense eyes, Ragini looks down to mutter sorry.I loved it bhai
Superb work..

"Tum bhi na Ragini... Ab chalen."
"I am Sorry Nachiket... Mujhe nahi kehna chahiye tha, ab mera koi haq nahi kehne ka.. Chalen"

Feeling pained at that sorry, "Let me do something" Nachiket said and strode out towards the sea.
"Nachiket, tum aaj bhi accha khaana bana lete ho." She comments taking the first bite.Poor Nachiket feeling pained!😭

"Thank you Ragini. Aur mein jaanta hun tumhe aaj bhi Maggi ke ilawa kuch nahi baanae aata." "Maggi" 🤣 🤣 🤣 Maggi tho wapas agayi ab koi "mentos" ka bhi kuch karo Kitna khata hu firbi dimag ki batti nahi jalti.😆 🤣

The entire update has been so much fun to read this story is getting better by time and i don't want it to end because this story is sooo cute!

Pleeej 😆 Update choon.😆

Knock Knock... Santosh Look who is here! 😎😎😎😎

Coming to your kind feedback brotha, Thank you so much for enjoying this update...😛

Santosh that Chii thing😆 was written by none other me 😎 and the Maggi part was nailed by my partner Sanam😳

We are glad that you enjoyed every bit of this story... But honestly not sure when we can update the next part as we both are busy with our respective works😕

Will try our best to write the last part *choon*😆