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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Santosh99

Chal jhute 😲 --------- Ye toh meri line hai😡 especially app keliye 😆

Bhai i also often use this line for others too😆 but i am happy that it got used on me too😆

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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: imagine43
Had read it earlier, had to re-read to comment. This is awesome second part.. perfect continuation.. as it continues to maintain the same grip. It has a perfect mixture of all elements, love, hatred, jealously, pain and friendship. 👏 Loved reading it.
My Fav,, I dont know why I endup liking Pam;s dialogues always.. you guys do them very well..
"Jangliyon ki tarah lad rahe the tum dono sub ke saamne" 🤣

I liked the cute "Raja hindustani" touch in the flash back. It too me back to that movie...
The jealously - Sheena is so well described..

I still cant imagine, Ragini calling him "Nachi baby"!, but that is just me.

Drunk Ragini jumped!! I hope she knows how to swim.. and they dont get very cold.. Waiting for the next part, literally like this

Thank you Imagine for loving this second update and coming back to give in depth comment😳...

Apki yeh just tareef nahi thi, yeh toh tareef ka baap tha, nahi nahi tareef ka dada tha😛

We are glad that you enjoyed this update and that quoted dialogue of Pam's is masterminded by Sanameyy and it made me grin big time😆

Yes the flash back had a bit of Raja Hindustani touch... Yes the mystery of Ragini knowing swimming or not will be disclosed in the next update😃

Stayed tuned😃 and apke Story ka update k liye waiting😳

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imagine43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

Thank you Imagine for loving this second update and coming back to give in depth comment😳...

Apki yeh just tareef nahi thi, yeh toh tareef ka baap tha, nahi nahi tareef ka dada tha😛

We are glad that you enjoyed this update and that quoted dialogue of Pam's is masterminded by Sanameyy and it made me grin big time😆

Yes the flash back had a bit of Raja Hindustani touch... Yes the mystery of Ragini knowing swimming or not will be disclosed in the next update😃

Stayed tuned😃 and apke Story ka update k liye waiting😳

Yeh to tareef ka bachcha tha.. baap aur dada next update mein milega..😆

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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: imagine43

Yeh to tareef ka bachcha tha.. baap aur dada next update mein milega..😆

Ok i guess now the Pressure is on😆

But yeah this time, definitely we will try to justify your faith and come back with something special😳

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Ragini Joshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Wow guys! Epic stuff

I'm loving this Nachi baby and Ragz in your story 😆 As always, perfect entertainment! We need this. Their flashbacks are so lovely guys! Aww my babies, joshiley😆

And Aahaan! Sanam, Miss touch me not hmm😲 That was somebody's copyright 😆

Ragini madam drunk😃 So excited for the tamasha. He he. Waiting waiting waiting!

Superb! And continue writing such full on entertaining stuffs👏

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Zohalhussein

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Sanam and Mansur this update is very beautiful and lovely thanks a lot 😊 But can't wait until next part 😭

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Zohalhussein

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: poetic
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Nachi Baby ...

And all those emojis 🤪 Too cute

I am so enjoying this Break Ke Baad, please continue

Rachna your Nachi baby is so flirty tip 😆 But please tell him that don't hurt my Ragini 😭 😭

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BlueMoon8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Hahahahaha 😆 😆 😆

Too hilarious were the flashbacks ..

Btw, this bodyguard wala Ragini .. seems to be inspired from somewhere.. someone else 🤣 🤣

Yeh sab khatarnak names kahan se milta hai ? 'Sheena' ? 😲

Poora India taang hai iss naam se 😆 😆 😆

Next time Nachiket ko 'Indrani' ke saath dance karwana 😉

Do continue ..

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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi
Wow guys! Epic stuff
I'm loving this Nachi baby and Ragz in your story 😆 As always, perfect entertainment! We need this. Their flashbacks are so lovely guys! Aww my babies, joshiley😆
And Aahaan! Sanam, Miss touch me not hmm😲 That was somebody's copyright 😆
Ragini madam drunk😃 So excited for the tamasha. He he. Waiting waiting waiting!

Superb! And continue writing such full on entertaining stuffs👏

Thank you Raginey😆 for loving this update😳... as we had used *Miss touch me not* in this update, so now it is our copyright😆... jokes aside we are glad that you enjoyed this filmy stuff...😃

Keep up your excitement as abhi toh party shuru hui hai😉😆 as we will be back soon with yet another entertaining update😛