Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March

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Hi everyone😊😊
This is our first ever attempt to write a story.This is completly a fictious story...I have not read all the stories of the forum so if you find it similar to any other story then please do let me know...Hope you will like my story😃Thank you!!!


Prologue

In a big haveli there was all hussle bussle, people were roaming around the house bussy with some or the other thing like some were carrying trays of sweets and refreshments, some were carrying baskets of fruits and flowers and etc etc works as there was roka of the daughter of the house. As the roka was over,then, we here an old man saying" Lo ji ab humari geet aapki ho gayi" as a reply we here" ji bilkul ab to aapki beti humari ghar ki beti ho gayi." seeing at the bride who was eyeing her she added " Aur aap ab isse kisi chees ke liye bhi nahin rokenge.Job ke liye bhi nahin." we see an old lady was saying this to an old man. Geet was winking😉 at dadima as she spoke about job.
Then a possesive young man who was quitely listening to the elders, after the most happiest moment of his life, suddenly speaks up:"dadima ye aap kya keh rahien hain my shona will do job? why, what is the need?haina papaji?"he probed his papaji winking😉 at dadima, then:"ji maaji what is the need? what less do we have that our princess should do a job? no she is our princess she will not do any job under anyone thats it."said a possesive father making the young man,geet and dadima sigh with disappointment.Being irritated Dadima said:"She will get independence from such possesive family" which was supported by Rano geet's mother.
You are right maaji these men will never let their princess to do a job I will support you in this" then turning to the mens who were pouting and making faces like kids said"aap log sab kaan khol kar sun lijiye your princess wants to do job and her in laws are also supporting her so don't even try to stop her got it!!!" she stated her final verdict.
Geet's papa mohinder and brother cringed at her outburst but agreed to her.But darji was still making face so dadima added"don't worry she will be working in KC not in any other company"to which darji finally had to agree as he was left with no choice as geet was also pouting.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start do continue soon will be waiting to read more
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Congratulations On Your First Story
An Awesome And Interesting Start
Waiting For The Next Part 😆
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congrats on the first story! Superb prologue! well written! Looking 4ward 2 the updates! Pls post character sketch! update soon n do pm! Thanks
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Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#990099">Congratulations On Your First Story</font>

<font color="#990099">An Awesome And Interesting Start </font>

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<font color="#990099"><strong>Waiting For The Next Part </font>😆


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Congrats on your first story. Looks promising.
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Interesting prologue...loving it already..waiting 4 nxt
update soon
add me to ur PM list..plz..
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aha, so Geet is everyone's princess!

Looks like Maan wants to tease his 'shona'. Looking forward to more!
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Congo on the new story seems geets family possessive for her but dadi and her mom supporting geet seems maan enjoying her plght she will be working in kc ahaa kyon nahi majnu ko romance ka mauka Jo milega
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congrats on ur first story
cute start
continue soon!

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