Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March

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Sneha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet
Woaaa superb yaar.. Maan is lattu over geet abd aag dono taraf barabar hai.. Not bad.. Cont Soon hun

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Sneha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: shawon_maaneet
wowww.. awesome concept.. reading for 1st time.. sorry for late comment.. as bcz of my exams i'm unavailable right now.. i'll read it after my exams and then comment.. pakka wala promise...

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Sneha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: vrinda22
all 3 parts were awesome
maan is lost in geet
rams princess
arjuns sis shona
n dadis chosen girl all are same
maan loved the way geet looked after ram n fed him
he was j too
he was frustrated that geet isnt talking to him..
sasha thought maan will fire geet
instead he loved the change..
finally geet spoke n maan found her as shona
nice parts

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Sneha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: aishwaryasmiley
very interesting dear, update soon waiting for next part .. 😳

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Sneha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: kabslocks
Lovely update. Maan liked the setting of his cabin. He asked Adi who did it. He replied Geet. He is frustrated that Geet is not talking to him. He vent out his frustration on basketball court playing with Arjun. Arjun sensed it and is sorry for asking Geet not to talk to him. He went HH and asked Geet to talk to Maan normally. Next day Maan went to office without breakfast and Ram also went behind him. In office when he was discussing something with his father, Geet entered the cabin and asked both to stop work and eat food with authority. Maan recognised her voice and called her Shona.

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Sneha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: hira2010
awsome update

love maan sweet side

geet knew he loved her
now she felt shy
huhhh sooo cute 😊

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Sneha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#387

Part 15

It was getting dark and suddenly the lights turned off and it was all dark within seconds and geet was rooted at her spot, she was afraid of dark and started crying as she was alone. Then all of a sudden maan appered from no where and geet hug him tight, maan was sushing her and asked" what happened geet why are you crying? don't worry i'm here, i'm not going anywhere" he asked and consoled her till the lights were back then he looked at her, her face was all red due to crying.

Geet tried move away from him to create some distance between them as they were very close but maan didn't let go of her just moved a littel to create some distance between them but still didn't let go of her and asked what happened all concerned for her.

geet:" wo i'm afraid of dark and I was all alone" she said, "You were also not here where were you?" she asked accusingly.

Maan:"wo I had gone to the guard to ask him to not to turn off the office lights" he said

Geet:"oh I thought you left me alone". she said small voice

Maan:"oh come here" he hugged her "I will never leave you alone and please stop crying" he said consoling her and brought something out from his pocket and gave it to geet "This is for you, you liked it na?" he asked... (it was a small teddy not the wrist band that he had😉😉). Geet took the teddy and nodded her head in yes and both left to parking.

On reaching the parking maan waited for geet to move out then he would follow her as it was dark, but geet was taking a lot of time when he went near her he saw that she was strugling to start her scooty, maan roled his eyes shaking his head he moved her scooty from their then he noticed that it was struck in the passage from where waste/rain water goes, someone had moved her scooty from its place and when it got struck their they left it, then maan tried to start the scooty but it was not starting then he kicked but still it won't start then he noticed that there was no petrol in scooty.

Maan:"Geet there is no petrol in this" he said.

Geet:"but today morning only I had filled the tank then how" she said

maan:"oh then how come it is empty now" he said then suddenly his phone started ringing, it was arjun calling, maan moved little aside and pickedup the call.

Arjun:"hmmm you both are together na or you left my shona alone haan" asked arjun teasingly.

maan:"so this was your karnama? may I know why did you do this nonsence?" asked maan.

arjun:"wo kya hai na I have a stupid friend who can't even speak to a girl he like so I had to plan to make him spend some time with her, now you can spend time with her, her brother gives you permission, but get her home before dinner". he warned at the end.

maan:"ok and thank you, I owe you bro"he said and cut the call then he turned to geet and said "come geet I will drop you home I am going home only".

Geet:"ji but then my scooty?" she asked

maan:"let it be here, gaurds will look after it tommorow evening you can go in that" said maan and geet agreed but then was hesitating to sit behind him in his bike, today maan came in bike.

maan:"what happened why are you not sitting?"he asked.

geet:"wo its bike na".

maan:"oh sorry madam from next time I will come in car only"said maan sarcastically and eyed geet to sit and she sat.

Geet always sits only behind arjun in bike this was the first time she was sitting behind someone else and that someone else being maan was making her nervous.

As soon as Arjun kept his phone down he turned around and smilled devilishly😈😈 and said the plan is successfull and is on his way laughing loudly...

Maan saw her nervousness and to make her feel comfortable he started speaking.

maan:"so shona, being so rich why do you want to work in other company why not with your dad and brother?"he asked.

geet:"If you don't mind can I ask you some thing?"she asked instead,maan thought here Iam asking her something and instead of answering me she is asking me questions neverthless atleast she is speaking na and he nodded his head and she asked "why did you started a new business instead of joining your dad?" she asked and before maan could answer she herself continued" To make your own identity na, I also wanted to be independent and live my life independently so and I joined your company as I am an architect and yours is a top construction company".

Maan was very impressed with her and he thought that he was falling in love with her(he didn't realise that he is already in love with her na😉). Maan and geet were now standing in front of HH, maan was expecting geet to call him inside and he thought that he will, like a gentlemen will reply her 'no geet its quite late I will come some other day...'😈

As maan was expecting a call from her that was noticed by geet and she said.

geet:"wo aap ko ander nahin aane denge..." she said pointing to the security guards"wo... late hogaya na...", she said it so cutely that maan wanted to kiss her then and there but controlled himself and nodded his head and was expecting geet to say something else but his wish was drowned when geet said "good night" and went inside her home and he also went to his house.

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deepa111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#388

Lovly update...
Chalo dono ki baat to shuru hui..
Aww...maan gift her teddy 😳
Koi na teddy b dia h to wrist band baad me de dega aakhir dena to geet ko hi h na 😆
Arjun also give chance to maaneet to hv some time to spend alone 😉
Maan totally fida on geet..
Waiting for nxt part..
Update asap..

Edited by deepa_chauhan - 10 years ago