Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March - Page 55

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow amazing update
maan purposed geet ...finally...
Lovd it totally
update nxt asap..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello every one Thankyou for every comment and likes you have given the story😃😃...aahhh the rest part is here hope you all will like it😊...I'm not much into all these so if it is not up to the expectations😳... please bare with me..😊❤️

Part 23

Geet was first stunned to see him on his knees instead of answering her.She felt overwhelmed with his words for her, tears appeared in her eyes.Words were not coming out to say anything, so, she just nodded blushing, smiling and crying at the same time.She made him to stand on his feets.

Maan took out the bracelet he bought he was about to wear it in her hands geet gave a confused look to him he just smiled at her confused state.He removed a shining platinum love bands, for a couple in love, from his pockets gave one to her and said ,"This to claim you as mine"to which she smiled whole heartedly.

They both exchanged the rings promising to retain their love forever.Maan then took her in a passionate hug.He switched on the music wiping her tears asked her to dance with him.She happily agreed, they danced slowly on the music, her arms around his neck, and he was holding her by her waist swaying slowly to the tune led to their first ever kiss(Finally naughty dadi's fantasy came true😉).

After some time they were sitting on a seate geet between his legs leaning on his chest.He wrapped his arms around her waist hugging her from behind keeping his chin on her shoulder they were staring at their fingers with ring together, they were talking everything and anything(I really wonder what is there to talk so much).After having the time of their life maan dropped geet to her home Where arjun didn't come yet.

Maan:"Ab to ander ander bulalo(call me in now atleast)"

Geet:"wo aapko ander nahi aane denge"

Maan:"Even now?"

Geet:"not only now,he will not allow you or anyone in after 10"she said smiling.

Maan:"O.K to if I came a minute before 10 and if I stayed in for whole night he'll not say anything?"maan said shamelessly, Geet blushed and ran inside.Maan gave sheepish smile to the security guy.The security guy who heard him glared at him controlling his smile.Maan then goes towards KM.

When maan left another car enters premises of HH.Arjun just entered his home to see his Shona standing in front of him folding her hands on her chest and staring him.He was whisteling and swirling the key in his finger which came to abrupt halt looking at her.Geet raises her one eyebrow like asking what is it to make you so happy, arjun was first flushed then composing himself he too raises one of his eyebrow up.Geet blushed profusely and ran to her room she heard arjun laughing loudly behind her back.

Next day morning as usual Vicky and Avi were in HH having there sunday special breakfast.Arjun and Vicky planned to go to the club to play squash after maan denied arjun.When they left Geet's phone rang, as soon as Geet picks it up before she could utter a word the person from other line screamed" he proposed!!".

Geet:"Woow! Finally I can call you AROHI bhabhi now"

Arohi:"Yesss!!Finally my years waiting for the moment was worth it.By the way tumhari story kahan tak pohonchi(where did you story land up)?"

Geet said shyly:"He also proposed me yesterday"

Arohi:"Kya!!wait a sec where did he propose you ?, no let me guess at farmhouse?"

Geet:"yes" doubtedly.

Arohi:"I knew it this arjun na!!!I'm sure you might have threaten him to propose me and Maan ka plan mujhpe chipkaya hoga."

Geet:"How can you say that it was his plan ?"

Arohi:"Ofcourse I know because maan is planing it from his teens to make the day special.Now let Arjun come infront of me dekh lungi usko doesn't he have his own brain?apni girlfriend ko propose karnekeliye he needs others help..."she was cntinously blabbering and ended the call.

Geet was lost in her own world, maan was planning this from a long time she felt very special.Suddenly her trance broke feeling a needle like thing piercing her skin looking down she found Avi trying to grab her attention holding her.Shecought his hand and noticed his nails that have grown long.

She took Avi on her lap sitting in the drawing room she diverted his mind asking him about his school,friends teachers and cut his nails.After some time Avi felt some sensation in his fingers, then he saw that his nails were cut.He started crying and ran away without listening to geet's calls.

Here in KM Maan was continously planning and rejecting all his reasons to go to HH, when suddenly Avi barges in his room crying and hugs him complaining something incoherent.Maan made him stop crying wiping his tears asked him softly "what happened?my bachcha why is my baby crying so much?"

Avi:"Dekhona mele saale nails cut kaldiye unhone. Pata nahi tyun cut kaldiya mujhe pata bhi nahi.😭Aap aake danto na mamu.(see na she cut all my nails come don't know why she cut it, I din't even knew cone and scold her na mamu).

Avi holds his hand and pulls him out of his room.All present in the hall were amused to see the scene.Maan happily went with him he finally got a excuse to finally meet his mishty.As our chotu was walking slowly with his chotu-chtu legs, impatient maan lifts him in his arms and rushed t see his mishty.

In HH Geet was in kitchen making hot chocolate to manao avi, as she knows he will come back to her angrily after complaining at home.Geet heard sound of opening door and some footsteps.She knew it is Avi with some elder to whom he might have complained, she thought it is dadima but to her pleasant surprise maan was standing in front of her giving her a killer smirk.Both were staring at each other being lost in others eyes,their trance was brken by avi who turned maan's face toward him sitting in his arms.

Avi:"Unko zol che mat dantna dheele che dantna I love hel na cho(don't scold her loudly speak to her slowly I love her na so)" listening to his cute confession both smiled.

Maan a bit sternly but playfully says:"Why did you do that to my avi?"sitting on the couch with avi on his lap he signed geet to complete her task and asked avi"how did she do that to you what were you doing then?"

Avi started narrating every thing with complete detail, he was so lost in his explaination that he didn't notice maan holding his legs still so that geet could cut his toe nails as well.After completing her task she handed him a cup of choco to manao him.While drinking avi noticed his toe nails were cut and started crying complayining to maan pointing at her.

Maan to pacify avi scolded geet a bit loudly, to which avi stood up in front of him and scolded maan back "mamu aapne unko zol che kyun danta she will cly now na abhi aap unko sholly bolo😡"(why did you scold her loudly she will cry now say sorry to her).

To which Maan said:"Achcha baba" and pulled geet on his lap who was silently listening to both, and said"sholly"Geet was struggling to come out of his grip pointing towards avi through eyes fo which maan wishpered"He only asked me to do this you just sit here and enjoy and let me also have fun".

Avi:"Aiche nahi kissi kalo mami ko idhal(not like this kiss mami here)"pointing towards his cheeks.

Maan pulled her more to himself and kissed her both cheeks.Suddenly it hit him, he asked avi looking at blushing geet in his arms,

Maan:"Avi... baby... what did you just call her?"

"MAMI"Avi replied happily without looking at wide eyed geet.

Maan looked at geet confused and said:"MAMI?"

Geet:"Avi baby go and complete your drawings" and tries to get up from maan's lap but he held her more tightly.Geet stopps struggling looking in his eyes she says,"I want to tell you some thing".

After getting positive nod from Maan she narrates complete story to maan from when she got to know about the plan in Roka till the end.Maan was completely taken aback with this revealation.He doesn't take it offendly but is shocked to know dadima's part in the plan,And to know geet is only Ram's princess.

Maan:"Tum Dad ki princess ho"😲Asked Maan shocked and surprised both.

Edited by neasya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
😎 😎 cool update 😎 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey awesome part yaar loved maaneet and avi moments and geet revelation literally surprised maan and tq for the pm eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sweet update. Loved Maaneet moments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow itna kuh ho gaya and hes still stuck on ur dadas princess part.. Hehehhe lmbo:: superb yaar.. Tooo cute.. Cont soon hun..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishna...

😎 😎 cool update 😎 😎


Thank you😊
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Originally posted by: poojitha96

hey awesome part yaar loved maaneet and avi moments and geet revelation literally surprised maan and tq for the pm eagerly waiting for the next part


Thank you for commenting😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

Sweet update. Loved Maaneet moments.


Thank you for commenting😊
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Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

Wow itna kuh ho gaya and hes still stuck on ur dadas princess part.. Hehehhe lmbo:: superb yaar.. Tooo cute.. Cont soon hun..


Thank you for commenting😊

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