Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March - Page 16

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Part 6

Vicky:"what are you doing here? and why did you say no?".asked vicky

Ram:"Because that halwa was for me and i am sure you must have finished half of it by now. when you ran from KM I had gussed this is the reason as geets kitchen window being close to your room balcony you must have smelt my halwa" said Ram with an angry pout.

Vicky:"How can you say it was for you? and its not your halwa it is gajar ka halwa don't even know that much and calls himself my dad" said vicky

Ram:"I am your dad you fool and that halwa was for me only as I had specifically asked geet to prepare it for me and you had it."

vicky:" For the last time it was not only for you..."before he completes Ram intrupted

Ram:"it was...".

vicky:"was not".

Ram:"it was".

vicky:"was not at all".

They were intrupted by geet" stop it you two it was not for both of you it was for bhog okay".she said making both of them pout then added" why both of you are fighting like kids? Here papa only one bowl for you as you are not allowed to eat sweets and this for you half bowl as you already had so much and if i hear again halwa even for once from your mouth then i will never make it again understood" she said making both nod their head and they silently had their breakfast made by geet, glaring at eachother.

After breakfast vicky asked ram how did he knew geet then ram said that geet is his princess his bestfriend's daughter that he always talks about.

vicky:" the same princess whom you, dadima and maa keeps on talking about all our life" and ram nodded in yes.Then vicky added "then i want to taste your world famous hot chocolate... you will make it for me na?" asked vicky oh so innocently knowing the history it created in KM the last time ram brought hot chcolate KM.

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Once Ram was to go shimla for some project of his so he had been to mumbai, it was known in the house that there is some lucky charm of his, maa's and dadima's n mumbai in his friend's house but what is that none of the youngster knows. Ram returned on the day he was leaving for shimla and had brought a flask of hot chocholate and Maan was leaving for office when he asked ram what he is carrying.

Maan:"what is that dad that you are carrying and not leaving it anywhere?"

Ram:" It is hot chocholate prepared by my princess."

Maan rolled his eyes on that, his dad's princess may be a small girl who made hot chocholate for his dad all the time he visits mumbai was maan's thought on geet.

Ram:"waise as it is your favorite too you can have a sip of it here "he took a small cup and poured some in it and offered, then turned to Priya and said "I will keep this flask on the table and get ready and come to leave for shimla don't keep it in my bag I will carry it all the way".saying this and all kind of praises to his princess he made is way to his room.

Maan saw the cup and thought "itne se mera kya hoga" and picked the flask and directly sipped it. And it tasted heaven for him so he finished whole flask without his own knowledge. And kept the flask back on the table and looked at the flask as it was its fault and not his. When Ram came down all ready to go, maan was sitting and was acting of reading paper where as his eyes were on the flask.

Ram saw this and said"You don't eye my flask it is for me".He saw the cup he filled for maan n thought he didn't drink it and showing attitiude, he said"And how can you waste this" picked up the cup and gluped down the hot chocholate and asked maan"don't you have to go to your office?".

Maan said "I will go after a while" eyeing the flask and trying to say what he did but was unable to and ram left to airport.

later in the evening the landline of KM was ringing and maan picked it up as they knew it was ram as there was no network in that area so ram called on landline.

maan:"h-hello d-dad? I-I can explain e-everything"he said dreading the outburst and just as he anticipated came the reply.

Ram:"How dare you it was for me how can you drink it? My princess had made it for me you you---"but was cut through by maan

maan:"cut it dad you always drink it. And if for once I drank it, it won't make much difference" said maan

Ram:" how can you say that? ofcourse it make difference she made it for me to drink in shimla as it is so cold here". said ram

maan:"come on dad ask her to make it once again for you when you return back".said maan irretated

ram:"ofcourse I will and I will ask her to make it double for me and will drink it hunn!!"said ram stubbernly.

maan:"fine---". but he was cut through by another voice.

"Stop it you too, both are fighting like kids if you don't know to talk civilly then don't talk at all understood?"

"yes dadima","yes maa"said both then started talking civilly about bussiness and stuff and ended the talk keeping the reciever.

Later ram did go to mumbai and asked her to make it double the amount of it. Though his princess didn't know to prepare so much amount she prepared twice and filled it in two flask and gave it to ram. Ram took those flasks with him to Delhi and drank it infront of maan showing him, where as maan could only pout.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for your lovely comments and likes😊
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Hope you all will like part 6 too
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Part 7

Ram replied to it" no way she is making it for you, she will make it only for me, hai na bacha?" again starting their childlike bikering session, and to stop it geet said "I will make it for all but not now and not recently also, im am here only na, then will make it some other day or so okay?" she asked again making them node their head silently.

Geet then noticed time, it was getting late and she had to rush so ram ordered vicky to drop her near the office. Vicky was confused with this order as he never goes to any office except KC, KC is his dream and except KC he vowed that he will never go to any other offices. Neverthless he agreed to drop her, while dropping her he noticed it was kc's way then he came to know that geet works in kc itself.

Geet started with her work once she reached her office.She along with being an intern was also an associate to ram, which was adi before but due to workpressure he could not continue and geet being excellent in her interview was given this chance.(No partiality yaar) It was already decided by the HR team that one of the best intern would be given this chance as ram being an layman, not knowing any thing about construction business ,he was to be explained in detail what the project is about that they are doing before signing.

As soon as geet reached home in the evening vicky and avi rushed in her direction.Geet picked up avi as soon as he neared her and vicky was left amused seeing avi going in geets arms. Vicky didnot give much thought when avi called geet mami as he was also hoping for that to happen one day, unknown to that elders have already started this process.

Vicky and avi had their evening snack and also dinner at her place only and geet asked vicky about his college.And vicky was left toungtied as he never actually attends college regularly and diverted her attention towards avi who was telling her about his school and friends he made today and what all he did since morning with his buddy.But geet was sharp enough to know that he doesn't go to college regularly.

geet:"You know avi you should never miss your school" she said directing at vicky but not seeing him just giving knowledge so that he doesn't feel embaressed."pata hai your all the family members are having hopes on you that you will study nicely and then after your graduation you will support your family. It is not that you are small and you should start working leaving your studies, you have elders to look after the other responsibilities, and you can enjoy your life.You should take up your own responsibility by balancing your studies and fun and lesson the responsibility off your brother by taking it upon yourself. Your brother will never feel you as a burden ever keep that in your mind. But if you lessen his responsibility by taking care of yourself and be responsible of your own actions like going regularly to school and studying well he will be more glad, be your naughtyself, always happy,fun loving infornt of them. Because they will be very tired working in office since morning if they see you all happy and playing and being naughtyself their all tierdness will vanish in a moment."

Avi was listening all this with very concentration as if he is understanding everything(comon guys he is only 4 yr old) both vicky and geet burst out laughing seeing him. seeing them laughing avi also started laughing and then began blabering about anything and nothing. Vicky was very surprised seeing avi talking so much as he was a very quite and introvert kid but vicky did not forget what geet had said and, he vowed to attend college regularly.

Vicky, geet and avi had their dinner with fun and laughing as if no intense talk happened between them. Avi again slept in geets arms and was not leaving her in sleep also vicky had to forcefully take him back to KM.

Back in KM Annie panicked on not finding avi any where at home then as vicky was also not in the house so she thought avi went out with vicky and was waiting for him at dinner then dadima told her about geet, not about she being maan's fiancee, but about she being ram's friend's daughter and vicky and avi being with her.They also asked her to not to worry much about avi, if she doesn't trust geet then vicky is with him.

Next morning vicky got up early in the morning again with the help of his nose lol. Avi was sleeping with him which he does when maan will not be home else avi always sleeps with maan only.Avi also got up along with vicky and started crying to go to geet, vicky not having any choice as he also wants to go to geet took bath soon and landed in green house when she was praying. Geet gave sweet to both but vicky complained.

vicky:"you are a cheater you are cheating.When i did not bath you didnot let me have halwa where as for him you are giving sweet?"

geet:"He didnot have bath yet?"asked geet to which vicky nodded no,then geet took avi to bathroom to give him bath while vicky ran to bring avi's clothes as instructed by geet. Geet got avi ready for school and made breakfast for all and was feeding avi when Annie entered the house.

Vicky introduced annie and geet, and annie instantly liked geet. Annie and geet then started chatting like long lost friends while having breakfast and geet was feeding avi also along side. Annie then left bidding bye to all, then geet prepared lunch box to both avi and vicky and gave it to them and got ready and left to office.

This routine was continuning daily vicky and avi coming in the morning, geet getting avi ready, chat with annie and lunch box to both avi and vicky then office, then in evening asking them what they did in college and school the whole day and avi sleeping in geets arms and vicky forcefully taking him back to KM...it was like both were living in HH than in KM.


Hope you all will like it too😊

Precap:- Next part is the most awaited part where maan returns and also maaneet meeting...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Double Updates Were Simply Delicious
I so loved the flashback where Maan drank all the hot chocolate
Vicky and his dad arguing about the halwa and finally Geet tells them to stop
now Avi and Vicky start their day at Geet's house having breakfast end their day there too
with supper and Avi sleeping in Geet's arms
Annie too has come to Geet and she instantly liked Geet now she too visits Geet every
morning
awaiting for Maaneet's first meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwnnn love ur ff shona:: reminds me of the shona song.. Suoerb yaar.. Family is hilarious and crazy.. Geet is too cute.. Hope ur not gonna put any depressing scenes of maaneet??? :( cont soon hun.. Eagerly waiting for
Our heros entry yaar ;)
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Awesome updates yar really loved it continue soon waiting for maaneet meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n double marvelous updates! enjoying this story so far! Well written! Vicky asks who Geet is! she calls Ram papa! Ram says she is his princess! Vicky asks 4 hot choc! he recalls wen Ram bought a flask of it home n hw Maan drank it n made Ram angry! Geet had 2 make double amount! Past well incorporated! Geet n Avi share a wonderful bond! Love hw Geet indirectly told Vicky 2 attend college! Avi n Vicky spend more time at HH! Geet takes care of Avi! he is attached 2 her! Annie gets 2 know abt Geet n meets her! they become friends! eagerly awaiting next part!!! update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice parts
vicky n rams cute cribbings n fight over halwa
lolz..they r such a kids
vicky avi n anie all gelled up with geet
n geet too started to go to office
she indirectly adviced vicky to be regular to college too

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