Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi... Nice prologue... Sweet update... Waiting for next part ... Update soon..
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Nice start
Will love to read more
Update soon
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Character sketch

Khurana family

Savitri devi singh khurana:- Maan's dadima, she is very strict and hitler type in front of the whole world also to the men of the family when they don't listen to her otherwise she is a very naughty and our own sweet dadima.

Ram singh khurana:- Maan's father, he is very foodie and sweet in nature but strict when it comes to descipline. He is owner to a chain of hotels KH. And board of member in KC.

Priya singh khurana:-maan's mother, she is a very sweet mother but as much her husband loves to eat she cannot cook nice but is always ready to cook.

Maan singh khurana:-He is MD of KC, he started KC, his own construction firm at a very yung age to prove his worth , he is very strict and want perfection in his work. He is every girls dream man but he is waiting for his dream girl 'MISHTY'.

Anvesha singh khurana:- Maan's twin sister, she was a very bubbly girl , has a 4 year old son. Loves her maan bhai a lot.

Vikram singh khurana:- Maan's younger brother, he is very foodie just like his father. His maan bhai is his idol.

Avinash anvesha khurana :- Maan's nephew, his jaan,He is very naughty 4 year old boy but is very introvert.

Handa family

Dushyant Handa:-Geet's darji, he is very strict but geet is his princess.

Mohinder Handa:- Geet's papaji, he loves geet a lot, he is a very jolly papaji.

Rano Handa:-Geet's mummyji, she is house wife and is very sweet.

Geet Handa:- She is a very sweet, intelegent and bubbly girl and worlds best cook according to her papaji, bhai and sweet uncle. She did her B. Arch and her dream is to work in KC.

Arjun Handa:- Geet's brother, he is an angry young man, very protective towards geet, and looks after his dad's business also.

Other charaters as the story progresses. 😊

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Thank you everyone for your likes and comments😊😃
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awesome cs! update soon! n do pm
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PART 1

Later at night in the room Priya maan's mother says to dadima" Ma aap ye galat kar rahien hain ek bar apne pote se to puch liya hota".

dadima:" iss ki koi jarurat nahin hain hum jante hain ki maan ko kaise razi karna hain iss ke liye" dadima replied with attitude.

Priya:"haan haan hum itne saal se wahi to kar rahein hain."she replied sarcastically.

Ram:"she is right maa we all tried to do this since when. Apni princess ko bahu bana kar ghar lane ka humara sapna to jaise adhura hi reh jata agar aap aur arjun ye plan na karte. Par phir bhi maa aap jante hain, aap maan ko bina bataye ye shadi kaise tay kar sakti hain. you know that he wants love marriage he will not agree to this rishta then what will happen to my princess?".

Priya:"She is perfect! she is beautiful, intellegent,traditional, bubbly every thing a girl for my maan should have" she said being proud of their choice of bride "but the problem is maan don't love her. what love!!! he didn't even see her. I dont want to raise a hope of such a sweet girl only to break her dream if maan don't love her maa" she added pouting.

Ram:"You are thinking of only maan's feelings then what about hers?"

Priya:" thats what i am saying dont give her hope."she said glaring at him.

dadima:"ofo this women i dont know what my son saw in her that he married her"

"maaa!!!" both Ram and Priya exclaimed.

dadima:"then what i am giving hope for her not of my grandson though i want that too to happen but rigth now i am helping her to live her life independently as she wants without any protective shield of her family.And build her career and achieve something, and about maan then leave it to me and arjun. you know in such possesive family i had a doubt that she would complete her dream of being an architect, but she did. she got her architect degree in such young age of 23 just like maan just the difference is that maan paid fees himelf by earning and her's is scholership. I don't want her to waste her talent by sitting at home and cooking for some jamindar being his wife. maan also want such briliant girl as his life partner and he will not let her waste her talent"

Priya:" ok maa i agree maan want such a life partner for himself but he wants love marriage but you arranged it na..."she whinned.

Ram:"and who is going to tell him that it is arranged?"he said winking at dadima

Priya:"what???" she asked confused.
dadima:"yes...see what we will do is we will take her with us and give her an entry in KC as a trainee then she will slowly take entry in our maan's heart what say?"

"I don't agree with your plan" they heard an angry voice from behind them. There was standing the bride whose roka has just finished.

Geet was getting fresh and changing into comfortable clothes as the roka dress was way too heavy and uncomfortable for her as she always wears simple dresses, in the same room's bathroom, when she heard their talks and intrupted them.

dadima:"Beta you? okay listen to me first..." and then she explained her whole plan to her son , daughter in law and geet all agreed to the plan but then priya said.

priya:"maa i have no problem with her infact i will be the most happiest and lucky person in the whole world if i get such a daugther in law. But will maan agree? he didnt even see her na maa."

Dadi:"are baba who is asking you to get your son married to her now itself haan? i have made such a nice plan now you dont spoil my mood."she chided her DIL and turned towards geet and asked "what is your saying in this beta."

Geet:"Dadima i will do what ever you ask me to do..."but was intrupted by Priya "but you just said you don't agree na?"

Geet:"haan i meant by the reference in KC."

Dadi:"what do you mean by that bacha?"

Geet:"dadima i mean that...(sighed)...okay see you all are on my side na and supporting me in this na?"

Dadi:"ofcource bacha you are my favorite bacha" she said kissing her forhead.

Priya:"my bacha ofcourse we love you. you are my pari bacha."

Ram:"and my princess too" he said by taking her in his arms and wispered in her ear"and my favorite cook also" kissing her forhead.

Geet:"thankyou and you trust me and my intellengence also na"
"ofcourse!!" all said in unision.

Geet:"then you will not refer me in KC and also no partiality"she said last part eying Ram.Then she said" I will attend all the entry level exams clear all and then only will work in KC. you all know na working in KC is my dream then i will achieve it for sure you all will see."

Ram:"ok princess i will call adi and will arrange for the interview process for all eligible students now happy?" he asked and she noded and kissed his cheeks.

Dadi:" ok then we all are leaving for delhi tommorow morning all of you do your packing. Now all leave mine and my bacha's room we want to sleep we are tired" she said pulling geet in her arms from Ram and glared at him. He also pulled geet back kissing her goodnight on her forhead and left making Priya and geet giggle. Priya also kissed her goodnight and left.

Geet went to her wardrobe took out medicines and handed them to dadima and asked her to have them. Dadima started making faces but one glare from geet she took all her medicines. Then both dadima and her started packing her remaining stuffs and slept as they were having an early flight tommorow.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for your new story.. Intresting prolouge
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Intresting part and cute story.. Waiting for next..
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nice start...like the first part ...
character is superb ...I like dadi ;)
I think its going to be a light hearted ss ?
everyone loves geet ...dadi is planning for maaneet's marriage ..interesting ...
plz continue soon...
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Nice start intersting concept Mann family want geet but he want love marriage and geet want to in career and work in KC let see how there meet

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