Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March

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Sneha

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#41

Originally posted by: CookieMonster.
Nice update
so dadi n all r planning to make maan fall for geet..maan wants love marrige..erm..i think he is already in love wid his mishty :)

Thank you😊 Already in love??😉

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Sneha

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#42

Originally posted by: nakh5683
lovely update awesome cs so maan wants love marriage but his dadi already fixed his marriage with someone without telling him abt all r warning but dadi is adamant but dai has a plan to plant geet in kc so man can fall for her but geet dosent want ot she agrees somehow but makes them promise that they will not influence her entry in kc she will do on her own ways and all agreed had to it was their princess demand love the way all pamper geet

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Sneha

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#43

Originally posted by: priya_199
nice update
geet is so cute and the families also
interesting concept prologue cs and chap also
waiting for further updates
geet is being princess of all
i think there will be office romance too with maaneet
waiting for maan to be introduced
plz update soon
and try to pm me

Thank you😊 but for pm i need some time I dont know how to do.

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Sneha

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#44

Originally posted by: poojitha96
Lovely update dadi and her plans for maaneet always work continue soon

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Sneha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: hira2010
nice story

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Sneha

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Part 2

Next day morning all got ready to leave and all were bidding bye to them and crying as it is like a ritual in every village when ever anyone is leaving they cry so the same thing was happening with the Khurana family as well...all were bidding bye and especially to the girl who was the life of the village is now going, all were giving many eatables to her as if she cannot cook 😉 and were going for a long journey. common the flight takes nearly 1 or 2 hour thats it...ya but car journey from here to amritser takes nearly 1&1/2 hour(i don't know real distance n time but for this ff i've taken it randomly)...thought Ram seeing the drama of crying in front of them. Then he sternly ordered everyone to stop crying and get into the car as its getting late.

They enjoyed a lot during the car journey, the played antakshari. The driver and the body gaurds were under a very pleasent shock as they had never seen their strict and hitler kind if dadima playing all kind of games and laughing whole heartedly, They prayed that this family always remain this happy and especially their dadima so that they don't have to get class for their every small mistakes😉.

They went to amritsar's golden temple to take gods blessings for their new to-be-bride and their maan to accept his happiness wholeheartedly.When they reached inside their jet they noticed that their to-be-bride is damn scared of flights and was holding Rams hand too tightly. Finally they reached delhi and took two taxies in one Priya and in other Dadima and Ram along with Geet left to their respective destination.

As Geet being the to-be-bride of Khurana family, she cannot enter KM so she was to stay in Handa Haveli which is right next door to KM but as she was going to stay alone Ram and Dadima went with her to help her set her home along with few of KM workers and Nakul their loyal and an elderly house help who will be sent by Priya to help them in cleaning as HH was closed for several years.

Priya did not join them as she wanted to supervise lunch for every one and if her children come home they should not doubt them as for Ram and Dadima their absence reasons can be valid but not for priya. As Ram can go directly to office coz maan is in london now for a project and dadima can be in one of her kitty party or orphanage.

All the servants and especially nakul kaka gelled well with geet and all did the work together with geet also working and Ram and dadima just sitting and ordering around.All the servants were quite amused to see that a rich and such a beautuful high class girl is dressed simple and is also helping them in their work.

Once all the work was done it was afternoon and all were hungry as well just then priya entered with other workers carrying lot of food items. Though all were tired Geet being geet started serving the food to all.The workers were very elated to recieve such gesture though they were not treated as a mere worker in Khurana Mansion they were the part of the family as well but food being served to them by geet(along with nakul and few others as she cannot serve alone na)left them with immense respect towards geet.

After lunch all were sitting in the living room all the servents on the floor and Family members on the sofas. They were just relaxing for some time before starting the left over work like setting the kitchen and whole house as only cleaning of the haveli was done till then.All the workers left to their work assigned only few trusted head servents were their now and were curious to know who was geet? and why Khurana family elders were helping her so much? all were signing to eachother to ask as in fornt of dadima they cannot speak freely due to respect and fear but with their Ram sir and Priya mam they can word their questions and requests without much fear but if their maan sir is anywhere near or even in the mansion they definetly cannot open their mouth itself.

Their signing language was noticed by Priya and Ram then when asked them what was it? then nakul asked their doubt. Then Ram introduced geet to all and said that she is would be wife of their maan sir hearing this all very became happy as she won heart of all within few hours but they were asked to not reveal her identity to anyone and also their littel plan was revaled to them as they were also needed in their plan, They all vowed to not reveal about this to anyone and then congratulated her and all and then all left for their work.

Edited by neasya - 9 years ago

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sanum23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Awesome concept and pt

daadi and all planning to fit geet in maan life as his lover

bcuz they only want geet as bahu and maan want love marriage

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

superb update

so geet reach dehli

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Sneha

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Part 3

Dadima called nakul and gave him list of all the items to be set in the kitchen and asked him to bring them but geet stopped him and went through the list then she asked dadima that she will give money for all these stuffs to which dadima pouted but geet neglected her drama and prepared a list of stuffs that is also needed and gave him money and asked him to go.But nakul was not moving even an inch geet saw that and asked "what happened why are you not going?"

Nakul didn't answered but was looking at dadimas direction geet understood this and went to dadima to speak. But dadima was pouting and sitting like a stubbern kid geet smiled at this and said" dadima I want to buy all these things from my own money" dadima said "that means that we are nothing to you and our money is also not yours?" in a stubbern kiddish way. Then geet replied" Dadima I didn't mean it that way I meant that I want to buy stuffs being independent from my own earned money which will boost my confidence and selfrespect but as I have not earned yet im using my dad's money later I will pay him back as well but not as money ofcourse."she giggled then added"please dadima for my sake" Ram agreed to it even Priya and all the three were trying to convince dadima.

Then geet said "itna gussa?? toh you will not even look at me?" dadima turned her face to other side "theek hai to main jo ye cupcakes and cookies bananewali thi woh to waste hojayenge you will not be in talking terms with me then how can i say you that thay are ready?" and dadima was cought she said" theek hai theek hai apni baat manwane ka tarika(way) to koi tumse seeke hunn!!!" Nakul was smiling at this and then left to get the items.This was the first time after years nakul saw dadimas childish behaviour all thanks to geet then prayed that she brings happiness in his maan baba's life too.Ram and Priya were smiling at her nautanki just like Dadi does to get her wish fulfilled.

Meanwhile Ram got call from adi that the ad was given and the interview process will start from tommrow and only tommrow one day will be the walkin as many members will apply to their company it being one of the top construction company. And also asked for his presence in office for some work. Ram informed to all about the interview and all the steps till face to face then left to office along with Priya who left to KM as it was time for all the tofans to come home. Dadima stayed with geet to help her complete all the work actually she stayed here to give geet company coz geet was feeling very nervous.

The reason behind geets nervousness was entirely different. she was for the first time was going to meet maan that to face-to-face as she has not even seen his pictures but had heared a lot about him. Dadima knew why she was so nervous and so to divert her attention she started telling her about each and every member of family because only dadima,Priya and Ram use to visit mumbai to meet them regularly and thus are very close to geet except them none use to visit them due to their prior planning either with friends or college and school.

dadima:"As you know...

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Maan and annie are twins but were totally different from eachother Maan being very temperamental and annie being the silent one. In school annie was kept under the shelter of maan as he loves his sister a lot, none use to tease annie even they use to avoid speaking to her fearing maan's anger. school life was somewhat better but when the same continued in junior college also and annie got fedup of it and decided to study in different college and accused maan of being overpossesive. Maan is a very tough guy but is very emotional from heart so he was very hurt by annie's words hence he decided to do his arch degree in london and went their.

Annie was a very naive girl in her college thus, a guy traped her in his love for money and annie ran away with him when members of the family didnt approve of him. Then after six month she returned being five months pregnant, being abondand by that guy.She wanted to kill herself for going against her family and trusting such a man but, maan stopped her and suported her emotionally and promised her to take the whole responsibility of her baby and he also supported and encouraged her to become independent and focus on her career.Now annie is successfully managing their hotel business, they have chain of hotels. She was first assisting her father and now took over the business.

Maan was never interested in their hotel business so he started his own construction company.He along with studies had started working from 2nd year itself, Hence he had enough experience to start his own. He had worked day and night to come to the position he is in now.

After Annie took over the hotel business Priya had banned Ram to go to hotel as all knew he is such a foodie and can't controll himself infront of food, hence, maan had made Ram an important part of his office, member of board of director i,e. without his approval none of the projects will proceed in his office.

Vicky is maan and annie's younger brother and is studying in college yet and is very naughty. He is a foodie like his father but is very maintained as maan takes him to gym with him at night and trains him, he goes at night coz he cannot get up early in the morning. But he loves maan a lot and maan is his role model.

Avi is the youngest character of their house.He is just 4 but is the most naughtiest one and maan never scoldes him. He is maan's jaan, after annie had run away maan had emotionally shut himself though he showed himself strong in front of everyone he was broken from inside, because there will be a very strong emotional bond created between the twin as they grew together from childhood they were together sharing everything with eachother that if one breaks anothers heart it will be very difficult to mend, and the same thing had happened with maan and he became heartless and ruthless MSK to the world. Avi is the only one with whom maan speaks more than two words. When vicky and avi get together then whole house will be least silent.

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Edited by neasya - 9 years ago