Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March - Page 72

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

waiting 4 next part! want a long update!! 😊

Will do now😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

😊😊

Edited by neasya - 9 years ago
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Hello every one, a heart felt thank you all of you for co operating with the story (jheloing my crap)🤗.It is really overwhelming that I got so many likes and very nice comments on my first story,even if it is not to yur expectations🤔.Hope you all enjoyed the story so far, here is the last part.

Part 27(last part)

Rano:"He was silently playing after annie left to office an emergency came half an hour ago then he suddenly started crying he is not talking with me also so I brought him here Teeka is over na?"

Mohinder:"Haan ho gaya"he went to avi putting his hands forward"kya ho gaya avi ko why are you crying?"he asked avi who inturn raised his voice and started to cry.

Maan came forward picked in his arms avi went easily to him and stopped crying hiccuping,Maan:"Kya hua why are you crying?"he asked softly.Daarji,mohinder and Rano were amused to see this they thought he was a tough nut to crack angry young man as T.V shows him.

Avi:"Wo ghal mein wo nahi hain"and burried his face in maan.All were confused not understanding what he is saying.but got cleared as maan said,

Maan:"toh kya hua we are going to her tomorrow na so be with her only O.K don't leave her haan?"he tried to pacify avi.All understood he was missing geet he used to be with geet all the time and only returned already slept or to be asleep.

Avi:"shachi mein we ale going to hel?" avi asked innocently

Maan:"Haan we will go to her now stop crying she will be gussa na to see you cry?"Avi quickly wiped his tears and said,

Avi:"wen we go to hel na I will not leave hel unko hum ghal leke aayenge she plomised me she will come with me hele.She will come na mamu?"He asked hopefully.

Maan:"Why will she not come she promised you na she will not break it haina?"avi nodded enthusiastically, then noticed around him his eyes struck on the thaal containing kaju barfi.he asked dadima,

Avi:"Badi dadi can I have the shweet?"

Dadima:"He has brought it ask him, he is geet's daarji"she said pointing to daarji amused daarji looked on.

Avi came out of maan's hold he came to daarji lifted his hand to pick him up amused daarji picked him then he asked,

Avi:"Bade nanu kya mein isse khaon?"(great grand pa can I eat them)

Stunned daarji:"haan beta kyun nahi"he picked up a sweet from the open box and fed him.

Maan:"Apko kisne bataya ye bade nanu hain?"

Avi:"mami"All were confused.Maan's hope raised is geet here?but it went in drain,as vicky said,

Vicky:"wo bhai we saw her family album she introduced to avi all of them"

Avi to daarji:"Bade nanu aap mujhe stoies sunaoge na?"

Daarji"Bilkul aap aaoge na mere ghar aapke mami ke paas?"avi nnodded frantically as if, if he say no they will not let geet to come here with him.

Avi "haan unko lene jana hai she will stay with me here"All were enjoying avi's cute talks all the while did't realised time.finally daarji noticed time and took their leave.

Later in evening around 4 the whole clan went to arohi's home to ask her hand for arjun they happily agreed and said they were waiting for this from years but they understood geet had to get married first it is arjun's duty to look after it.

All were shocked to hear it that they were in love from years but arohi so that they shouldn't take arjun in bad way said,that, he was waiting for geet to get married first, and Handa family also bought the lie arohi said they were proud of arjun(if only they new arjun's fear😆).Arohi's family was happy to know arjun was daarji's grandson and felt happy.They were franctic to know Handa family want to do roka now and nothing of that was known to them as arjun was stictly warned not to disclose of their arrival to arohi.

Neverthles they with ladies of 3 families dadima priya,rano,annie and arohi's mom arranged few things needed and did roka of arohi.They returned happily with this news to mumbai that night.A franctic avi took off with Handa family at night itself to be with his mami and as said he was chipkoing to her all the time as glue he even slept with her whole the time.Maan complained avi forgot his mamu.Annie was overwhelmed to see her son so close with geet.Then she remembered her talks with geet before she was leaving.

...flashback...

Annie:"Geet ye nahi ho sakta"said anxious annie.

Geet:"Tum samjho annie he is close to us very much bura mat manna but he is, more than you".she said trying to make her understand.

Annie:"Tum samajhti kyon nahi Maan iske bina nahi reh sakta aur ye tumhare bina"she said frustratedly

Geet:"Aur ye humare bina"she said, annie looked thoughtfull for a while then said,

Annie :"Phir bhi ye nahi ho sakta"she said with finalty.

Geet:"Grow up will you stop giving silly excuses, you know why you are doing it.Just agree to it, this is what you actually want but you are in denial.Give it a chance".she said sternly but at last said softly.Geet then went to kitchen picking up avi to wash his face, who was all the while sitting on the table being fed by geet.

...flashback ends...

Annie came back to reality then participated holeheartedly in all the pre-marritual functions along with geet.Teasing laughing and talking annie after a long time was a bliss to Khurana family.

Maaneet marriage took place away from the hussle bussle of the city or media in a peaceful place.During geet's bidai it strated raining as if clouds sharing their grief with her family.Maan took geet's hands in his when they were in the car and he pulled her in hug comforting her.

In Delhi at KM Maaneet's grihapravesh Priya as she wasn't in the whole marriage made everything ready to welcome her new Daughter-In-Law, or should I say favorite daughter.After having a lengthy conversation with dadima, maan and Ram on skype she was finally a bit relaxed after being scared, then,anxious then, enthusiastic in these 3 days.

She wanted to corner annie as, well, in these 3 days she came accross a well maintained handsome young maan named Rohan, He came atleast 50 times to KM asking whereabouts of annie a few times she saw him in front of HH a well on asking he said he wanted to meet geet.She confirmed about him through her trusted employee of son Adi.Even though handling the marriage work he took out some time to find out about the guy as she said.

Mr.Rohan Singhania, has chain of hotels in south and U.S. He is annie's class mate and knows about her and avi.She spoke to him also and got confirmed that he had proposed annie which geet was witness and annie still did not give her consent to him.She was worried that if she married she has to go to U.S along with avi and Maan cannot stay without avi and avi without his mami and mamu.

At the treshold of KM Priya welcomed the bride With arti. geet puhed a tumbler of rice with her toes and entered her home with her footprints behind welcoming her new life and new dreams along with all responsibilities as a DIL and wife.And she has to portray herself well as Mrs.MSK in front of whole world too.

Maan:"Welcome home Shona My Mishty".Said maan in her ears to which geet blushed.

...~...~The End~...~...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg plzzz tell me ur giving an epi????? Im gonna miss ur ss.. :( this became my fave read... Superb ending yaar.. But still feel a little incomplete ;) cont sooon hun.::
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww love the parts

finally maan and geet are married
waiting 4 an epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update 🤗
Waiting for the epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 26 & 27 both the part was awesome ..loved it..!
handa family maan ke liye sagun leke aayi hai n engagement ka ring bhi ...
u know what Jo ritual tumne show kiya hai woh hum Bengali's mei bhi hai ..😊
maan apne shona ko miss kar raha hai ...aww...
arjun arohi ki bhi baat ban hi gayi ..avi apne mami ke pass Jana chahata hai ..awww.. apni mamu ke trha 😛
ani ki bhi life set ho rehi hai ...but she is hesitating to move forward ...coz of avi ...
maaneet ki shadi ho gyi finally ..n geet ki welcome bhi ho gyi 😃
maan called geet mishty ...n geet blush..aww 😳
plz epi dena maat bhulna 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely story...love avi how much he loves maan and geet...cannot stay without her now...
The one thing which confuses me is Annie ...that part is incomplete...what did geet tell her to do?

hopefully you will cover that part in the epilogue...want to know what she does with herself and avi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part well written waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb ending
but epilogue toh bnta hai

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