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Brilliant Sarita...superb storyline...read the previous chapters all over again...very beautiful description of Rudra & Myrah's feelings...was deeply engrossed and touched by the way you have penned down ...Myrah had the first glimpse of her life as Paro just before fainting and what an amazing description you have given of that scene...utterly visulistic... I want to applaud you for this story which is beautifully written, deeply touching, powerfully moving chronicle of lives once torn apart that are now on the path to restoration or rather their merging affords us the most enchanted moments we all wanted but couldn't get.
How often do you plan to update ? If possible make the chapters a little longer...sorry for being greedy but what to do...it's so easy to get csrried away when it comes to our eternal soulmate couple.
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