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Posted: 10 years ago
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MehBeer One Shot || Clarity

Her painful moan reverberated as he brusquely pushed her against the wall of her cabin, oblivious to a sharp nail poking out of the wall just millimeters apart from her back.

His scorching auburn orbs racked her trembling stature menacingly, "Bhul chuka hoon main tumhe. Your presence doesn't matter anymore neither does your absence bothers me. Do you get that?" He held her arms in a vile grip and shook her vehemently, accentuating each syllabi. A pitiful whimper escaped her lips as the sharp tip of the nail pierced into the delicate skin of her back. "You mean nothing to me! You. Me. We. Everything is over!"

She clenched her eyes shut as the tears threatened to betray her. Over? Was it so easy for him to forget their cherished past? Was it so easy for him to discard those beautiful moments of passion, of companionship, of... LOVE... just like that? The pain at her back numbed as his words stabbed through her heart. She looked up at him, her eyes frantically searched for a single hint of regret in his cold ones only to find none. Did he ever loved her, even once?

Gulping down the bitter lump of dejection she smiled at him bitterly, "I know my worth in your life. You don't need to remind me." Jerking his hands off her wrist she marched past him.

~ If our love is tragedy...

How dare she ignore him! He turned around furiously to demean her further but his orbs widened as they landed on the crimson blotch on her back. His untamed ire dissipated into thin air as concern replaced it. Was she hurt? He turned towards the wall hysterically, nearly snapping his neck in the process, only to come face to face with the crimson tinged tip of the nail.

Hell no!!!

Before she could cross the threshold of her cabin, he rushed towards her wounded self. Snaking his arms around her waist, he pulled her retreating figure in his embrace with urgency. His frantic fingers fidgeted with the zipper of the dress before tearing it apart. He flinched as he eyed the bloody gash, involuntarily tightening his grip on her waist.

His thumb traced the cut while his eyes welled up. His voice clogged,"You're hurt."

Not as much as you've hurt me! She wanted to scream it on his face but sighed inaudibly. She had enough. Steeling herself to put an end to her misery, she disentangled herself from his choking clasp and faced him only to have her heart clench painfully. There he stood, wailing and sniffing, occasionally rubbing his swollen eyes as fresh tears streamed down the hollow curves of his cheeks.

"That mere chit of a nail, how dare it hurt what's mine! And you! How dare you let it hurt you despite knowing the fact that only I have the right to do so!!", he yelled on her face. She stood there dumbfounded. WHAT! She wanted to snap at him, badly, so- freaking- badly but those puffy red eyes and constantly running nose of his tugged somewhere deep within her.

Turning her back towards himself, he frantically peppered frenzied yet soothing kisses down the entire length of her back while grumbling thousands of ways to sue the nail manufacturing factory.

She internally chuckled at his mood-swings, her pain long forgotten, her heart long healed. So I mean nothing to him, huh? She sighed yet again...

... ... Why are you my remedy ~

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Author's Note:-

Holla folks!

This One Shot is inspired from the scene when a heavily drunk Abeer goes to Meheer's house to confront her and the intimate MehBeer scene that follows had our hearts captive. I had written this One Shot long back but couldn't gather the courage to post it then. So, after being a silent reader for months now, here I am with this small piece of... um... crap, maybe?

Do share your views!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I can just say wow , dear please keep writing
This was amazing believe me I'm spellbounded
Take a bow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its just beautiful...plz write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was nice...!!! keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
This is amazing and I loved the OS.
With Love
Sanju
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do write more !!! it was a fabulous piece!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so very much for publishing this. Because not only does it deserve to be read, it is meant to be acknowledged for its sheer brilliance.👏

There are literary pieces that just grab you and take you into their world. This one did exactly that. I absolutely loved it.

Please do think about writing more pieces. I'm always on the hunt for such amazing works. Like so many others.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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btw, have you written any other ones on Mehbeer before?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey
Tho i don't follow the serial I loved the os
It was beautiful
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Though I don't watch this serial
U hv penned the story beautifully!!😊

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